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Yr pls update the next part soon...
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Plz yaar update jaldhi na...
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You wrote so well 😊.I have a suggestion can you include this song in this: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3d7rwQ2w9Kg
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See Monday bhi ho gaya aab to post kardo...U had told that u will post on Sunday :( Pls do hurry
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Chapter 2 A


"Manvi Malhotra..!!" Manik again whispered her name while his way back to hotel. He was continuously smiling on her cuteness. A very precious and loving memory was attached to the name MANVI.


Flashback


"Nandini I have decided..!!" Manik said excitedly and put his head in Nandini's lap.


"What is decided?" Nandini asked lovingly ruffling his hair. It was 1st week of their marriage.


"Name..!!" Manik said excitedly.


"What name?" Nandini become confused.


"Aray..!! Name of our baby..!!" Manik said casually and hearing that blood rushed in Nandini's cheeks and she instantly started blushing. She pushed Manik away and got down of the bed. She tried to run from there but in vain..!! Manik had caught her hand tightly.He was still laying down on the bed. He pull her and she fell over his chest. She was red tomato due to shyness and Manik was completely enjoying her state. She had her eyes closed and was breathing very heavily.


"Nandini..!! Open your eyes..!! Look at me..!!"Manik whispered in her ears seductively. Nandini was blushing hard due to Manik's such a bold proposal. She shyly opened her eyes and Manik flipped on the bed. He pinned her under him.


"So shy haan? Don't you want our baby..!!" Manik said naughtily.


"Manik..!! Aisa nahi hai..!!" Nandini merely whispered.


"Then ask me..!!" Manik again whispered seductively and bite Nandini's neck to which she moaned and clutched his hands tightly.


"Manik..!!" Nandini whispered.


"Ask me..!!" Manik again said and locked his lips with hers. Nandini's hands traveled in his hair. Manik kissed her hard and bite her lips. She moaned and Manik started tasting her mouth. They broke apart after a long time gasping for air. Nandini's lips were swollen now Manik dived in the space between her neck and shoulder he relished her sweetly yet passionately. Nandini was not in her senses now. She was completely lost in the Love Land of her Manik. Manik slowly undressed her kissing her each and every inch. He showered her with his love taking best care not to hurt her. After that he carefully gathered her in his arms and she rested her head on his chest.


"I love you Manik..!!" Nandini whispered lovingly in his ears.


"Manik loves you more jaan..!!" Manik said kissing her hair. "Acha..!! Tum nay name nahi pocha?" He was again excited and Nandini again blushed.


"Manik..! Abhi aisa kuch hai he nahi tum pehly he name soch lar kya karo gay?" Nandini said playing with his fingers.


"Tou ho jye ga..!!" Manik said naughtily and winked. Nandini rolled her eyes balls.


"You are impossible Manik..!!" Nandini said poking his nose.


"Haan wo tou hoon..!! But ask me na please..!!" Manik pleaded like a baby and Nandini smiled.


"Ok tell me?" Nandini asked encircling her arms around his neck.


"Yeah..!! We will have a baby girl..!!" Manik said excitedly and Nandini nodded.


"And we will name her Manvi..!!" Manik told her and she smiled.

...

Present


"What a coincidence..!!" Manik smiled to himself and entered his room. Cabir was already sitting there and was playing some game on his phone. He saw Manik smiling after so long. He too smiled.


"Wow Manik..!! Bohat khush lag raha hai?" Cabir asked as Manik lay down on the bed beside him.


"Yup..!! I am very happy..!!" Manik smiled brightly and Cabir was overwhelmed by his confession.


"Great..!! What is the reason of happiness bro?" Cabir asked winking naughtily.


"Bta doon ga..!! Whats so hurry?" Manik said smilingly and closed his eyes.Cabir nodded but suddenly he got glimpse of Manik's jacket which was almost ruined because of chocolate.


"Oye..!! Tjy chocolate khana nahi aata? Why you wiped your hands with this jacket? You know na how much expensive it was we bought it from Thailand...!!" Cabir almost shouted as he was really very sad seeing so expensive jacket ruined this much.


