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dhillon90

@dhillon90

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Posted: 9 years ago

#831

Amazing
Superb
Fantabulous update
Cabir ne navya ko sorry bola kahin ek aur lov story toh nhi start ho rhi...
Manan kiss was awesome
Manik ne nandu ko apne aap ko stop krne ke liye bola...so sweet...
Manik ke dad ab use tease krne se nhi hatt te hahahaha...
U penned it nicely
Lovd it
Continue soon

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Ananya

@horizontwilight

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Posted: 9 years ago

#832

Manik is thinking why didn't she stop me??!!! Ha ha ha!!!Blissful update!!!loved it!continue soon!

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Saddy12

@Saddy12

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Posted: 9 years ago

#833

Awesome update

Wowww they kissed:):):)

Manik is realllyyy sweet yar

Beach scene was amazing

You nailed it

Cont soon thanks for pm

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Maddy_236

@Maddy_236

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#834

It was awesome supperrbbb

Loved it too much

The kiss was pure bliss

Cavya scene was very nice...finally frns

Thank you for pm...

Cont soon

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tree63

@tree63

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Posted: 9 years ago

#835

Awesome update
The way Nandu calmed Manik...very nice. Only she can calm him down.
Ooo poor Alia!!! I feel bad for her. Harshad is such a jerk. But the face off between Fab4 and Harshad was awesome.
And a new love story brewing up...CaVya...beautiful!!!! I'm loving them coming close slowly. Nice going
And the beach was awesome.
Wooow...Manan first kiss 😳 ...that was unexpected. But so beautiful and pure.
I loved it 👏
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon
Keep smiling

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zarakhanarlover

@zarakhanarlover

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Posted: 9 years ago

#836

Lovely part. Just came to read some of my favourite ff so that it can make me feel better. Plzzz pray for me to get well soon as I am suffering from dengue

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cutypie04

@cutypie04

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#837

Fab update dea. ...

Continue soonnn

Tnx fr d pm

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Chokypie

@Chokypie

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Posted: 9 years ago

#838

Wow...that was awseome...

Manan ever first kiss in the story...

The way you described both their feelings was too good...

Just loved it...

Update faster...

Thank you for PM...😊😳

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anjali

@purswani50

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Posted: 9 years ago

#839

superb update ...
loved it totally..
manan r pure bliss they r so perfect ...
new bonding cavya 😛
Their first kiss superb...
u penned it beautifully...
manan p.o.v' s were Awsm nandini also wanted to kiss him ..
n manik asking for kiss like seriously he asked for her permission but jo bhi h different h n interesting h ...
Thanks for d beautiful update 👏