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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely part. Alya saved Nandani. I hope they become Friends.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey dear
Actually u send me a pm of this story lol but I never read this story
I actually only read just married of urs but must say somehow it got me curios n I started reading it from the beginning n I loved it to much..just love the chemistry between manik n nandini its too good...n loving all the characters like seriously n story is good too! So age se do send me a pm caus I will be looking forward to it!
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Posted: 9 years ago
It was amazing wonderful chapter
I didn't expect to turn out this way
Well I loved it
U turned the tables with Aliya being a Gud person with Nandini wow
Well I can't wait to see Wht will happen next
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update girl. Wen u really want something n u have put enough of efforts for it then any how u get der. Some or other always becomes d instrument for it. D way it happened to nandani 😛. Harshad plan always back fired.lolzzz n now he is gonna face our hulk.n yes the most awaited 1 date of manan. Eagerly waiting for it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
m so sorry like really sorry for commenting so late ...
coming to the update .. it was awesome as always ..u wrote manik,s care nd nandini's vulnerability so beautifully... this harshad is such a pain how could he stoop so low .. poor nandu.. bt finally fab 5 and nandu having no issues with each other ...
omg manik was so angry what will he do now??? where he want to take nandu after performance?? lots of questions are there
wonderful update plz cont. soon
ty for pm nd sry for commenting so late
lots of love
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Posted: 9 years ago
alya saved her ...awesome dear ...harshad don't be jerk
fab 5 n nandani r together that what matter the most
ty for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
Loved it thnx for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
When u gonna update new chapter?
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Posted: 9 years ago

PART 17

His eyes were red, anger on his face , his hands fisted were searching for his face to smash off.. but

n=manikk

finally she found him. but he didnt pay heed to her voice and again started to look for Harshad. nandini also followed him and grabbed his arm and within a second he jerked her hand off

m=dont try to stop me nandini.. just dont... i'll kill that b*****d

n=manik please calm down ek bar meri baat sunlo..please just once

m=nandini tum

nandini pulled him inside a classroom and locked the door.

n=manik just listen to me once.. i know ke tum gussa ho bohot zyada but just tell me ke ab gussa karke kya fayda?? sab theek ha ab manik ., khamakha bat ko barhakar koi fayda nahi ha manik

m=fayda??? how can u even say this?? that sc******l stooped so low, mujhse revenge lenekeliye tumhe use kiya, he wants to take revenge na?? himmat hain to face me off.. kaha ha woh.. main usse

n=manik just stop it please

this time nandini too raised her voice a bit and he ran his fingers through his hair because of his frustration. his anger frustration was not just calming down and next what he did was the bench right in front of his eyes...BANGG .. nandini closed her eyes because she was scared of the sudden fall of bench. he took the white board rubber and throwed it on the window and the glass broke

n=manik stop it !!!!

...

a=um ashamed of u bhai.. like seriously how can u even do this bhai??? just because u wanted to take revenge from manik apne yeh sab kiya?? bhai... apke andar sari humanity mar gayi ha kya??

h=ALYA!!!

mu=harshad [mukti comes in between] dont shout... chillana humhe bhi ata ha??

dr=par humari sharafat ha and just because ur alya's brother hum kuch nahi karte

a=guys.. its all entire my fault i always thought ke someday, he would become my older bhai, just the way he was.. but i was wrong completely

h=alya u should not have come in between this...

a=i am always with them bhai and will remain always cause yeh sab mere true friends ha , they love and care for me.. not like you. apke kehne aur bharkanepar maine pehle bhi nandini ko bohot kuch ulta seedha bola tha, but aj... chi bhai..

h=alyaa !!!

he was about to raise his hand but druv and cabir stood in between

c=for the first and last time samjha raha hu, dont try to harm or hit alya. just because we dont say anything iska yeh matlab nahi hai ke tujhse darte ha. just because we dont let manik hit u iska yeh matlab nahi ha ke we are afraid of the circumstances.. hum isiliye kuch nahi karte kyuki badkismatise alya teri behen ha aur hum sab keliye alya bohot maine rakhti ha... so sharafat se kehraha hu,get out from here before manik digs ur grave right here .. just leave harshad

...

manik was sitting on one of the benches inside the classroom and nandini was sitting beside him. from the last 20 minutes he was sitting quietly , anger flashing through his eyes. she didnt say anything or asked him to say anything to her rather waiting for him to talk by his own. finally he broke the silence

m=sorry..

she looked at him with a confusing look. why was he saying to her?? what was his fault? this guy surely made her confused all the time

n=manik tum kyu sorry bol raheho?? tumhari kya galti ha??

m=um the one to be blamed for ur every problems...

he got up from his seat and went towards the door

m=jabse is college me ayi ho..meri wajase har bar tumhe problems horahiha. starting from the freshers party, harshad ke sath encounter, alya ke tumhe bhala bura sunana and today... yeh sab, um sorry nandini main..

