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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: OhMeriJaan

Nidhi! 🤗

Finally! You updated! 😃
Sorry for replying late! Just read the last two updates! And gosh I did miss reading your words! They are so beautiful! And I just love how you have written in here! Loved the last 2 updates! ❤️
And more surprises! Wow excited!
And yes I know am late, still would wanna tell you that I owuld love if you could continue with this whenever you have time! In love with your words! 🤗

janani 🤗
yaa i did ..
tysmm ..i m soo glad u loved it
yaa i will complete this , well in time 😳
ty once again gurl
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: parthadmirer

Mind blowing superb update...

the way described the beauty of nature and connected to their situation to them was awesome...
beautiful thoughts..
manik is happy that nandini is healing..
and nandini is happy being with mnaik...
nice..👏

tysmm
i m glad u loved it 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sizzysehrish

it was amazing

i loved ur title
ur concept is really different
cont sooon

tysmm
i will 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sugarforu

Umm... confused but eagar to read further as well... Just done wid d prologue n chap 1... seems quite interesting... Reading as u suggested @nidhi right?

yaa ..nidhi 😆
well .,i hope u like it then 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Asha_25

Amazing Update.
beautifully Written.
loved it.
continue soon ...

tysmm
i m glad u loved it 😳
Edited by drnidsur - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago


chapter 10


Finally they had reached back, she was tired with amount of travelling and trekking, yet all throughout the way back, she kept on blabbering about her trips in US with her appa , all the stories of her childhood while Manik was smiling and listening carefully to each word of her.

She walked off to her home, only to enter her room and wave him off .

There she was tossing in the bed, replaying the day in her mind

Suddenly her mind struck a thought she had read long time back

"Legend has it, that when you can't sleep at night, it's because you're awake in someone else's dream "

"Wow!" She sighed, smiling to herself

"Wait, why did she want to be in his dream? "

Her mind questioned her heart

Poor the tiny heart of hers , was already starting to pump his name in to her veins

While her intellectual mind bothered itself for long, pondering.

while he on the other hand was back to his iphone tweeting

--

The next early morning, she woke to a beautiful day and stood in the kitchen making two cups of coffee.

She took the chocolate sauce and was busy when suddenly a sudden pat on her back startled her

" you , Manik , you scared me "

"oh , I thought Nandini murthy wasn't scared of anyone "he said smirking

And leaning on the kitchen slab, standing next to her

"so, you knew I was coming "

" noo , I didn't " she tried to word herself properly , but well the faade was falling .

" soo you're drinking two cups of coffee , was yesterday night so hard .huh?" She meekly smiled, while her brain was busy contemplating about how he knew about her hard night!

She handed over the coffee to him swiftly and walked to the balcony

He looked at the coffee with a cute smile drawn on it , he smiled seeing the latte art she made for him today morning .


"Oh lord , how many times would he make him fall for her ?"

These cute gestures would definitely consume him someday!

They both stood in the balcony drinking the coffee

Comfort silence it was .

conversations that are soo deep , that words aren't required - when you bodies ,your eyes , your beating hearts , your souls do the talking for you , more than the words

it just makes you feel safe , a sweet safe tingling feeling .

--

Manik's pov

I walked to her locker room , although our courses were poles apart .

But you know who Manik Malhotra is right?. If you don't..Then you better !

She was standing there pushing her books into the locker, making cute pouts now and then as her petite form wasn't able to handle the heavy 5 books she was holding.

I sprang and held the books for her and she smiled.

While still busy, she asked "you're here!"

"I thought may be a movie after the college could do "he smirked, ruffling my hair

I HAD JUST ASKED OUT THE GIRL I LOVED , THE GIRL I LOVED SINCE MORE THAN A MONTH NOW .

My mind still comprehended if my move was right? if she wouldn't like it ?maybe it was too fast for her ? Was it ?

I opened my mouth to reassure her, in case she planned not to come, just then she spoke

"umm, could you wait , I have to submit this assignment . I' ll be back In 10 minutes maximum " she spoke , biting her lower lips and shaking her right leg with a frenzy .

I smiled, it was her . She was surely nervous. Very nervous

She passed a vibrant smile to me , while walking away with the assignment .

When suddenly I heard some girl talk

" Manik , is he interested in Nandini ...like cabir's sister Nandini ?"

Ignorance is bliss I decided and walked off , yet the way things were going with us , I was sure that tomorrow when cabir could be back , he would surely notice the different vibe between us two .

He would , because he is cabir and he knows it all .

Nandini's pov

I submitted the assignment and walked off to the washroom, trying to gather myself to a little better form . I reapplied the balm on my lips and tuck my hair and looked at myself again in the mirror

Would I look good to him ? Would I be good enough for him ?

Maybe. Just a maybe

--

We both were seated in the theatre watching "fast and furious 7 "and in every some time exchanging glances.

Noone's pov

It was late night, they both had dinner and soon enough he was outside her some

She got off, when suddenly even he got off from his side and leaned on the car

"Nandini , wait naa "he spoke subconsciously

She looked at him dazzled

"Let's talk for some time "he justified

"hmm "

And while they both talked, very stealthily Manik had taken her hand in his and was caressing it .

Nandini wasn't unaware. She was loving this .

She had always felt homely with him.

She trusted him.

She smiled taking her hand off slowly."Manik, its late now, Bhai s coming tomorrow morning , you should go home "

"hmm"

She turned back, to leave when suddenly she got pulled back onto his chest and in a second , she felt a warm upsurge on her right cheek

He kissed her cheek

And then she knew

That you could be

Homesick for people too !

She was red , maybe tomato red .

While he stood blushing, leaning on the car , she walked into her home without looking back

For the smile on her face wasn't leaving even for a second and she was crimson red

You were you

I was I .

We were two ,

Before our time .

I was yours ,

Before you knew .

And you have always.

been Mine too .

- Always

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well , i hope u guys liked this part. i 'll update another part today itself , as its done

also if you guys have any suggestions or advises on the storyline , do write in or pm me

further those who want pm's pls buddy me 😳

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Posted: 10 years ago
Well I wana just say that...I am so so so overwhelmed after reading this that
I felt like I am reading a novel that's written by some great writer...

So noble you were...
I don't know but ...this story is in my heart.

I loved it upto core...
And that last lines.??..had you wrote it by your own?????

That was just mind blowing...
In every sense...this story seem real...
May it be a fiction ..but I am completely into it



And yea plz update asap...
And do pm me...
I am sending you buddy req.



Loads of love and regards...
Gbu :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow what an amazing update..
your ff is so peotic...
i loved it the way you have written it...
the beautiful explaination is so soothing to read...
manik and nandini are falling for each other slowly...
beautiful...
the last lines were superb...👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
an amazing update.
manik and nandini are awsum...
the last lines were awsum👏👏👏...Clap
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing update
just loved it
cont soon

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