Manan SS ZAHENASEEB chp #22 pg 133 link/thread2 on pg 1

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Hi guys I'm a huge fan of kyy especially of manan and since few days I have been Willing to write FF.and this is gonna be my first story ever but before that I thought of writing SS so if ull like it lemme know then only I'll write FF or I'll continue this onlyyy
Here it goes with the character sketch=>

MANIK MALHOTRA:A very handsome, attractive, a bit arrogant doctor and lead singer of his band called CM2 (manik cabir and mukty)

NANDINI MURTHY:a girl whose quite optimistic, dedicated ,strong ,a bit arrogant yet attractive doctor
Later became soulmates

HARSHAD:A doctor whose not at all interested in his job but is interested in nandini :!

CABIR:A very loving,caring and fun loving boy and best friend of manik

MUKTY:A very sweet ,cute girl who loves to smile and spread love

ALYA:harshads sister but she hates his brother as he has a great crime history
She is the only best friend of nandini u can say they r chuddy buddy's

And their parents will also come btw but I'll explain it later
Do comment if you want me to continue :)

chapter-1

Chapter-4 on page 6
Chapter-5 on page 8
Chapter-6 on page 11
Chapter-7 on page 12
Chapter-8 on page 16
Chapter-9 on page 20
Cbapter-10 on page 23. (Tu he hai ashiqui)
Chapter-11A on page 25
Chapter-11b on pg 30. (Sangeet ceremony)
Chapter-12 pg 36. (Gal mithi mithi bol)
Chapter-13 on page 38. (Romance in bedroom)
Chapter-14 on pg 42. (Naughty manik)
Chapter-15 on pg 46. (Romance is in air)
Chapter-16 on page 49 (I love you,manik)
Chapter-17 on page 55. (I'm all yours tonight and forever)
Chapter-18 on page 62 (a beautiful morning)
Chapter-19 on page 70
Chapter-18 on page 81 (best gift ever)
Chapter-19 on page 92
Chapter-20 on page 105
Chapter -21 on page 120
Chaprer-22 on page 133



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Hi.
I am already started my ff with this title sorry but please change it.
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Doctors nice idea...continue it..pm me
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nic concept.lukng forward.
cntnue soon dr nd pm me.
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BANNER


CHAPTER 1
Nandini:mom I'm leaving and don't worry I'll be back on time or plzz apni medicine lelenaa
Love you bye (hug and kiss)
Mom:bye beta and han mere fikar mat kerna tumharey dad henaaa
Nandini:,I know mommm (wink) (while walking towards the main door)
Byee


In hospital
Nandinis assistant (NA):good morning mam
Nandini:good morning soha(soha is nandinis assistant)
Soha:ummm..
Nandini:what happened do u wanna say something??
Sohha:WO he is in your cabin and he's waiting for you mene bohat Rokaa but in vain
Nandini:whaatt..??today I'm not gonna leave him..2 week huei issey aye huei or mere peechei aisei pera hei Jesse he wants me to accept that he owns me...

Nandini was really pissed off
She opened the door with full force...
HARSHAD: good morning beautiful
Nandini:Dr HARSHAD what the hell is your problem.haaan.. Apk patients apk room mein aye gey mere mein nhi so plz go I have some appointments and patients are waiting outside
Harshad:nandini Tumhei pata hei tum gussa kerty huei orr bhi piary lagry ho
And u know na k tumhei Dekhi bageir mera kaam nhi hota
Saying this he starts walking towards her
Nandini:STOPP THERE...dekhlia na ab jao
harshad:hahahaha OK OK I'm leaving
Miss me hmmm ;)

SCENE CHANGE
manik:mom did u talk to the uncle..?he said that he has an extra seat for a doctor and I can fill it as I'm here for some months jabtak koi or doctor nhi milta.
Maniks mom: yeahhh I did and he wants to meet you tomorrow at 9:am in his hospital butt are you sure.. will u be able to tolerate these patients as I know ur patience level is very low to handle these people tumhei Canada ki bury adat pary hui hei
Manik:yes mom yaha Ghar bheta hua bhi to bore he hora hunaa cabir and mukty bhi nhi aye ab tak otherwise we would have made a song till now to isleah I thought to use my BDS degree
Mom:hmmm u r grown up itny samajhdar batei...impressive
Manik:mooommm

