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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 1

His nostrils took a gasp of the lavender scent lingering in his room , and his stomach pith was filling his entire body with a fear stealthily , he was hoping his fears weren't true .

Hopefully these 15 days hadn't turned her world around

He brushed his thoughts and slowly got ready, after speed dialing his bestie over his fears

Then he updated :

Soon enough he walked out of the airport , while most girls swooned over.

The boy had worn a loose black shirt teemed with classic faded jeans enhancing his perfect features well , which boasted the tousled griminess which promised finesse, his eyes- deep and vivid hazel colored while his distinct cheekbones and an angular jaw, making him look devilishly hot .

"buddy you are fine right ?" asked Dhruv

"perfect" he answered as Cabir , Alya and Mukti saw him fiddle with his pocket watch , a fetish that not many possessed in today's times , yet Manik Malhotra did .

.Manik Malhotra.

And it wasn't so usual for him to be opening his precious vintage clock in front of everyone , for it was the one of two closest thing to his heart .

They all took their respective cars, to head to their houses back .

" bro , I' ll come with you "

" dude , I really don't think there's something wrong , you are worrying unnecessarily " Cabir said , not being able to understand his own best friend's fears

"I m driving. Done" he spoke, his voice laced with an uncertainty only his heart knew .

The bell rang for the fourth time and no one opened

They both looked at each other

"Cabir , the key ?" Manik asked

Taking the key , he pushed it into the lock with a frenzy frightening to the one next to him and ran inside .

He ran into the second room and saw her lying on the ground.

.His heart stopped .

.He knew since a few days , something was wrong .

He hurried inside while Cabir joined him and took her into his arms and laid her on the bed .

"bro ...water ...fast ..."

Cabir got it and slowly made her drink it , while she lay on Manik's lap , as he ruffled her hair and soothed her back with tenderness of a newborn bud .

She slowly opened her eyes, very slowly and held Manik's hand tightly as slept on his lap again.

" you were right , man she is my life , my only family I should ve known " Cabir said ,

as they both kept soothing her , while she sweetly slept in Manik's lap and

as fate wanted it , she had finally found peace after 4 days of hell .

Fifty thousand years before the sky was introduced to the sea ,

he , who owns everything wrote her name next to his .

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i hope u guys liked this part , also since many PMed me , its going to be neither dark nor a sad one , in a few updates , u ll rather love the positivity and new things coming into the way .

and for PMs please buddy me , makes it easier as I make sure everyone on my list gets one 😃

Edited by drnidsur - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32

" you were right , man she is my life , my only family I should ve known " Cabir said ,

CABIR SAID THAT???????

NICE ONE DEAR

UPDATE SOON

PLZ PM ME IF POSSIB...

TAKE CARE...

LOTS OF LOVE...


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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
Beautiful ❤️
I always love and enjoy reading your stories 🤗
Kuushi thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
Beautifully penned and interesting concept..looking forward to read more of the story..thank u for the pm:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
that ws an interesting update.. the story is unfolding slowy n gradually.. u wrote maniks pov very nycly.. makng us very curious of the plot..
loved it.. n thnx fr d pm.. update soon agn.. i become greedy with ur story..
P.S. the last two lines are beautiful.. ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
fabulous...!!!
so the chapter opened up with manik's p.o.v
its awesome...
its interesting...


the last lines...its beautiful

Fifty thousand years before the sky was introduced to the sea ,

he , who owns everything wrote her name next to his ...

continue soon ...
thanks a lot for the pm
take care

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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
Wonderful update
continue soon

thnks for PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
Amazing update.
Loved it.
Thanks for pm.
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
Hey ...
Awesome update yr... bt chotta hai ... plz next tym se thoda sa long...

Okay cmng to update...
I loved the way u described manik ... His clothes... His features... hayyeee. ..
And I loved the fact that manik caries an old vintage pocket watch... that's so cool...
That girl is nandini na???
And the ending lines... omg... soo deep ...

Thnkzz 4 the pm and I am super eager to read the next part..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
Amazingly written..👏
the words in which you have expressed your ideas is soo soothing yo read...
yess the story is unfolding slowly. ..
will wait eagerly for the next part to vs updated ...

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