she turned him around and put her palm on his face

n=ekdam chup... ek aur word nahi bolna abhi tum

he stood there like a numb. she slowly removed her hand, now her eyes had anger

n=why do u think ke tumhari wajase mujhe problem hogi??? kyu tumhe esa lagta ha?? tumne yeh kehdiya ke shuru se mujhe tumhari wajase pareshani horahiha par tum yeh nahi samajhte ke tumhari wajase meri har problem ka solution mujhe milta ha.. tumne humesha meri help ki ha. tum woh insaan ho manik jo bahar se sakht dikhate ho par andar se kisika dard, asoon tumse nahi saha jata. tumne meri problems ka haal dhunda ha, mujhe job chahiye thi tumne meri lie library assistant ki job fix kardi, mujhe goons se bachaya, talent parade me aj jo main yeh performer of the year ban payi hu just because tum mere mentor the.. so dont u dare think ever ke tumhari wajase mujhe pareshani hoti ha..samjhe tum?? dont u dare !!!

finally his famous smirk appeared on his face hearing all those so-call threats from her. she lowered her voice and gaze when she realized how frank and direct she was in front of him . she stepped a little back and began to look here and there. manik smiled to his own and stepped a bit forward towards her.

m=bahar chalen???

she looked at him and finally after a long time he was now normal

...

navya was standing at the college gate when cabir and mukti comes.

mu=navya ghar nahi gayi tum???

na=ha woh bass jahi rahithi..koi auto nahi mil raha tha..

mu=oww.. mujhe toa ek zaruri kamse jana ha warna main tumhe drop kardeti

na=are nahi mukti..thanks i'll manage on my own

c=its okay mukti..tu ja, main chordunga madhubala ko

navya looked at cabir with a surprising look

mu=okay cool... kal milte hain bye

after mukti leaves cabir and navya look at eachother with an awkward look

na=umm..thanks but its okay main chali jaungi

c=look.. mumbai me aye hue kafi din tumhe hogaye ha and i guess tumne suna hoga ke shamke bad, this area is not safe, specially for girls moreover tumhara ghar jahapar hain waha har dusre din accidents hote hain..so dont argue chalo mere sath i'll drop u home

...

Manik and nandini were sitting in manik's car. there was complete silence inside the car. nandini was playing with the corner of her dupatta and looking outside the window. on the other hand manik was looking straight towards the road. suddenly manik's phone ring

m=yes dad

rohit=manik..kaha ho beta??? performance ke bad couldnt meet u...

m=dad..woh..um main zara bahar hu kamse... kuch important kaam ha

rohit=owww... so another hot chocolate date right?

m=dad..please not again

rohit=accha chill.. take car and have fun.main ghar jaraha hu and i guess tumse raatko mulakat nahi hone wali,

m=esa kuch nahi ha dad... ap rest karo ghar jakar.. will catch u later

rohit=okay son, bye

m=bye dad.

...

cabir was driving the car with full concentration and navya was sitting beside him trying to figure out the sudden change in both of them. cabir knew what exactly she was thinking but none of them began the talk. cabir parked the car outside navya's apartment but none of them got down from the car. finally cabir began

c=wohh... actually itne dinotak jo bhi shetaniya ki hain aur jo bhi kaha...umm bura mat manna... and um sorry

Sorry?? did cabir vardhan said sorry to navya naveli?? navya burst out in laughter and cabir was like Ya ya okay... not so funny

c=ab itna bhi bad joke nahi tha

na=like seriously?? cabir ... finally a sorry??

c=ha toa.. main koi ek villain thori nah hu?? galti ki thi manliya mane... so sorry???

na=its okay... and um too sorry maine bhi gusseme shayed kabhi kabhi kuch zyada chillaya tha tumpar

c=its okay

na=friends???

cabir smiled and shook hands with her

...

after a half an hour drive manik stopped his car in front of the beach. he got down from the car and opened the passenger door for nandini. she got down from the car without asking any questions. he was feeling a bit hesitant but still gathering courage he forwarded his hand . it was not the first time she would hold his hand but it was not like the other random times when he asked her hand out.

m=chalein??

he asked in a polite tone and she put her hand on his with a gentle smile. he lead her towards the sea. the beach was complete deserted place.. there was nobody except them. the sound of the seashores hitting the rocks.. the cool breeze hitting the duo. their hands entwined and both walking in a sync looking down and stealing glances from each other. manik noticed her she was having problem to walk on the sand wearing those heals.

m=ek minute

he said finally breaking the silence. she stopped and looked at him with a blank question look

m=sandle utarlo.. otherwise u will have difficulties in case of walking

saying he bent down and undid his own shows and put them aside on the sand. watching him doing so nandini too opened her sandles and put them aside. both again started to walk.