In the evening
In hospital...and the whole day was so hectic for nandini she had to see lots of patients
Nandini:pata nhi log teeth brush kiun nhi kerty ewww gandei gandei teeth leker ajatey heiii
'Tun tun' suddenly her phone starts ringng
Nandini:achaaa to aj mere yaad agye
Alya:sorry aorryyy Yaar u know what waha signals nhi they I'm reaallyyy sorry mere Jaan
Leave it I missed you soo much I wish you could have gone with me double triple maza kerty
Nandini:I know I wish
Alya:ok I was about to come to meet you but headache hora tha to socha kal au GI OK so be ready mere lotsss of batien sunei k Leah and guess what waha mujhei ail hot boy bhi mila
Nandini:seriously kon hei tell konnn hei WO BECHARAAA
Alya:haawww...
Nandini:hahaha
Alya:I'll tell u kal paka
...
After call ended

At nandinis place
After finishing her dinner as per routine she took her diary out from the almirah but she felt like something has fallen on the floor she picked it up and after seeing it a drop of her tear fall on the mirror of the frame she s!iled at the same time and got a flash back

FLASHBACK 10 years ago
nandini:manik what r you hiding?? Tell naaa
Manik:nandini first close your eyesss
Nandini:manik nhi plz na stop testing my patience and show me Dekhi manik u know both of us r stubborn mager kisi na kisi ko to har manni hena to chalo had manooo
Manik:uff okk baba yelo I bought this for you
Nandini:ooo wooowww manikkk FIREFLIES tumhei yaad thaaa apna promise
Manik:of course nandini mein koi bhi baat bhulskta hun but tumse kia hua koi promise nhi bhul skta
Nandini:manik u r the best,thee bessst friend any one can ever have
Look they r glowinggg but manik jab bhi mein tumharey samnei aty hun they glow werna nhi I want them to glow hameshaaa
Manik: oh so iska Matlab mujheii hamesha sath rehna pereiga to make them glow
Nandini: to mein Wese bhi tumhei kahi nhi janei deri OK let's take a picture

FLASH BACK ENDS
NANDINI:manik where are you u only said na k tum mujhsei kia hua promise nhi bhiltey to u said that you'll come back ajaooo manik I'm still waiting,waiting for my best friend I miss you so muchhh hamei aik dusrey se na Mikey hue 7 years hogey hwiii

Scene change
Maniks place
Manik is lying under the cloudy sky but still he can see some stars and a smile appeared on his face remembering
Flashback
Nandini:manik tum kia dekhrey ho sky mein
Manik:my favv stars
Nandini:manik cloudy sky mein stars nhi dikhteeyyy
Manik:mujhei dekhrey
Nandini:manik
Manik:hmmm
Nandini:u said that I am your star phirr tum unhei kiuuu dhudre ho?
Manik:cauz they r my favv stars
Nandini: what manik u r such a liar yeto tumnei mujhei kaha thaaa jao mein nhi bolty
While punching his stomach
Manik:ouuchhh nandini ruko ruko sorry Yaar I was kidding
You r my real star yeto bus dekhnei k Leah hei or hamesha mere sath rehnei k Leah bhi nhi but u r the one Jo mere sath hei hameshaaa se or hamesha k Leah yes you r my shinning star
So stop being jealoused that too from them
Nandini:hmmm u better don't give them more priority
Manik:acha babaaa

Suddenly manik came out of his thoughts as her mother called him
Manik:coming mom
Manik:nandini tum kaha ho...but jahan bhi ho u promised to be my star I'll find u you'll have to shine for me ull have to fulfil your promises and mujhei bhito apnei promise fulfil kernei henaaa

Precap:manan will meet...
How when janei k Leah stay tunneddd after reading heheh

So guysss this is my first time so ignore the typos anddd do tell me plz how did u find it I'll finish this SS in 1 or 2 more chapters waiting for the commentsss
Edited by Fati.crisp - 9 years ago
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awesome update
love it


continue soon

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Continue please
Next part kab upload karoge??
Its so interesting
Jaldii Karna...👍🏼
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Chapter 2

...
NEXT MORNING
MALHOTRA MANSION
at 7:50
Maniks alarm starts ringing
Manik:oh God stop it Yaar pata chalgia hei k its time now shut up...
After 5 mins manik got up and he started checking his phone when he remembered that today he has to meet his uncle
Manik:ohhh gosshhh manik how can you forgettt ab jaldee ker Yaar abhi change kernei mein or breakfast kernei mein bhi tunei time lagana heiii...
Saying this he went to take bath...
On the other hand nyonika asked the butler to call manik for the breakfast..
'Nock' 'nock'
Manik:yesss..
Butler:sr ma'am is waiting for you on the dinning table
Manik:tell her I'm coming in 5 mins...

