MaNan New FF- Jab Miley Hum Tum (part17-pg131) Thread#2 link on page 1

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OKAY GUYS, I THOUGHT OF WRITING A NEW FF ON MaNan & FAB5. I DONT GET ENOUGH OF WRITING ON MANAN😊😊 SO HERE IT IS... THOSE WHO WANT PM PLEASE SEND ME PM, AND BUDDY REQ AND THOSE WHO ARE ALREADY IN MY BUDDY LIST THEY'LL BE NOTIFIED ANYHOW😆 DO PRESS LIKE AND COMMENT

MAISHA

JAB DIL MILEY - MaNan & Friendship FF

INTRODUCTION & TRAILER:

S.P.A.C.E -ACADEMY

There was complete pin drop silence in the campus. it was the time for the Inter-college Music talent show's result time. the campus was empty as everybody was in the auditorium.

"And the winner is... FAB5 "

Everybody started to clap and cheer as if they knew the winners are gonna be fab5. they were winning the trophy from the last 3 years. Fab5 was the most famous music band of the county. it was a band of five friends studying in SPACE , friends with no benefits rather than connected to each others heart. Alya, Mukti, Druv , Cabir & Manik. There was none who didnt know about their friendship. Even the teachers, principal knew the bond between them. they are friends from childhood. Studying in SPACE academy the most famous college of INDIA, Second year. Before joining the college music was only their passion and hobby but after joining the college they made their passion their ambition and created FAB5. apart from mumbai, they have also done concerts in Bangalore, Delhi, Pune & many more. Each of them are fascinated towards different instruments.

Starting from Cabir, he is the drummer of the band. The fun loving guy and the most mischevious student of the college. He loved to play pranks but not those type of pranks which would hurt ones emotions. The one who is always lighting up the situations and working as the "Idea" man.. A true friend indeed who is always available even if none doesnt need him.

Next, comes Alya. Alya Saxena the diva of S.P.A.C.E.. even if half of the boys of the college have been slapped by her still they dont stop roaming after her and never give up to impress her. But it seems to be an impossible thing to win Alyas heart because her world is a limited edition starting from her friends and also ends to them. she is the keyboard player who plays amazing tunes enhancing the beauty of the song

If Alya is the diva, then Mukti is the "daring diva" of SPACE. no one dares to mess with her. if someone even proposes her she makes sure to teach him a good lesson. Love doesnt exist in her dictionary. She is fond of Bikes, Discos , Parties , Music and her Friends. The metalic Guitarist of Fab5. None knows her better than Alya cause she is her soul sister. Only alya knows the real mukti who breaks down infront of her..

Druv is the sweetest guy of the college. In the college he is the only guy with whom no one has any sort of issues. The one for whom rest of the four are mostly concerned. He is the second guitarist of Fab5. He lives with cabir in an apartment. His life also resembles his friends only. But there is someone whom he considers his parents, brother, sister and his buddy... Manik

Manik Malhotra.. He is the combination of Cabir, Alya, Mukti & Druv. the prankstar full of attitude and style, No one dares to mess with him or his friends. If anyone does then he is surely to be admitted in the hospital or considered dead. Druv is his buddy, loves him like his child whereas cabir is his mirror version. though alya has a crush on manik and everyone knows about it including manik too, but each and every person knows that manik malhotra has never fell in love. for manik, love is his friends.He flirted with girls but never dated any of them.. his parents got divorced when he was only ten. basically he lives with his dad for the world but for himself he lives alone. his mom married another guy so he hates her. his dad loves him very much and has provided him with each and every kind of luxuries and riches except time and love for which maniks desires most. Manik is the lead singer and guitarist of Fab5.

Little did they knew that the upcoming "Freshers Party" would bring some new fresh memories in their lives ...

Scene shifts to the railway station of Mangalore. two girls sitting on the bench drinking tea and chitchatting with eachother. One of the girls was continuously doing her bakbak while the other one was staring at the sky..looking at the stars. the girl who was doing bakbak had a ponytail made and wearing a yellow salwar suit and the other one with long opened hair wearing a pink kurti with jeans and stole ..

"hum tujse baat karraheha aur tu ha ke asmaan ko dekhe jarahiha?? tu sun bhi rahi ha ke ma kya kehrahiho???"

"tu peechle ek haftese yehi bakbak karrahiha..ke hum mumbai jaraheha. hum mumbai jarahahe." said the girl wearing pink kurti.

"kyu tujhe excitement nahi horahiha?? hum dono mumbai jaraheha finally pagal aur uparse india ke sabse famous SPACE me humhe scholarship mila ha... by god mujhe toa abhi bhi yakeen nahi horaha ha" said the yellow salwar suit girl

"accha tu yehi beth main chai wale bhaiya ko paise deke ati hu"

"tujhe kaise samjhayu ke mujhe kyu itni bechani horahiha.esa lagraha ha ke mumbai jakar sab badal jayega, pata nahi hum jiss umeed se waha jaraheha woh puri hogi ke nahi. Ayippa... please give me strength ke main apne pairo pe khari hosaku, apne appa amma ka sapna pura karsaku aur apne bhai ko phirse theek kar saku" the girl wearing pink kurti joined her hands and prayed looking up at the sky. Suddenly the girl wearing yellow kameez rushed to her saying the train has arrived and both of them along with a young boy of their age get inside the train. the pink girl turns around a last time and smile "Ayippa bless me"


INDEX:

PART 1-PAGE 7

PART 2-PAGE 13

PART 3-PAGE 19

PART 4-PAGE 23

PART 5-PAGE 29

PART 6-PAGE 37

PART 7-PAGE 43

PART 8-PAGE 52

PART 9-PAGE 59

PART 10-PAGE 66

PART 11-PAGE 74

PART 12-PAGE 83

PART 13-PAGE 92

PART 14-PAGE 101

PART 15-PAGE 111

PART 16-PAGE 121

PART 17-PAGE 131

LINK OF THREAD #2

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4494623

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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome
nice start...beautiful concept
congratulations dear for ur new story...
loved the introduction part a lot
continue soon
take care
thanks a lot for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome prolong dear ... As ur just married wala ff is totally awesome yaarr...

So this one is also interesting & that much awesome I know it...

[B][/B][I][/I]interesting start waiting for d chapter keep updating
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EID MUBARAK..

spl wala thnks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice actually the way u described it formed a film scene in my !mind from the intro of fab5 to the station about nandini and navya, will be looking forward to the story...
Great job
Continue soon
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superb start... 👏 👏 👏
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JUST LOVE IT PLZZZ UPLOAD SOON
BUT DONT FORGET TO UPLOAD JUST MARRIED
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Nice one dear continue soon n yeah plz pm me
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awww congrtazzz for d new start of a new stroy👍🏼 really love d start❤️ luking forward to read ds story😃😃
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Great. Waiting for manik n nandini meet.
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Fantastic start
continue soon
Thanks for PM

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