"Relax..!! It wasn't precious for me..!! But now it is very precious..!!" Manik said calmly and once again Manvi's face roamed in his mind.


"Ok..!! Give it me..!! I will give it for laundry...!!" Cabir said pulling the jacket but suddenly Manik slapped his hands.


"Don't you dare touch it..!!" Manik shouted angrily and Cabir was taken aback.


"Why? Tjy clean nahi krna isy?" Cabir asked in a surprising tone.


"No..!!" Manik said coldly and Cabir didn't argued further.

...

Nandini was feeding Manvi her favorite Pasta and Manvi was quiet which was very unusual. Actually Manvi was thinking about Manik. She was in a fix whether to tell Nandini about Manik or not.


"Mama..!!" Manvi called her lovingly. She was laying over Nandini.


"G Mama ki jano?" Nandini asked lovingly adjusting her hair.


"Wo aj palk(park) main..!!" Manvi started hesitantly she wanted to tell her about Manik but "What if Mama nay mjy un untal shay milny tou mana tal diya?(What if Mama nay mjy un uncle say milnay ko mana kar diya?) I want to meet him again..!!" Manvi's tiny head gave her a cute explanation and she decided to hide her uncle from her Mama.


"Say na Mano? Kya park me?" Nandini asked when she saw Manvi lost in thoughts.


"Wo..!! Today I enjoyed a lot..!!" Manvi diverted the topic.


"Ohh..! Good..!!" Nandini smilingly nodded.


"Mama...!! Bedtime Story?" Manvi asked and Nandini nodded.


"Once upon a time..!!" Nandini started telling the story and soon Manvi was fast asleep. Nandini noticed her and she kissed Manvi's forehead.


"Manik..!! Tell me a story..!!" Her own voice echoed in her ears.


"Story? Are you serious Nandini..!!" Manik's laughing voice echoed.


"Please..!!" She pleaded.


"Ok ok..!!" Manik's love voice echoed.


"Manik..!! I am sorry..!! But I had to leave you..!! For you..!! For me..!! For Manvi..!! For us..!! If I hadn't left you na..!! Tou Manvi aj is duniya main nahi hoti..!! I am so sorry..!!" Nandini thought to herself and tears rolled down Nandini's cheeks.

...

Next day luckily Fab5's concert was in day time as always they rocked the floor. All of them were hell tired. Mukti, Alya, Dhruv and Cabir were lying lifeless on the bed. They were talking to each other but Manik was getting ready to go out. He wore the same jacket of yesterday.


"Tu kahan ja raha? Aren't you tired?" Mukti asked as he was about to step out of the room.


"Umm..!! Just going to get some fresh air..!!" Manik asked casually and almost run out of the room to avoid further questions. He was just praying to God that Manvi must come today.

...

Here Manvi was trying her best that Nandini shouldn't come to Park with her because if she will come with her it will become impossible for Manvi to meet her uncle.

"Mama..!! You seems tiled(tired)..!!" Manvi said with faking sadness.


"Yes I am but a little..!! I can come with you in the park..!!"Nandini said smilingly and Manvi become worried.


"Think Mano..!! Think..!!" Manvi was thinking something sucking her left hand thumb that suddenly Nandini's cell phone rang.


"Hello Sir..!! Yes Sir..!! Oh really? Ok..!! I am coming..!!" Nandini talked on the phone and hearing that Nandini was going somewhere Manvi's face lit up. Nandini hung up the phone.


"What happened Mama?" Manvi asked curiously.


"Sorry Mano..!! Principal sir has called me..!! There are extra evening classes I have to go..!! Sorry I can't come to the park with you..!! You have to go with Sakshi again..!!" Nandini said sadly and Manvi was more than happy but she suppressed her happiness and made a sad face.

"It's ok Mama..!! You go..!!" Manvi said sadly and Nandini after handing over Manvi to Sakshi went to college.

...

Manik reached the park and sat on the same yesterday bench. He intentionally wore the same jacket so that it will be easy for Manvi to recognize him.

...


