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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aavani

awesome part...
loved the way nandu reacted...
manan scenes was awesome
u penned beautifully
continue soon
thanks a lot for the pm
take care

tysmmm aavani
i m glad u loved them 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
tysmmm😳
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Posted: 10 years ago



chapter 5

" Thank you soo much manik " she said , looking at him through the car window . he smiled , a genuine smile and Nandini headed into her home , after giving him a best possible smile she could manage after her act . she went upstairs and knew manik wouldn't have left , and waved to him through her window , soon he left for college , before he could get more late because of her and would have to tell a million lies to cover up to fab5 .

He , was mesmerized by her today . he had seen the rising flame full of strength in her a few times and every time as he flipped across his memories may be, he fell in love with her more . it wasn't just her innocence or her beautiful doe eyes which had dazzled him a month back , it was her soul which left imprints on his heart .

He smiled to himself and hummed a sweet tone , walking to the canteen where everyone sat .

Cabir was ready with his one liner while everyone was puzzled with his unusual self .

" bro , don't you think the sun shone on you a little too much today ...you're all chirpy and ...or maybe is it some new "

Manik cut him off before a disaster struck the table

" come on , we're just done with a huge album in delhi , what better ?"

Nandini changed into her usual clothes and tying up her hair , she thought about how one day changed things for her , how yesterday night she had merely read a page of her mother's diary and her perspective changed .

She no longer saw the smear on her white canvas as filthy , rather she saw how easily a red paint could hide it , beautifully !

She walked to her cupboard where lay a small box , containing most treasured bits of her life , one of them being her mom's diary .

She opened the page she read last night , softly running her hand over the words , absorbing them again

"you are broken , you are shattered ,there are awful nights when you cry because you still want the roman candles exploding like constellations or want to sway yourself to the soft music . I agree the music never tastes better than in those days .but its not bad at all .

Trust me , the most valuable asset you'll ever have is - you

. travel , pick up and explore new places , open the constellation maps , spot them and laugh at your victories .

Never lose the spontaneity , for to do things in this world you'd never need the magic of Neverland or a strange elixir , but just something that you'll always find deep in your heart .

And on this way perhaps , very soon , you'll find someone as well , not because this is the right pathway rather because you are loving what you do and trust me those eyes will scream , when they are staring at your soul because you love what you do and those eyes love you ."

In a few moments all headed to their work , while at home Nandini's phone buzzed with a message

Mukti- " babe , how about some shopping today evening with alya ...heard you were a little down , it' ll cheer u up ..be ready ...@5 "

Nandini smiled , she did hang out with mukti and alya sometimes , but it wasn't so often and she could clearly trace who the mastermind behind this was and she instantly texted him a thank you .

He there , reminiscing the morning punched into his phone -

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i hope you guys like this chapter ..its more of inspiring truth for not just her , for everyone like us , all your suggestions are welcome , next chapter onwards , it ll be all manan 😳

Edited by drnidsur - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nidhi!🤗 You slay with your words! Sheer bliss it is to read you write! Just how do you manage to bring the emotions spot on with your words? I just LOVE the last 3 chapters! That punch was bloody awesome! And Manik and Nandini slowly but steadily falling for each other is just But your words are MAGIC! I cant wait to read more of you and see where this story is heading!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nidhi🤗it was great. MuM is the first and the best teacher. Nandini has her memories and her words are awe inspiring. I loved it😳
Edited by -Chandramukhi.. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
it was a sheer bliss reading your update..
the way you have express the feelings is just mind blowing...
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Posted: 10 years ago
wowww i never knew some one can write this beautiful i dnt have words to describe this ff the way u write a quote in every chapter its awsomeee these lines are inspiration the way u penned every character and emotions are awsomeee its a bliss reading this ff loved it i dont know how on earth i missed this these many days continuee soon dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved it
Manik is really thoughtfull and Nandini knows that
It seems although She isnt very close to them, Mukti and aliya care
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome...
loved it...
i hope nandu falls in love with manik
cntinue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome updates
Love ur writing
U r fabulous
Thnx fr d pm
And update soon

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