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Posted: 10 years ago
Wooowww...

Its so cuttteee

Specially that child

Ccchhhooo cuuuttteee
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Posted: 10 years ago
It was mind blowing...what an update seriously... manik and nandini feeling wach other's pain... both remembering their special moments and then feeling hurt for staying away from each other for 4 long years...it was hard for both... then when the song ended nandini searching for manvi while manvi reached to thr stage...seeing manvi hurt manik too was in pain...it was a blissful sight...both unknown to each other yet sooo close to the heart...and atlast nandini in front of manik...and manik got to know that manvi is his daughter...sooo many questions in his mind but no answers...he's been waiting to know the answers since ages...and both sobbing...one who was hurt and one who was hurt for hurting her love...and their cute romantic scene though in pain yet soo much love despite of what had happened... this is what is called TRUE LOVE... Uh are a natural...such a wonderful writer...such a beautiful story...uh are an excellent thinker...what a storyline... brilliant work... thank uh soo much for the pm...really appreciate it...please update real soon...I'm waiting sooo eagerly...keep it up...best wishes... :) :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sooo cuteee I loved the banner 👏 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Dis prt was jst out of d box...so intense nd emotinal...manvi called him papa ...awww..so cute she is... 😊 nd manan part ws jst awesome...i wished ki u wud hv revealed d secret...plz jldi reveal it na i cnt wait 😭 i really luvd dis prt...u r an awesome writr...thnx fr updting regularly nd post d nxt prt lso soon na...plz plzz...i really luv ur all ss...nd yeah d banner is so cute nd perfect..i luvd it too 😛 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
So cute...manik smiling seeing her daughtr..awww... 😊 nd manvi in red frock...her fav na i remembr...so cute nd nandu z also luking so cute...ovr all d banner z jst awesome nd so cute..i really luvd it... 😳
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awww😳😳 simply loved d banner😳😳 manik with his cute little family☺️ congratulations for d new n frst banner🤪
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Amazing story ... I love manvi. . Omg she is damn cute the way she talks in her improper language sho shweet...
beautifully penned down
plz pm me if possible
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Posted: 10 years ago
Omg...I'm crying terribly...
It was soon emotional..

But our manvi is smart... She's already aware :P

Please continue soon :)
Lot's of looove!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Plzzz update na yaar eagerly waiting for it man ...n u are a great writer ... I love tum mile... n then I started reading this ... u are just fab ... love u n love all ur writing work
U r awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Chapter 4 A


"Friend you ale(are) my papa hai na?" Manvi asked Manik in a serious tone and Manik's eyes widened with shock.


"How do you know?" That's all he could managed to say.


"I know..!! I know since the vely filst(very first) day we meet..!!" Manvi told him in a serious tone and Manik was hell shocked.


"You knew..!!"Manik asked in a shocked tone and Manvi bobbed her head in a yes."But how bacha?"


"Because of this tie blacelet..!!(bracelet)..!!"Manvi said touching the tie pendant in his hand and Manik was quiet. "Mama told me that Papa had gifted hel(her) this blacelet..!! And my Papa also have a one in his light(right) hand..!! So the day we meet na I saw this blacelet in youl(your) hand..!! I was sule(sure)..!! That you ale(are) my Papa..!!"Manvi told Manik innocently and tears rolled of Manik's cheeks. "Why ale(are) you clying(crying) Papa..!!" Manvi asked worriedly and she wiped his tears with her tiny fingers. "Mano hate teals(tears) Papa..!!" Manvi said smilingly and Manik took her in a bone crushing hug to which she co-operated equally. Nandini was watching all this from her kitchen window. She too was sobbing badly.


"Papa ab ap nahi jao gay na mjy aul(aur) Mama tou(ko) chool(choor) kay?" Suddenly Manvi asked innocently.


"No bacha..!! Papa will never ever leave you and Mama alone now..!!" Manik said wiping his tears and plastering a smile on his face.


"Plomish..!!" Manvi asked excitedly.


"Paka promise..!!" Manik said smilingly and kissed her forehead.


"Papa you na sit hele(here)..!! I'll show you my toys..!!" Suddenly Manvi remembered that she didn't showed Manik her toys. She run in her room and brought a big teddy bear. Manik was just admiring his little love. The teddy bear was double the size of Manvi she dragged him towards Manik using her full force. At last she reached Manik and showed him her teddy.


"Papa..!! Meet Max..!! Max he is my Papa..!! And he is back flom(from) the big city..! Now he will live with us..!! And you know Max Papa ny plomish(promise) kiya hai the he will nevel(never) leave us alone..!!" Manvi introduced her teddy Max with Manik moreover she told Max everything as if he was really listening to her. Manik was just staring at her in disbelief how much innocent she was.


"Papa say hello to Max..!! Walna wo nalaz ho jye da(Papa say hello to Max or else he will become angry)..!!" Manvi whispered in Manik's ear as if trying her best that Max don't hear what she was saying to Manik. Manik hide his smile and nodded.


"Hi Max..!!" Manik said to teddy and shook hand with him. Manvi became too much happy and she clapped her hands,jumping in excitement. She again run in her room to bring more toys. Nandini had gathered all her toys in a big basket. Manvi tried to drag it but it was too much heavy. She frowned and came out of her room. Manik was waiting for her that she will bring more toys but seeing her empty handed he became confuse.


"Manvi..!! What happened? Where are your toys?" Manik asked and went close to her. She was standing in her room door with frowny expressions.