ON THE TABLE
Manik:good morning mom..manik says while pecking on her forhead
Nyonika:good morning honey..
Manik:so what's uppp..
Or mera fav breakfast kia baat hei
Nyonika:umm yeah anddd ...I have a surprise for you.
Manik:reallyyy...tell na whaattt??
Nyonika:well your friend is coming...
Manik:who cabir or mukty????
Nyonika:socho sochooo
Manik:mom tell naa
Nyonika: well your dad is coming
Manik:what reallyy, how I mean whennn??
Nyonika:tonight BTW he asked me not to tell you he wanted to give a surprised..
Manik: he never told meee any ways ab mujhei flight ka time batadei I'll go to pickk him or mein keru ga surpriseee
Nyonika:hahah that's exactly why I told you
Manik: :)
Nyonika: aren't you getting late its already 8:25 or waha pohanchtey hue 20 mins lagei gei
Manik:ohh yeah so I just hope mera kam hojaei I'll let you know ok
Byeee
Nyonika:byeee


Scene change
Hospital
Soha:good morning ma'am
Nandini:good morning
Soha can u plz check if aj koi appointments hei or hei to what r the timings
Soha:sure ma'am
Nandini:I'm waiting in my cabin jaldee aoo

Nandini:and ajto harshad nhi na hei under
Soha:no ma'am abhi tak wo aya he nhi
Nandini took a sigh of relief
Nandini:thankkk God
Nandini went in her cabin and suddenly her phone started ringing
She saw it was harshads number
She disconnected the call he called for 2 3 times and then again someone called and this time nandini was literally mad at him that she without looking on the screen received the call and started shouting on which she heard something from the other side of the phone which made her calm
Alya:relaxx nandini its mee alya
Nandini's POV:should I tell her about what harshad is doing with me...no no she'll get angry with him forget it lemme deal with this jerk alone
Alya:NANDINIII are you there sunryyy hooo
Nandini:ohhh sorry sorry acctuaally last 10 mins se koi unknown banda call kera tha to I thought WO dubara hei isleah socha tha Zara uski class leluuu
Alya:oh acha I thought tumnei subha subha crow khaliaa XD
Nandini:hahahah very funny by the way where are you
Alya:I'm on my way bus pohanch rhi hu itnyyy subha koi uthta hei srf tumse milnei k Leah mein 9:00 am clinic aryyy huun waah kitny achi dost huna mein.
Nandini:yeah righhttt OK chalo phone band ker or drive the car carefully
Alya:lo pohanchh gye meii
Buttt waiiitt yaha itna rush kiuuu
Nandini:kaha
Alya:right in front of your hospital
Nandini:reallyyy
Alya:lemme call you back balkei I'm coming in...okay bye
Nandini:hel.hellooo
Goood ye larki bhi na
Nandini went out of her cabin towards soha
Nandini:so.sohaaa...areyyy where is shee ..kaha ghee
Soha came running
Soha:maaammm guess what bahir WO aya hei
Soha said while stammering
Nandini:wait wait soha just relax and take a deep breath
Now tel kia hua... kon hei...is there any kind of accident out there or whaaatt?????
Soha:ma'am that singer he has come here OMG he is sooo handsome I'm gonna diee ma'am plz mein jau I wanna take his autograph or else he'll go
Nandini:konsa singer or koi singer yaha kiun aya hei hope he's alright
Soha:no make he's completely alright he's to giving autograph
Nandini:ohkkk whatever go u also take his autograph otherwise I'll have to bear your tears huhh gooo..
Soha:aww maammm u r the best thanku thanku so much u know what I'm not only his fan but a lover I love him so much like allooottt
Nandini:soha go..leaaaveee or else I'll not let you.
Soha:sorry sorry I mean thanku thanku
Nandini:uff she's maaddd

