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Kuushi

@Kuushi

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#851

Awesome update...finally nandini stopped manik and calmed him down..and nandini anger mode just made the monster smile..and the time they spent talking is beautifully penned and they kissed a perfect ending of the chapter..and while this is happening on another end cavya are inching towards eachother and have become friends..and alya with her friends stood up against harshad 👏 love the chapter and your writing..waiting eagerly for the next update please continue soon and thanku for the pm :)

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Sajna2881

@Sajna2881

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Posted: 9 years ago

#852

Very nice and beautiful update...

Manan & cavya very cute...

Nandu calming manik was nice... The way they can under their silence... It was nice...

cavya saying sorry to each other & starting the new friendship... wow...

Manan... first kiss that was awesome...

I like when you give pov of both nandu & manik

Loved the update

thank you... Waiting for ur next...

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Sid

@BrightNSparkle

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#853

Wow you never stop us to surprise us... I enjoyed reading every bit of it... Their class room and the beach and the stars were the perfect to such the kiss. It was a wonderful kiss. So cabir and Navya are friends now...

Thanks for the update and the pm

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NAVYA64

@NAVYA64

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#854

Awesome update

Loved it so much

Good one

Cont soon

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sehrish

@sizzysehrish

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#855

awesome update

loved it a lot

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ayush

@ashi..motu

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#856

Hey manan_kashian..
Update was awesome..
Hayyeee dat kiss is so sweet..
Their first kiss.. Aweee.. Manik asking her to stop him n Nandini granted him permission..
Just loved it..
Update soon next part..
Thanks for pm..
Bye.. Take care..

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manan_0711

@manan_0711

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#857

Ty for d pm...

dat was a really beautiful n magical update...

loved d update to d core...

only nandu can calm down manik...

loved der talk, silence n eyes speaking...

hehe cavya finally r friends...Gud...

loved d way fab3 supported aliya...

loved d beach moments...

manan moments were magical...loved it...

plz continue soon...

'll b waiting for d update...

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Danny92

@Danny92

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#858

Nice update

Alya is so ashamed of harshad nd only because of her ,her frnds r nt dng anything to harshad

Cabir nd navyas frndship this is one thng I like the most other than manik nd nandini

Maniks anger is smtng which is out of control but he controlled it and said sry to nandini the answer given by nandini fr that was super liked it

Thier first kiss its was so sweet

Continue sooonnn

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Fatheen

@fatheen

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#859

Sabse pehle thanku for the pm :*

And now for the update ,, as usual loved it .. It was wonderful dear .. Starting from the MaNan convo , then fab4 and harshad's talk .. Loved how alya took her friends side .. Then CaVya's talk in the car ..

And finally MaNan at beach .. Haaayyeee so romantic .. Manik is soo cute .. He asked to stop him ., Ayoyoyoyoyoyoyo that was wonderful.. And finally they kissed .. Yayayayayayya

Wonderful dear .. Do continue soon ^_^ mmuuuaahhh