n=pata ha manik... mumbai me aneke bad yeh pehli bar mane beach dekha ha.. itne kareeb se... kitni shanti ha yaha.. kitna sukoon milta ha yahapar

this time nandini started to speak. he smiled listening to her words

m=i know..yeh meri favourite jagah ha. jab bhi kuch lone time spend karneko jee karta ha raatko yaha ajata hu.

saying he removed his shoes and lied down on the sand staring at the stars. nandini smiled and she too lied down beside him looking at him

n=why are u staring at the stars?

m=stars... yeh humesha se hi meri favourite rahe hain, my best friends are they

nandini looked at the stars and then again at manik

n=why are u so attached with the stars??

m=i dont know... bachpan se hi i love them. this place, these stars.. tumhe pata ha nandini, bachpan se abtak mane bohot kuch change hote dekha hain, bohot logoko dekha ha badalte hue but these stars.. this place... these are ,were and will always be the same... and thats why i love them. they are pure and pretty.

nandini smiled watching this new side of manik. behind this arrogant, aggressive and rude boy there was a guy with a pure heart. she didnt know why she slowly holded his right hand with her left one. manik smiled without looking at their entwined hands and made the grip a bit tighter

suddenly a big wave came and splashed at the bank of the beach.. water droplets hit faces of manik and nandini...both smiled and closed their eyes. manik opened his eyes and looked at nandini... under the open sky, moonlit making her glow even more with the wet strands of hair coming over her eyes.. he forgot to breathe.. how angelic she was looking he thought. manik slowly turned towards her and touched her cheeks with his fingers and made her look into his eyes. nandini could feel his eyes on her even when her eyes were closed. her lips were shaking and an unknown blushed appeared around her lips.

m=meri taraf dekho nandini..

his voice was ever so gentle and polite filled with intensity.. she slowly opened her eyes and saw his gaze stuck over her.. manik slowly came a bit closer not moving his eyes from her... he caressed her cheeks with his thumb and kissed her forehead. nandini closed her eyes, her hand slowly holded the collar of his coat

Nandini's POV :

his each and every touch was so much filled with care and.. and love?? i dont know but it was something special.. the butterflies running in my stomach, those goosebumps were surely happening for the first time. his lips leaving unforgetable effect on my body. his lips... i wish they would not leave my skin ever.. hang on hang on, what am i thinking??? nandini murthy u are going crazy.. this guy has made me crazy.. the first time ever in my life someone kissed me, touched me like this. his hands travelling from my arm to my shoulder to my cheeks, i love that touch, He kissed my eyes !! his eyes filled with care and emotions, i never saw manik looking at me like this before, how he is caressing my lips, hang on where are we heading?? my first kiss?? his eyes, that sweetest smirk on his lips... he is coming closer, even more closer... his lips touched mine but... "Nandini, stop me " .. i opened my eyes and looked at him. he was asking me to stop him??? but why?? none of us moved an inch from our positions or moved our gaze from eachother . " Stop me, or else i wont be able to stop myself from kissing you" he said looking deep into my eyes.. i literally jumped inside myself, none will believe his this side, which i saw right now, the Manik Malhotra, for whom girls drool over or should i say even die, who hangs around with girls but do not touch or kiss any of them,. he is asking me to stop him or else we might end kiss??? like seriously, now a days which guy asks permission?? this boy was seriously a package full of mystery, he had so many sides , faces and i loved each and every side.

Manik's POV:

I didnt want to kiss her without her permission, and watching us i could clearly imagine were we might end up, but what the hell, why was not she stopping me? i dont want to do anything right now so that later on something bad happens between us, i like being with her, she is special, she thinks im special for her, we like each others company... for the first time i liked a girl, praised her, according to dad and cabir i was changing towards her, was i really?? i dont know.. but she was something that i didnt want to lose.. but right now, i asked her to stop me. but nandini, why wasnt she saying anything?? our eyes were talking to each other instead of our words.. but wait.. i didnt expect what was happening now, her fingers travelling from my collar to my cheeks... how i loved her milky touch on my body.. she didnt stop??? her hands went to my hair, this was surely something i didnt expect,did she want this?? i dont know.. but now i was not able to stop myself anymore or should i say, she was asking me to go on.. she slowly pulled me a bit closer to herself.. a bit more.. a bit more.. finally... our lips touched each other. Our very first kiss. none of us asked for dominance rather our lips moved in the same sync .. slowly yet beautifully. it started in a slow motion and i really didnt want her to scare the very first time.. but yes it was sure, her lips tasted delicious, i kissed her again and again until i chewed away her strawberry flavoured lip gloss. she seemed to not mind it, her fingers ruffling my hair slowly. i didnt realize when one of my hands travelled to her back and another one went to her nape. i pulled her a bit more closer to deepen the kiss , God none of us wanted to break it .. surely it was the best moment of us till now, it was OUR moment

Edited by MaNan_KaShian - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
interesting update.
hope manik and nandini will have more moments like these.

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