On the other hand
Manik:guyss calm down...relax..
Plzz people lemme talk first
Fans:WE LOOOVVEE MANIKK
WE LOOOVVEE MANIKK
and they shocked manik
Though there were not alooot of fans there but the ones present there were more then enough to make him feel lucky and proud
And suddenly at the very right time his uncle (Dr tacker) came to rescue him
Manik:ohh thankuu so much uncle ajto seriously u saved me
Uncle:Hahaha that was much needed
Manik:but seriously uncle I didn't know that people from India listen to my songs so much that I didn't even utter a word and they recognised me
Uncke:or u should say they look at your pictures more then they hear your songs
Manik:ohh maybe
And they started laughing
On the other hand
Soha got so excited as she saw him coming in the hospital
And nandini ...
She got upset as she saw harshad coming towards her cabin
Nandini:ye alya kaha rehgyee...usko parking nhi milry hogy
Nandini:oh God plzzz save me from this jerk plzz ..and started picking her files from the reception counter to pretend like she's working
Harshad:hey beautiful
Nandini frowned seeing his face
Nandini tried to walk away when harshad blocked her way
Leave my way harshad..or else I'll tell alya she said angrily and harshad laughed
Ohhh I'm scared hahahaha do u really think I'm scared of her...said harshad mockingly
This time she thought of shouting but then she realized that no one is there to protect her or save her
As every one was scared of that jerk except for uncle tacker and she thought he hasn't come yet
And all of a sudden harshad gripped her wrist tightly to which she shouted
Nandini:leave my hand. You BL*** ...i wasn't saying anything to you before.. It doesn't mean that u can do whatever you want to and this is a hospital stop creating a scene HHAAARSHAAD
Harshad was acting like 'I don't give a damn to whatever she's saying'
Where are you taking me...nandini said
And saying this she digged her nailS with all her force in harshads bear arms on which he cried...she felt her hand were free
Harshad:oh shittt what the helll are you maddd...
And nandini started running but on her way she felt something is missing from her wrist
Nandini:no nooo I can't loose that its so precious...but harshad ager WO wapis agya to but I have to find it
It always give me the feel of his presence

Scene change
Manik:uncle your hospital is really big haann and its so beautiful ab or bhi koi jaga rehty hei...I'm sooo tired chal chal k
Uncle:hahah han bus ye floor rehgya and u know what yaha ki aik doctor hei she's so talented as in itnei kam time mein usnei itnei dil jeeet Leah would u like to meet her??...
Manik:yeah sure..why not but what's her name jsiki ap itny tareefei kerei hei uska name bhi to hoga naa...
And suddenly manik felt something under his shoes
Aii..aik minute uncle
And manik bent down and picked the bracelet... he remembered