Manvi reached the Park along with Sakshi and her twin sons Poorab and Aryaan. Sakshi sat on a bench and started talking on the phone. Manvi, Poorab and Aryan started playing. Manvi the innocent soul didn't knew why she want to meet that Uncle why she was feeling so attracted towards him. She intentionally threw her ball towards the yesterdays direction and went to get it. Soon she was out of sight of Sakshi and her sons. She picked up her ball and run towards the same bench.Seeing him sitting there made her heart thump with joy. She saw him extending his arms for her she was overwhelmed by his act and run towards him.

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Edited by Mawara_Ejaz - 10 years ago
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Chapter 2 B


Manik was desperately waiting for the little angel. His eyes were continuously searching for her. Suddenly he saw her coming towards him. He wanted to take her in a bone crushing hug. So he kneeled down on the floor and extended his arms for her. He saw her smile getting bright by seeing his act and finally she reached him. Manik hugged Manvi so tightly. He was feeling too much love for her. Manik kissed her face madly. She also kissed Manik's cheeks.


"I misshed you sooo much friend..!!" Manvi said cutely putting her arms around his neck and Manik felt like flying in the air both of them were unaware the fact of the attraction.


"I missed you too sweetheart..!!" Manik said lovingly picking her up in his arms and sat on the bench."So how was your day?"


"It was good..!! You know bali(bari) mushkil shay shab shay chup tay ai hoon..!!(mushkil say sab say chup kay ai hoon)..!!" Manvi told him seriously and he held back his smile.


"Chup kay q?" Manik asked naughtily.


"My mama has told me not to talk with stalangels(strangers)...!! Agl me un tou bta deti about US tou wo mjy ap shay milny ni deti na budho..!!(If I had told her then she will not allow me to meet you stupid)..!!" Manvi said scolding him and Manik laughed after so long.


"Ohh..!! Smart move Manvi..!!" Manik said patting her head.


"I am smalt..!!(smart)" Manvi boasted."Where is my chocolate?" Manvi asked excitedly and Manik smirked.


"You have to find it..!!" Manik said smilingly and Manvi shrugged.


"Ok..!!" She said cutely and started checking his pockets. Manik was more than happy on Manvi's "Haq jatana" session. Soon Manvi found the chocolate in one of his pocket. After getting it she jumped with joy in Manik's lap. Manik was completely enjoying all this.


"Mil dai(I got it)..!!" Manvi exclaimed and Manik again laughed. Than Manik opened the chocolate packet for her and she started eating cutely.


"Manvi..!! Mjhy taste nahi karao ge chocolate..!!" Manik complained making a sad pout. Manvi became worried and she immediately nodded. Manik smirked and licked the chocolate off her cheeks. Then he licked her tiny fingers and she laughed. They both ate the chocolate like this. Soon they finished the chocolate and Manik again wiped her hands with his jacket. Now Manvi was sitting in his lap with her head on his chest and she was playing with his hand fingers.


"Manvi..!! What are your hobbies?" Manik was asking casual questions and Manvi was cutely replying him.


"I like music..!!" Manvi said excitedly.


"Wow..!! What a coincidence...!! I like music too..!!"Manik exclaimed. "Well we are alike in many ways..!!" Manik said pulling her cheeks.


"Friend..!! Flom whele did you get this blacelet?(From where did you get this barcelet)..!!" Suddenly Manvi asked him about the tie bracelet he was wearing in his hand.


"Why are you asking?" Manik asked suspiciously..


"Ummm nothing..!! It's just my Mama wore the same like this..!" Manvi told him casually while playing with the tie pendant of it and Manik's heart started beating fast.


"Nandini..!! No Manik..!! It's impossible..!! Again a coincidence...!! Yeah..!!"His mind satisfied him.


"Ohh good..!!" He replied to Manvi and now it was time for Manvi to go home.


"Ok friend..!! Shee you tomollow..!!(see you tomorrow)..!!" Manvi said sadly today she also didn't wanted to leave Manik but she had too her Mama must be coming home. She kissed Manik's cheeks and Manik pecked her forehead. She waved a goodbye to him and left. Manik was again sad now. He had to wait 24 hours to meet her again. He walked back to the hotel all his friends were sleeping he too fell on the bed. But his bedside was empty. He thought of something and a lone tear escaped his eye.


