~[MaNan Dark FF]~ Chapter 4 on Page 7 - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice update but no manan scene please next update main manan scene dalna
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its amazing ff but y u r updating late pls jaldi upload karna
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This was new story for me..
read all the three chapters in one go...
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m loving it... hawww !! Dark oneee😈 I just cravs 4 dark ffs 😆OMG MANIKKK IS DON..ND NO ONE IS STILL DONT KNW ABOUT IT... ND I DONT LIKE DHRUNIII PLZZZ I WANT MANAN ASAPPP ND THEIR COZY COZY MOVEMENTS... LOVE...PASSION... HOPE U WILL UNDERSTAND...IN NEXT CHAP I WANT MANAN HOW EVER!!! UPDATE ASAP CANT WAIT ND REMEMVERED WAT I SAID COZZY COZZZYYY 😆 😉
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It was superb ...
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when you update please update today i cant wait any more
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Please update soon eagerly waiting! !!!!!!!!!!!!! !
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lol ok ok ok I am sorry I wasn't able to post in a really long time. But it was that first I went to Florida for a week then when I came back I had wedding(s) to attend after that. But now I don't think I'll be that busy anymore. Other than the fact August is here already ewww.
But after this short message I'll update on both of the ff's. And I'll try to pm you, no promises haha, well since some of you are my buddies other aren't and some of my buddies don't read these ff's. Anyways hello all. 😊
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Chapter 4
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Abhimanyu: Nandini wake up we have to leave now.

Nandini kept sleeping and turned the other way. Abhimanyu was about to pour water on her when Nandini quickly realized she was going to Manik's place today.

Nandini: Bhai aapke haath me ye pani ka glass kya ker raha hai.

Abhimanyu: Ye paani ka glass meri behen ke uper girta agar wo uthti na.

Nandini: Bhaiii vaise you are leaving na?

Abhimanyu: Yes but first we will drop you and Pari at Manik's estate.

Nandini: Oh.

Nandini got ready and sat in the car with Pari, Abhimanyu, and Mukti. They drove off and dropped Pari and Nandini. They all said their goodbyes and parted. Nandini got a phone call from Dhruv.

Dhruv: Hi Nandini

Nandini: Dhruv hello

Dhruv: Nandini me tumhare bhai ke ghar door knock ker raha hu, why aren't you coming out?

Nandini: Dhruv vo na bhai aur Mukti bhabi America jaa rahe hai for two week koi meeting ke liye, and, I ... have to stay at Alya's house...

Dhruv: What? But isn't that, that don or whatever's house too?

Nandini: Don? kon don?

Dhruv: Nevermind, Nandini how can you stay there? Vo ek praya mard hai, tum waha nahi reh sakti.

Nandini: So where should I stay na? Dhruv mujhe lag ta tha that you were from America so you would have more of a open mind not a narrow one.

Dhruv: Why can't you understand? I am coming over there just wait.

Nandini and Dhruv end the call and Nandini gets frustrated. She goes on the roof as she always finds peace and fresh air on the roof tops. Nandini saw a room she went inside and saw a guitar and a on the table beside it. She was about to pick up the journal when someone grabbed her wrist. She turned around and saw Manik.

Manik: NO ONE IS ALLOWED IN THIS ROOM YOU CHUBBY LITTLE B***H.

Manik was about to slap her when she fainted in his arms. He ran his finger over her lips. He was about to lean in for a kiss just then Alya came running hearing Manik shout. Dhruv was at the door just then he as well ran upstairs.

Alya: Bhai, Nandini.

Dhruv pushed Alya out of the way and saw Manik with Nandini.

Dhruv: Don't you dare touch her you,

Dhruv held his tongue and took Nandini away from Manik. Manik walked away and Alya helped Dhruv get Nandini to her room. After 10 minutes Nandini regained her conscious.

Nandini: Dhruv

Dhruv: haa... haan Nandini bolo.

Nandini: What happened.

Dhruv: You were in his arms.

Nandini: KYA? KON?

Dhruv: Don't play dumb tum or vo aik saath chaht (roof) pe kya ker rahe the?

Nandini: Dhruv are you doubting me?

Dhruv: I shouldn't?

Nandini: Whats wrong with you Dhruv.

Alya came in Nandini's room.

Alya: Guys lunch is ready lets go.

Dhruv: No I will be leaving.

Nandini: Dhruv please don't go.

Dhruv: No I am going.

Alya: Dhruv lunch ker lo please.

Dhruv nodded in attempt to make Nandini jealous. Alya smirked inside. Nandini was happy that Dhruv was staying. Everyone arrived and sat at the table which was for 8 people. Manik sat at one end and Pari sat at the other. Alya sat next to Pari so she could make her eat. Dhruv also sat next to Alya to make Nandini jealous. But dumb Nandini sat next to Dhruv and was now in between Manik and Dhruv.

Manik: Nandini could you pass me the fish.

Nandini: hm.

Dhruv got angry and coughed. Nandini didn't realize this and passed Manik the dish and Manik smoothly ran his hand along hers. Nandini shivered from his touch and quickly put the fish down on the table. Alya saw this and kept eating while Dhruv was trying to tolerate Manik. And was still not over the incident that happened an hour ago.



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Ah okay this chapter was short but atleast I continued :-p.
And sorry I can't send pm's as I have to go rn.
Good day :)


Edited by ElegantRain - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb update loved it do update soon

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