Manan SS ZAHENASEEB chp #22 pg 133 link/thread2 on pg 1 - Page 2

Created

Last reply

Replies

933

Views

286.2k

Users

178

Likes

4.5k

Frequent Posters

SONIAGHOSH thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#11
AWESOME UPDATE
LOVE IT

PLEASE WRITE ON DAILY BASE

CONTINUE SOON

THANKS FOR THE PM
nikki.smiley95 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#12
please update yrrr...its been sooo long.
i have been waiting for the update since soo many days...
please its a request.😊
Fatima_mir thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 10 years ago
#13
Hey guysss here I'm ...ignore the mistakes as plzz

Chapter 3 A

Nandini and manik were talking talking and talking when suddenly they realised that they were somewhere there where they should not talk too much ...of course at the hospital

Nandini: manik BTW itny sab baton mein I forgot to ask ..y did u come to the hospital are u alright??
She immediately grabbed his wrist and started checking whether he's having a fever
A smile appeared on his face looking and thinking on how much she still cares for me...even more then before...
He was brought out of his thoughts when she shooked his shoulder
Nandini:manikkk kaha kho gye yarrr ...tell na kia hua ..???

When suddenly Dr tacker came and both manan stood straight ..

Dr tacker:hey sorry it was an important call anyways ...so my boy lemme introduce u to the sweetest,prettiest and dedicated girl who has done aloottt in such a small age ..so this is nandini..nandini moorthy she's a dentist here but with that she also knows how to handle those kids ..(he pointed towards the door where manik saw 4 boys standing of age nearly 6 or 7)
He continued.: they r suffering from cancer and had lost each and every little hope to survive but she gave them strength and now they r sure that all they need to do is pray and have medicines on time

Manik was feeling proud and was smiling all the while
Dr continued..
And nandini this is manik he has just come back from Canada after completing his BDS and he wanted to spend he's holidays by doing something rather then waisting at home so I thought of bringing him here u know Dr Patel he is on leave for 3 months till then manik can take his place and after that tou he's going back to Canada anywaysss
Now was the turn of nandini to smile she was actually smiling brightly listening about manik that too something which she couldn't believe as for her manik was just an irresponsible and tension free boy(yes he is still tension free but now he likes to work instead of waisting time)

And then both manan said :I know in union to surprise on which Dr said what do u guyss know ..oh about each other ..so mere anei sw pehlei he sary i nfo lely aik doosrey ki
Manik :Dr nandini is a girl whom I know since I was small we were in fact are best friends..
He said looking straight in her eyes
And she replied :yesss Dr we r best friends FOREVER...
Manik smiled on the way she said forever as to tell him only foreverrr

Dr was stunned as he never expected that but cleari g his thoughts he said
Dr:wohoo so that's great nandini now it's your responsibility to guide him about everything related to the hospital...
He said and after talking he left bidding goodbye

Manik:so my dear bfF chalei to see my cabin
Nandini :haha suree
And they left...
This was all witnessed by someone
None other then soha..now she was very happy as manik will come here daily and she'll be able to see him .. But for now she wanted to take his autograph...
She talked to nandini and she being every sweet soul requested manik to give his interview..
On which he without arguing gave ...soha was so happy..
Time passed and now it was time to go home..

Scene change
Malhotra mansion
Nyonika was talking over the phone
Nyonika:yes I told u before also that now it's right time for manik to get married ...Mr malhotra plzzz na do something and convince him as he is never gonna listen to me
Mr malhotra: OK OK I'm coming na we'll def talk to him...u just find a good rishta for him
Nyonika : tha k God I didn't had to convince u also
Mr malhotra:of course not yar I also wanna play with my maniks little manik
And here both were getting excited on only having a thought of manik getting married as to desperately see how there one an only ladla betaaa look on his marriage

(Maniks parents lovees him alot like more then anything in this world as he was the biggest happiness of their lives..and of course he was the son of the millionaire businessmen... They loved their son unconditionally and can do anything for him...he wanted to do bds ..he knew that even if he won't study science it won't matter as he was already hier of a big business industry.. But he wanted to study and here today he is by a name of his own Dr manik malhotra )

