Manan SS ZAHENASEEB chp #22 pg 133 link/thread2 on pg 1 - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
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BOTH UPDATE ARE AWESOME
LOVE IT

CONTINUE SOON

THANKS FOR THE PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Hasi-Pani1

Woww!!what an amazing story...jus now i read all part in one go...
i jus loved it...thanks for the lovely n wonderful update...
u penned it so well dea...ur such an awsm writer...plsss update ASAP...Cant wait more...eagerly waiting for next part...


Thanku so much😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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TEASER...!!

Nandini:this is my fav restaurant manik u still remember..!!
Manik:obviously..!
Both smiled looking each other
Alya(POV):hmmm nandini ka to pata hei per manik ki eyes bhimkuch bolry hei...this is not simple bfF wala look..! Alyia u have to find it yarrr

Alyia:OK guys stop staring each other u guys are friends not gf/bf sab kia sochrei hongey...
Manik and nandini started looking here and there in embarrassment

Alyia:let's go I'm so hungryy..
And they were welcomed by the manager...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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looking forward the update
plz continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chap#4

They entered into maniks cabin
Nandini: manik chalei
Manik:han sure
Nadnini: oh. Manik meet my best friend alyia!
Manik:hey..
Alyia:hii...
They shaked their hands..
Now alyia was really very stuned to see manik..as he was more then attractive then she thought ...

Alyia(self talk):omggg he's so hottt...
And my friend loves him
Hmmm
Don't worry nandini I promise manik will be yours soon
Nandini: manik you know she's a wedding organiser as well as a fashion designer...
And alyia he's manik a singer and a doctor
After few talk she said
Nandini:alyia bhi hamarei sath chalry hei manik!!
Manik :ya sure y not
He smiled ...

They reached a restaurant
Nandini:this is my fav restaurant manik u still remember..!!
Manik:obviously..!
Both smiled looking each other
Alya(POV):hmmm nandini ka to pata hei per manik ki eyes bhi kuch bolry hei...this is not simple bfF wala look alyia u have ti find it yaarr
...they gave order and started eating their respective foods...when suddenly alyia thought of asking him some questions...
Alya:manik r you single yet.. I mean your so handsome..attractive. Hot..tou koi na koi to hogy Jo lucky hogy ..
Manik:hmm..well han larkia to bohat thy per mene kisi ko wesa response nhi kia cauz then u know how these girls are peechei per jati hei ..and that's something I hateee about them..
Alyia (POV):OK now that there's no one in his life ..it'll be easy...
Alyia:interesting... but there must be a girl na whom u like or u would like to love her and make her your soulmate ...
Nandini was all baffled as she was thinking if she should also ask something or let aliya ask
Manik now smirked looking at nandini ...
Yesss there is someone...
Now both the girls eyes popped out in the shock of hearing that from him
Alyia was the one to break the silence..
Wh..hoo.who??alyia said her voice was stammering
As she didn't had the courage of hearing someone else name neither nandini wanted to hear that..
Manik:well she's ...
And was stopped In the middle as his phone started ringing
Manik:excuse me..
'Yess mom'
Nyo:manik:kaha ho r u free beta
Manik:MOM y kia hua..!!
Nyo:manik mene tumhrei Leah aik larki Dekhi hei ..u are never gonna bring any girl for you so we have decided to choose ourselves...and
Manik:mom plz mene kitny bary kaha na k mujhei nhi shadi kerni I need time plzz MOM try to understand do u wanna ruin your sons life or do u want your son to ruin someone's daughter's life... And I know ap aisa kuch nhi chahtei so plzz..
Nyo:manik don't u trust me or your dad ...
Manik:I do MOM but ...
Nyo:OK bus if u do then today listen to me na plzzz...
Manik:huh..!
Nyo:r u coming
Manik:do I have any other option
Nyo:smiled widely and said:good boy OK come soon now Im waiting...
!manik returned to the table and said...
Manik:guys I have gotta go..MOM ne bulaia hei...
Nandini:manik kia hua u look angry and upset..
Manik (self talk) how clearly she reads my mind...
No I won't marry any girl she is the one for me ..yess ..OK fine MOM ..I'm coming but I swear that girl herself will say no...

Manik:no nandini actually.. MOM na she wants me to get married... And I don't wanna but ab unhonei kaha hei to unk sath jara hun at that girls home,...
Oh God MOM he said as again he saw her missed calls he wanted to say that he won't accept the proposal..but before that he had to rush home and before going he said he would drop both but they refused as alyia wanted to go for shopping so she'll call her driver
Here nandinis heart was aching as she never thought that manik would easily say yes but then she thought he must not have the some feeling as she has...he must think her as his bfF only nothing more... She was on the verge of crying
When. Her mother called her...
Kajal:nandu kaha hei tu beta ..
Nandini just drank her emotions that were about to bring tears and said..
MOM I'm just on my way back to home..what happened do u need anything.. Apki tabyiat to theek heinaaa...???
Kajal:han beta mein theek hu bas aj kuch mehman arei hei so I want you to be here till that...
Nandini:kon MOM...
Kajal:mere aik friend... Tu unsei milei GI to bohat kush hogy...plz jaldi a
Nandini:MOM its your friend na to ap enjoy kero na
Kajal:nandu behs mat ker and come home as soon as u are free OK ..now bye beta bohat kaam hei.
Nandini:OK MOM mein ary he hu

...

Nyo:manik r u ready
Manik:yeah
Maniks POV: huh tiar to aisei kerari hei jese she's taking me for my barat...
Nandini bhi phone nhi uthary..ab kia keru what if usnei koi galat meaning lelia ho..no nooo oh freakkk aisa hua too

...
Kajal:nandini tiar hena tu
Nandini :MOM ap peechlei 10 mins mei 1000 time pooch chuki hei...what's up ..??hora kia hei ..???...friend ary hei koi president ya pm nhi ara Jo if I'll not get ready to mere he Ghar se nikal dengei
And both mother daughter started laughing
Kajal:acha acha bus kerrr...or mujhei dinner ready kermei de final touch de ker aty hu

...
Manik:dad ap MOM ko samjhatey kiun nhii...y is she doing this y is she being so stubborn..
Dad:ohhh now u should know tum usi per gay ho...
And dad started giggling...
Manik:dad ap bhi nooo plz donttt...now he was all irritated...

Nyonika: let's go..

After a while dad stopped the car infront of a big home (not a mansion) but big enough to indicate the people which have throve by a good prosper live here

Maniks was stunned to see the place and said :he Ghar tou
Nyo:manik chalo batein badmein kerna..,..
He,thought he must be over thinkimg how can it be her house maybe mene gor se uska Ghar nhi dekha

And they moved towards the main gate to ring the bell...
As soon as the owner of house opened the door..manik was left baffled and stunned and shocked. .everything at the same time...
Same was the case with the owner...

Precap:nooo precap ...whose the owner..keep guessing let's see if your guess is right or wronggg...feel free to guess guyss..

So here's the update wasnt feeling well so couldn't write as i have to write on my tab to my hands start paining ...I hope u liked the chap...next is gonna be much more fun wala chap just wait and have patience till the story gets on an interesting wala zoneee u know what I mean ...
How many of u want manan to get married.??????
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
Awesome update
Loved it
And yes I want manan to get married
Plz update the next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
awesome update
love it

I am sure darwaje par nandini hai and I want manan to get marred

continue soon

thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
Nice update I want manan to get married plz plz😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
And plz update soon eagerly waiting

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