~[MaNan Dark FF]~ Chapter 4 on Page 7 - Page 2

Created

Last reply

Replies

68

Views

29.6k

Users

33

Likes

238

Frequent Posters

SONIAGHOSH thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#11
NICE UPDATE
LOVE IT

PLEASE UPDATE TODAY I CANT WAIT TO READ NEXT CHAPTER

PLEASE PM ME NEXT TIME
suraiya77 thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#12
Interesting! Continue soon
curious to know further story..
ElegantRain thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: SONIAGHOSH

NICE UPDATE

LOVE IT

PLEASE UPDATE TODAY I CANT WAIT TO READ NEXT CHAPTER

PLEASE PM ME NEXT TIME



Haha I usually update at night and read other FF's the whole day.

Thankyou
ElegantRain thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#14
Apologies for forgetting to pm'ing you guys, I had to sleep after I made the chapter. But I'll remember the people that asked me for pm's.

-Crockomichi
-Shavashava
-Soniaghosh

😛 If anyone else wants one just buddy me or ask
maryambibi thumbnail
Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#15
Fantastic update can't wait for the next chapter update soon eagerly waiting
Witcher thumbnail
Visit Streak 365 Thumbnail 10th Anniversary Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 10 years ago
#16
Very excited and i am a Bit scared
Is Manik responsible, if yes than it's going to be really complicated
Hm can't decide about Mukti yet
Will the Dialog be mostly in Hindi? I can't Understand much 😭
I mostly Try to guess 😳
ElegantRain thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: chair1992

Very excited and i am a Bit scared
Is Manik responsible, if yes than it's going to be really complicated
Hm can't decide about Mukti yet
Will the Dialog be mostly in Hindi? I can't Understand much 😭
I mostly Try to guess 😳



Lol It's easier for me to put it in english as well, but then I try imagining the characters speaking english and it just seems awkward, so I change the whole line to hindi/urdu 😛 But I will try having more english 😆
Thatgirl16 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 10 years ago
#18
Nice part...
Mukti makes me confused
Manik killed a guy because he said no to alya...
Plz make manan meet a passionate one...

Will it be love/lust at first sight for manan????
Plz update soon
Waiting eagerly
ElegantRain thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#19
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Chapter 2
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Back at Nandini's dad's house Dhruv was smiling at Nandini and she constantly kept
blushing. They didn't bother to even utter a word since they had nothing to talk about other
than their dads deaths. Nandini started staring at her ring again, admiring what Dhruv had
got for her. Dhruv looked at his own ring which was mailed to him in the US by Nandini's
father. Dhruv got really bored and he was about to get up and leave then suddenly an idea
struck him. They felt like strangers and finally Dhruv spoke.

Dhruv: Hmm Anyways um... Nandini I wanted to ask you something...

Dhruv paused waiting for Nandini to let him ask what he wants to ask. After a while
Nandini finally realized he stopped because it was a question. She was a little confused
since he had asked a question in such an odd way.

Nandini: ...Oh go ahead.

Dhruv: Will you go out... for lunch ...with me?

Nandini: Ofcourse Dhruv! I am your fiancee right? So tum itna pause kar ke kyu bol re ho?

Dhruv thought in his head, is this girl crazy? First she doesn't even utter a word out of her
mouth then she starts acting like I am the one thats shy. Well atleast she said yes. What if
she's one of those bhenjis. No... no she's too cute for that. But her clothes? Wait I forgot
she wears only Indian clothes. But that royal blue anarkali does look hot on her. Oh it
matches the sapphires on her engagement ring. I bet thats why she wore it.

Nandini: Dhruv? Tum kaha kho gaye ho? You don't talk much do you?

Dhruv: What? Oh Nandini, for your information I do talk, and me pause ker ke yuhi bol ra
tha kyu ke muje laga you were one of those shy girls.

Nandini laughed at him and he smiled back at her. Then Dhruv started thinking, She has a
cute laugh. She laughed, does that mean she's not shy, or did she laugh out of nervousness? Her eyes, they are so big and brown. Her round cheeks, awww we would have cute babies. Dhruv what are you thinking, stop it. Wait I should be thinking this since we are getting married. Her lips, I wonder how she kisses.

Meanwhile Nandini's thought, oh my God why am I acting shy. Stop it Nandini, be confident and just smile. Oh he just smiled at me, I am about to blush, no don't do it Nandini. What if he's one of those shy types. No he can't be, he invited me for lunch. Awww his brown hair it's so cute. Imagine our babies, with his smile, my eyes, his hair, my nose, his cheeks and- Stop it Nandini, but on second thought we are eventually going to get married so why stop?

Nandini: Oh shy? And me? No Dhruv, I was thinking you would be shy.

Dhruv: Nope, and by the way it's 3 already, we should be leaving for lunch.

Nandini's thoughts, he smiled again awww.


Nandini: Okay.

Nandini and Dhruv both sat in Dhruv's car. They went to a nearby cafe. They reached a table and before sitting Dhruv pulled the chair for Nandini.