Scene shifted
Manik :come let's go together ..
Nandini :OK
They sat in maniks car and he drove...
Nandini:manik kanaa jarei hei
Manik:nandini guess
Nandini:umm at your place???
Manik:noppp
Nandini:my place???
Manik:no!!
Nandini:thenmnnn??
Manik :guess!!
Now she was frustrated as the suspense was killing her..
Manik seedhei seedhei batao naaa
Manik:ohkkk..so nandini here we r
He parked the car and got out of the car to open her door he offered his hand to her to which she happily and immediately took..
Manik smiled on her sudden and quick act..
Here they were where they met each other for the last time 7 years ago...
Nandini got a flash back of how they cried and didn't wanted to leave each other
And she smiled and hugged manik to which he responded
Nandini:I missed u so muchhhdo
Manik:I missed u too
It was a beautiful place with medium sized mountains that shows the view of the beautiful city
It was already 5pm and the view in front of them was like the entire city was shining cuz it was winters and sun sets early..
They stood there silently and manik broke the silence and said
Manik:nandini do u think that any friendship can change into some other relation
Nandini got confused but said:thinking about her feelings:manik agrr two friends aik doosrey se pyar kerei. Like different type ka u know what I mean he nodded ..so of course relation to change hota he hena and u know wo insan kitna lucky ho jiska bf usk sath aik doosrey relationship. Mei hei cauz then they actually know each other they understand each other nd then.. wowww...
Now she stopped realising not to out him in any kind of doubt..
Manik was impressed and thought that he should share his feelings ..

Suddenly his phone started ringing
Manik :hello
Nyonika: hello beta where r u baby..
Manik:mommm I have a surprise for you
Nyonika:what
Manik :MOM wo Ghar mein dekhaunga
Nyonika :got curious and started saying OK jaldee Ghar ao I have a surprise for you too
Manik,:OK MOM love u byeee
Nyo:lobe u moreee baby byeee

Manik :let's go nandini
Nandini:whereee??
Manik:mere Ghar ..

On the other hand Mr malhotra arrived he came home directly and now that's the surprise she wanted to show his son...she also told him while talking not to bring dad as his flight is cancelled...

Nandini:manik I'll go with u tomorrow pakaaa promise actually MOM isn't feeling well she never tells but I know her sooo..
Manik:OK OK don't worry tumko mein MOM se kal miladunga u k kW how much she likes u..
Nandini:and u know how much my mom lovesss u..per 7 sal mei hamdono ki bat bhi nhi kerai kiu k they new k hum ko ager galty se bhi num mil gya to perhai koi nhi kerei gaaa 7 sall
And there they again started talking about those 7 years

(Manik and nandinis parents were in touch but then as time passed they got busy in their lives so that's why they haven't met yet ...and its been more then 20 days since Mrs malhotra has come back..but. Now she'll def meet her best friend through nandini)

Precap:nyonika to insist manik to get married ..and she'll get to know his feelings for nandini..


...OK so guys here's the update I know I'm superrr dooperrr late but really sorry plzzz forgive me. Do read and comment this is part A I'll post B tomorrow pakaaa till then enjoyyyhh





Lovelylav7 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#14
Awesome
..I'm tensed who is the girl manik parents decide..hope so it's nandini.
precap is gud
alind713 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#15
Awesome update
Waiting for the next
nikki.smiley95 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#16
Wowww...finally an update from you...
I was madly waiting for this chapter.
It was nice one.
Make them confess soon. 😊
Waiting for next update.
Fatima_mir thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 10 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: nikki.smiley95

Wowww...finally an update from you...
I was madly waiting for this chapter.
It was nice one.
Make them confess soon. 😊
Waiting for next update.


Thanks so much
Haha yeah soonnn
aishu3138 thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#18
Nice update...liking it...continue soon dear
angel2015 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 10 years ago
#19
Wow sweetheart.. It's a amazing story...thanks for the pm..I really liked the concept...plz continue soon...I loved it..manik and Nandini bff and doctors as well..wow!..come soon...

Loads of love
Kajal
Fatima_mir thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 10 years ago
#20
Wow sweetheart.. It's a amazing story...thanks for the pm..I really liked the concept...plz continue soon...I loved it..manik and Nandini bff and doctors as well..wow!..come soon...

Loads of love
Kajal[/QUOTE
Thankuuu for commenting I was waiting for your comment :) :***

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".