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Posted: 10 years ago
beautifully penned...i really love the way u write ...it has some power which creates magic while reading this piece of work...
thanks a lot for the pm
i really loved her mother's words...

"you are broken , you are shattered ,there are awful nights when you cry because you still want the roman candles exploding like constellations or want to sway yourself to the soft music . I agree the music never tastes better than in those days .but its not bad at all .

Trust me , the most valuable asset you'll ever have is - you

. travel , pick up and explore new places , open the constellation maps , spot them and laugh at your victories .

Never lose the spontaneity , for to do things in this world you'd never need the magic of Never land or a strange elixir , but just something that you'll always find deep in your heart .

And on this way perhaps , very soon , you'll find someone as well , not because this is the right pathway rather because you are loving what you do and trust me those eyes will scream , when they are staring at your soul because you love what you do and those eyes love you ."

beautiful ...!!!
continue soon
take care




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Posted: 10 years ago
Great update dea. ...
Continue soonnn
Tnx for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing Update.
loved it.
Continue Soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful... her mother's words are just lovely... and the way he is caring for her, even when he is not there is just...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Aww Nids Beautifully written👏
Love this story update soon😊
Read 5 chapters in one go,sorry for reading it this late i dont like waiting guess henceforth i will have to😆
PS-Longer updates please😉



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Posted: 10 years ago
So sorry for the late comment...
I just read the 3rd 4th nd the 5th chapter...
I must say u r a fab writer...
In the 3rd chapter i loved how manik consoled her and tried to calm her down...
4th chapter was the best one... The strong nandu was bck... I loved whatever happened at aryamann's house... The slap was perfect ...
I need to mention that all the quotes and those 6-words stories are too good...
Yes chapter 5 was definitely inspiring...
Loved all the updates and thankz 4 the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
You made Manik a six word story writer, that's amazing you know! So different and so good. Because I am this big fan of six word stories, it just amazes me how one can convey so much in six words :D
Also, the French title, ouiii xD I love French and it's close to my heart hihi I wonder why I did not find the story earlier.
And you write soo well, not your first work I am reading heheh, you're so good! I am really looking forward to it and hope you update soon 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago


the titles soo prettayyy!!
anyway ..firstly like the biggest sorry to you for being soo damn late ...n now you cant be angry too cause its ur bday tmrw ...i m saved yayyeee

i m sorry cause i asked for u to write , n couldnt comment or read properly
anyway ..todays the day ...i m gonna read each part n comment 😳
Edited by phoenixashes - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: OhMeriJaan

Nidhi!🤗 You slay with your words! Sheer bliss it is to read you write! Just how do you manage to bring the emotions spot on with your words? I just LOVE the last 3 chapters! That punch was bloody awesome! And Manik and Nandini slowly but steadily falling for each other is just But your words are MAGIC! I cant wait to read more of you and see where this story is heading!

janani ..tysm 🤗
i m sooo glad that u loved it sooo muchh
really ur comments make my day , i m happy that u love the way its heading
tysmm once again 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -Chandramukhi..

Nidhi🤗it was great. MuM is the first and the best teacher. Nandini has her memories and her words are awe inspiring. I loved it😳

divya ..tysmmm🤗
indeed ...no better teacher in such matters
i m glad u liked it 😳

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