Nandini's thoughts, Awww he is so adorable, and his gestures are sooo cute.

They both were sitting and then Dhruv asked,

Dhruv: Nandini, what would you like?

Nandini: Mango milkshake, it's my favorite!

Dhruv: Really? I like chocolate milkshakes, mangos are gross.

Dhruv ordered for two milkshakes, one mango and one chocolate and after a while they
came.

Nandini: So Dhruv how was US?

Dhruv: Amazing, but it feels good to be back, and be with... you.


Nandini's thoughts, he is such a flirt, look at his smile.

Nandini: Dhruv can I ask you something?

Dhruv: Go ahead.

Nandini: Am I the first girl in your life. It's just that to be honest, I have never dated, a guy before. I wanted to save all the first experiences for... well you.

Nandini hoped he would say yes, she wanted him to have her as a first as well but
unfortunately Dhruv replied,

Dhruv: I could just say yes, but that would be a lie. Nandini since you are going to be a part
of my life I want to be honest with you. Yes I have dated 2 girls before. But thats okay, they were never close to me like that.

Nandini got saddened by this, but she just smiled and said,


Nandini: Dhruv I am happy that you are honest with me.

Time flew by and they had finishes sipping their milkshakes. Nandini and Dhruv developed
a connection between them which was slowly growing by every moment that they spent
together. Finally Nandini had to leave and she said goodbye to Dhruv. Nandini got her
bags from home and shifted into Abhimanyu's mansion.

Meanwhile Manik Malhotra was at his mansion and just got informed that Abhimanyu's dad had passed away. He wanted to go to his place to make him be strong. Manik was in a hurry as he had a meeting in an hour as well. So he shouted for his right hand man also known as his servant and bodyguard, Cabir.

(In frustration and anger) Manik: Cabir! Jaldi se gari lao mujhe Mukti ke ghar jana hay.

Cabir: Driver chuhti pe hai sir.

Manik: To ya uss kaminey ko vapis lao ya khud drive karo ya kissi aur driver ko lao, mera
sir mat khaoo! Simple as that!

Cabir quickly got another driver and went with Manik to Mukti's place. Nandini had also
been there, she was sitting upstairs with Pari reading Beauty and the Beast to her. Abhimanyu was not at home at the time but Mukti was upstairs in her room. Manik
knocked on the door hard and a servant came to open the door.

Manik: Mukti! Mukti!

Hearing the shouting Pari knew it was her Mamu's voice she quickly ran downstairs. Nandini thought Pari ran away to play with her. So she got up as well. Meanwhile downstairs,

Pari: Mamuuu

Manik: Arey Pari beta mama kahan pe hai?

Pari: Vo to uper hai

Manik went up to the stairs meanwhile Nandini was running down to catch Pari. Nandini slipped and fell, just then Manik caught her with anger in his eyes. Nandini kept
staring at his dark full of hatred eyes. Her sweet innocent round eyes failed to understand
his. Suddenly he jerked her.

Manik: Kaam wali tum idher udher mere ghar mein bhaag kyu rahi ho?

Manik was gripping Nandini's arms tightly and was shouting at her.

Nandini: Mein kaam wali nahi hu aur ye mere bhaiya ka ghar hai.

Manik: Tum mujhe jawab kyu deri ho? Don't you know who I am?

Mukti came downstairs and saw the two in a weird position.

Mukti: Manik... Nandini

Nandini: Bhabi ye kon hai? Mukti: Nandu that's my brother, and Manik stop yelling at her.

Manik: I came for Abhimanyu's dad's .. death. Anyways Mukti didn't you tell her this isn't her "bhaiya's" ghar since I gifted this on your wedding.

Manik smirked evily. Nandini didn't know this.

Mukti: Okay Manik, well abhi to Abhi ghar nahi hay, he had a meeting at the office. Manik forgot about the meeting and suddenly got angry again he pushed Nandini out of his
way and rushed to his car then to his office. Manik owned a few companies and he gave Abhimanyu the position of the CEO of on of his companies. Basically Manik owned Abhimanyu and his career.

Alya was bored and she decided to go to her sister's place. She informed Mukti and got in her car and drove. She knocked on the door and was surprised to see her friend, Nandini.


Alya: Nandini!!!

~To be Continued~


Did you like it??
I know its boring right now, but keeep reading. And .-. maybe Nandini will get married to Dhruv maybe NOT. 😛 Oh and I came up with a title it's on page 1. Pre-cap- Alya meets Dhruv ☺️ Manik meets Dhruv 😡 MaYa make a deal.


Edited by ElegantRain - 10 years ago
ElegantRain thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: aditi16

Nice part...

Mukti makes me confused
Manik killed a guy because he said no to alya...
Plz make manan meet a passionate one...

Will it be love/lust at first sight for manan????
Plz update soon
Waiting eagerly



It is going to take a looong time for them to officialy fall in love.
For Manik, he desires neither love nor lust at the moment. 😲

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".