Flashback


"Manik bus bhi karo..!! Come and lets sleep..!!" Nandini said sleepily while Manik was busy in composing a symphony.


"Just 2 minutes Nandini I am getting there..!!" Manik said reassuringly. "You sleep na honey..!!"


"Manik..!! You know na I can't sleep without you..!! Without your arms..!!" Nandini said angrily making a pout leaving no choice for Manik but to come to the bed and sleep.


"Ok baba..!!" Manik sighed and walked towards the bed. He turned off the lights and lay down on the bed. Nandini immediately hugged him. After pecking a good night to Manik she soon drifted to sleep. Manik was smiling on her loveliness. He kissed her hair sweetly and he too fell asleep.

...

Present


"Ab tmhy nend kaisy aati ho ge Nandini..!!" Manik whispered to himself sadly.

...

Next day was a new day but it was Sunday.Nandini had promised Manvi that she will take her out for a whole day and today was the day.


"Mano? What you wanna wear today?"Nandini asked rubbing Manvi's wet hair with towel.


"My red skirt with red shoes..!! Red nail paint and red hair clip...!!" Manvi told her seriously and Nandini smiled. Nandini herself was very simple girl but Manvi was too much stylish just like her grandmother Nayonika. Nayonika Malhotra..!! The Villain..!!


"Ok Madam..!!" Nandini said and help Manvi wearing her dress and other things. Soon they both set out of the house to hang out. Nandini's heart was beating in a different way today. She was sensing something but didn't knew what was it.

Both mother and daughter spend a quality time together. On their way they saw a big and immense crowd.


"Mama..!! What's going on there?" Manvi asked Nandini. Nandini tried to look over the crowd she got a glimpse of a big stage.

"It's some kind of concert Mano..!!" Nandini said casually and hearing the word concert Manvi's face lit up.


"Mama..!! I want to attend it pleaj..!!" Manvi pleaded and Nandini nodded.


"Fab5..!! Fab5..!! Fab5..!!" Suddenly crowd started shouting for fab5 and Nandini felt her breath hitched in her throat.


"No..!! Agr Manik nay mjhy daikh liya tou?" Nandini thought to herself. Soon she saw all five coming on the stage. She saw Manik after four long years. He was the same..!! Same face..!! Same eyes..!! But one thing was different..!! There was sadness..!! Nandini knew she was the reason of that sadness...!!


"Friend..!!"Seeing him Manvi shouted excitedly and Nandini look at Manvi horrified.


"How do you know him Manvi..!!" Nandini was in shock.


"Mama..!! He is my friend..!! You remember mjy ap tou palk kay naly main tuch btana tha..!!(mjy ap ko park kay bary main kuch btana tha)..!! I wanted to tell you about friend..!! He met me in the palk..!!"Manvi explained lowering her head. She was embarrassed from hiding all this from Nandini. And Nandini was too much numb to react for anything. Suddenly she heard Manik's voice.


"Hello Pune..!!" Manik shouted. "Are you guys ready?"


"Yes..!!" Crowd shouted.


"So the song I am going to sing is specially for someone who was really close to my heart..!! But she left..!!" Manik said sadly.


"Awww...!!" The crowd shouted again.


"So let's get started..!!" Manik said gripping his guitar. Nandini knew that he was talking about her.

...

Ok..!! Update is here..!! After sooo long I am so sorry.!! Yesterday I came home and wrote this update..!! Next chapter will contain MaNan meeting after 4 long years..!! Excited? Hmmm..!! Thank you for all the lovely messages you guys told me how much you missed me..!! Sorry for keeping you await..!! But from today update will be surely very very regular..!! Just like before..!! Till then tell me about this chapter..!! And yeah keep smiling..!! Keep shining for your love ones..!!

Lots of love..


Mawara

Edited by Mawara_Ejaz - 10 years ago

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