"Wo Papa toy basket is vely(very) heavy..!!" Manvi told him her confusion and Manik understood her confusion.


"Ok..!! Papa will help you bacha..!!" Manik said lovingly poking her nose and she again jumped in excitement.Nandini was watching all this smilingly and was preparing the dinner for both Papa and bacha..!! They must be hungry.

By applying a little force picked up the basket in his hands and came out in lounge. He placed the basket on the floor. Manvi was more than happy now.


"Papa..!! You ale my supelhelo..!!(you are my superhero)..!!" Manvi shouted in

excitement and hopped in his arms. Manik smiled on seeing his angel so happy.


"Papa...!! Sit down..!!" Manvi ordered him and Manik quietly obeyed. The Manik Malhotra was sitting on the floor..!! Just to make his angel happy..!! Miracle it was..!! Now Manvi was showing him all her toys. Disney characters soft toys. Loony toons soft toys. Moreover she showed him barbie doll, with her prince Ken and a baby doll.


"Ya Mama..!!"Manvi told Manik pointing towards the Barbie doll. "Ya Papa..!!" She said pointing towards Ken. "Aur ya Manvi..!!" She again said pointing towards the baby doll. "Complete family..!! Ha na Papa..!!" Manvi asked Manik with shiny eyes and he nodded. Soon Manvi filled Manik's lap with her toys. Manik was co-operating with her with all his love. After she showed him all his toys Manik shoved all the toys away and pull her in his lap. Manik kissed her whole face lovingly and she too kissed his cheeks. She rested her head on his chest and Manik encircled his arms around her. He just wanted to feel her close to him.


"Papa...!! Mama nay bola tha that you will bling(bring) a big wali doll fol(for) me..!! Whele(where) is my doll?" Suddenly Manvi asked Manik and Manik didn't had any answer he was too much embarrassed. Meanwhile Nandini came and sat beside them. Manik was finding the answer but Nandini started.


"Mano..!! Papa tou doll lany waly thy but myny mana kar diya..!!" Nandini said and Manvi made a sad face.


"Why Mama..!!"Manvi asked sadly and Manik was looking at Nandini how brilliantly she was covering him.


"Because myny socha kay Manvi khud Papa kay sath ja kar apni pasand ki doll lay ge tou ziada acha rahy ga ni?" Nandini said smilingly and this idea clicked Manvi.


"Yes yes..!! Gleat(great) idea..!!"Manvi exclaimed.


"So Papa ap Manvi ko lay kar jayen gay na..!!" Nandini asked smilingly to Manik.


"Of course..!! Tomorrow we will go to toy shop and jo bhi toy Manvi ko pasand aye ga we will buy it ok..!!" Manik told Manvi and she was too much excited once again.


"I love you Papa..!! I love you Mama..!!" She shouted happily and MaNan smiled.


"Ok Manvi..!! Papa ko dinner table par lay kar aa jaoa..!!"Nandini told Manvi and she herself run to the kitchen to hide her tears.


"Ok Papa.!! Time for dinner..!!"Manvi told Manik and he got up with Manvi in his arms.


"Chalo let's eat..!!" Manik walked towards the kitchen.


"Uffooo Papa..!!"Manvi shouted angrily.


"Now what bacha?" Manik asked worriedly.


"Ap ko Granny nay nahi sikhaya?"Manvi scolded him.


"Granny?"Manik asked in a confusing tone.


"Alay..!! Ap ki Mama..!! Meli granny..!!"Manvi explained and Manik smiled. He wanted to laugh but Manvi was already angry.


"Kya nahi sikhaya bacha?" Manik asked in a serious tone.


"Kay always wash youl(your) hands befole(before) eating..!!"Manvi told him sadly. "Papa..!! Mjy q ap ko hal baat sikhana palti hai? (Papa why do I have to teach you everything?)..!" Manvi said sadly patting her forehead. She was really sad that her Papa don't know anything about manners.


"Ab kya karoon Bacha..!! I need your help..!! Ap sikhaoa ge mjy sb kuch?"Manik asked sadly hiding his smile he was playing along.


"Don't be sad Papa..!! Main hoon na..!! I will teach you everything..!!"Manvi said cupping his cheeks and Manik couldn't resist himself but to kiss her cheeks hard. Then Manvi instructed him about the directions of bathroom. Then she told Manik how to wash hands. Manik was really very much impressed by Manvi's manners. He must say Nandini had taught Manvi very good manners. Finally they reach the dinner table Nandini was already waiting for them. She smiled seeing them both. Manvi sat in Manik's lap.


"Wow..!! Pasta..!!" Manvi exclaimed and Manik noticed the dishes on the table. Pasta,Chocolate mousse,Chocolate pie everything was his favorite. "So she remembers..!!" Manik thought smilingly.


"You know Papa..!! All these dishes are my favorite..!!" Manvi told Manik excitedly and Manik was just smiling. "Papa we will eat in the same plate..!!" Manvi said to him and Manik was going all awe on his sweetie pie.


"Ok bacha..!!" Manik said poking her nose and she laughed. Nandini was just watching the bond between them. They both hardly met each other few days ago and were acting like they knew each other since ages. Someone quoted it true Blood relations are worth..!! They can never be separated..!!

Manik dished out some pasta in a plate and he was about to take first bite when Manvi again stopped him.


"Papa..! Why are you eating with left hand?" Manvi asked innocently and Manik smiled seeing Nandini.



Edited by Mawara_Ejaz - 10 years ago

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