MaNan ss:tu me manques(completed)(14&15-pg41) - Page 6

Originally posted by: BornInFire

Beautiful ❤️
I always love and enjoy reading your stories 🤗

Originally posted by: Kuushi

Beautifully penned and interesting concept..looking forward to read more of the story..thank u for the pm:)

Originally posted by: aliyaangel

that ws an interesting update.. the story is unfolding slowy n gradually.. u wrote maniks pov very nycly.. makng us very curious of the plot..
loved it.. n thnx fr d pm.. update soon agn.. i become greedy with ur story..
P.S. the last two lines are beautiful.. ❤️

Originally posted by: aavani

fabulous...!!!
so the chapter opened up with manik's p.o.v
its awesome...
its interesting...


the last lines...its beautiful

Fifty thousand years before the sky was introduced to the sea ,

he , who owns everything wrote her name next to his ...

continue soon ...
thanks a lot for the pm
take care

Originally posted by: shaanmaan

Wonderful update
continue soon

thnks for PM

Originally posted by: Asha_25

Amazing update.
Loved it.
Thanks for pm.
Continue soon

Originally posted by: ArSha_ManNan

Hey ...

Awesome update yr... bt chotta hai ... plz next tym se thoda sa long...

Okay cmng to update...

I loved the way u described manik ... His clothes... His features... hayyeee. ..

And I loved the fact that manik caries an old vintage pocket watch... that's so cool...

That girl is nandini na???

And the ending lines... omg... soo deep ...

Thnkzz 4 the pm and I am super eager to read the next part..

Originally posted by: parthadmirer

Amazingly written..👏

the words in which you have expressed your ideas is soo soothing yo read...

yess the story is unfolding slowly. ..

will wait eagerly for the next part to vs updated ...