FLASHBACK

manik:nandini this is for you as I'm going but this will always remind u of me...
Nandini:what's this??
Manik:its a friendship band ...but buttt it's a special type of band look it has some musical notes on it...here one for you and this one for me
Nandini:so ham dono k aik jese
Manik while making her wear it...
Manik:yesss...so tell kesa laga
Nandini:manik u r going but ull always stay in my heart yetoo mujhei pata tha but now even in my hands hmmm nice idea..
And his thoughts were interrupted by uncle and he said
manik:NANDINI
uncle:what...kahan hei...aik min abhi to mene tumhei nam bhi nhi bataya doctor ka
Manik:ye nandini ka hei
Uncle: kia nandini ka hei
Manik:uncle tell me is doctor ka kia naam hei.
But before uncle could say anything his phone started ringing and he excused himself and went to attend the call
On the other hand nandini was running back to find her bracelet as soon as she came she started looking on the floor
Nandini:plz ayyapa miljaei plz plz and she was crying
Manik turned his body to see where the voice was coming from...
And what he saw was something he didn't imagined
He saw nandini... her nandini he was feeling out of the world he thought he was imagining but to his shock it was real she was real ...
Nandini:plzzz miljaeei kaha gya yaha he to kharey they humm
Suddenly she heard a voice a voice which she was afraid of none other then harshad
HARSHAD:sooo nandini I knew it iii knew k ull come back he said mockingly
Nandini:without looking at his face said: harshad I'm warning you mere kareeb mat ana werna mein tacker uncle ko sab batdun GI and then u know tumhara akhry day hoga ye
Harshad:as if I care
And he started moving towards her..she started moving back and suddenly something came in her way due to which she slipped...she closed her eyes as she thought now she's gonna hit the ground...but to her surprise she didn't fell and felt strong pair of hands around her waist and neck...she slowly opened her eyes but before she could see...the person made her stand and went back...
Harshad:hey bro u stay away...its none of your business
Manik:it is my business(in full anger)
Harshad:ohh really do u even know whom u r talking to
Manik:ohh shut up I don't even give a damn about it... What I care is how did u dare touching her(manik said while punching hard on his face)
Harshad:u MRRR...
Nandini was in a serious shock
Manik and harshad were fighting and all the staff and soha came running every body tried to stop them
But they were in no mood of stopping but luckily Dr tacker came and the fight was stopped
Dr tacker:what the hell was going on over here
Harshad:Dr ye larka pagal hei look kese bilavaja mujhei marnei lag pera meito isko first time dekha..nhi dekha to hei per mila pehli dfa hun but I don't know why he started beating me
Nandini:THATTT I will tell you uncke... She narrated every thing from start till the end
Listening to which Manik and uncle got a big shock of their lives
Dr tacker:harshad ...he came infront of him and gave him a tight slap ...and said:how can u be so cheap...I don't believe k mein tumhei pehchan he nhi paia jis insan ko larkio ki izzatt kernei ka nhi pata us k Leah saza hoty hei or your punishment is that you r fired get out of my hospital right now
Harshad wanted to say something but before that security guards came and took him away uncle went to nandini
Uncle:nandu beta I'm sorry mene isko pehchana he nhi.. U should have told me before only na...khudi itna sehty rhy
Nandini:uncle u know na I'm brave so its OK
Manik was looking at them he didn't utter a single word
Suddenly uncles phone started ringing on which he had to excuse and he ordered every one to go back to there work ...
Nandini suddenly realised that manik is there
She turned and saw manik
She went near him she pinched his arms on which he said:ouch ,
Nandini:manikkk are you for realll
Manik:yes nandini it's me...and I'm real...
Or ye kia tumhary adat nhi gye mujhei pinch kernei ki...
...
He smiled and...
Manik moved a bit more closer and they both hugged each other it was a rib crashing hug...the hug that was so passionate...the hug after 7 long yearss... The intense hug which none of them were willing to break but they had to after 1 long min...
They looked into eachothers eyes and manik saw a drop of tear in her eyes he quickly wiped it off
Manik:nandini y r u crying... Look that harshad is gone ...I'm here na ab WO kuch nhi kahega he can't even touch you
Nandini:,(while smiling ) tum bilkul nhi badlei u r the same manik...itny care aj bhi
Manik:nandini moorthy if you have forgotten lemme remind u I promised to always protect you so look here I m...
Nandin again hugged manik
Nandini:ohhh manik I missed you sooo much
Manik:I missed you too nandini
And they stayed in each others embrace for few more mins
Manik suddenly broked the hug and said
Manik:nandini tum sachemi doctor bhangaiii
Nandini:han y r you so shocked
Manik:no because aik shocking news mein bhi dena thy
Nandini:what
Manik: jis k Leah mein apni best friend se dooor rha WO kam pura hogya
Nandini in full excitment:manikkk finally you became a doctorrr
Manik:yesss
Nandini:ommggg manik u remember tum kitna ler ker gye they kitana drama kerty they
Mene nhi bhanana doctor bla blaaa...
Manik:or aj doctor bhi to tumharey insist kernei se he bhana hunaaa


Precap:manik nandini will share some good time with each other
(They'll definitely realise that what they feel is actually love)
...
Okkkaay guysss it was a really big one seriously I didn't got a good response but this one was for those who commented plzzz do read and do comment as I really want a feed back as it is my first story
And plz igmkre the typos jaldee jaldee likha :)
Edited by Fati.crisp - 10 years ago
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hI lovely update..manan part awesome..
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It was really good and long too can't wait for the next part. Yeh don't fell sad for not getting response your story is brilliant if possible do pm me continue soon

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