MaNan SS : The Incomplete Song (Part 10 - Pg 62 - 13th April)

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Arunima

@jesse93

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#191

Really loved your update and especially the whole conversation of Cabir and Nandini .
Hope after this Nandu will decide to get back into the life of her love.
Aur rahi baat hamari angry chhotoo bache ki toh only Nandu can handle this Bacha.
Update the next part asap.

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rev4eva

@rev4eva

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Posted: 10 years ago

#192

Originally posted by: Endurance
The Sharp conversation they held .. It was breath taking totally engrossing ... Beautifully expressed & penned thoughts of Cabir about Manik. .

Manik is nothing but a broken and angry child whose sight was snatched from him when he has just begun to see the light.

I loved this particular line very much ..

I desperately wanna read Nandini's reasoning...

Thank you so much dearie... Its always a pleasure to read your comments. 😊😊😊

I wanted their conversation to be short and sharp but was doubtful but after reading your comments, I know I have achieved it...

Cabir is the one who has understood MaNan more than themselves, so I wanted him to be the cupid and struck the realization for Nandini.❤️

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rev4eva

@rev4eva

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#193

Originally posted by: cutypie04
Lovely update dea. ..
Continue soonnn

Thanks dear... Will post the next part by end of the week😊😊😊

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rev4eva

@rev4eva

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Posted: 10 years ago

#194

Originally posted by: ritikasingh_85
It was awesome 🥳
I was felling like I m reading a sonnet

u seem to have know alot about love 🤪
beautiful pen down
come soon

Thank you so much hun...

Your words means so much for me... Comparable to Sonnet is a great compliment dear.😳😳😳

Never been in love but I have read lots of about love though...😆😆😆

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rev4eva

@rev4eva

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#195

Originally posted by: baani9
You have left me speechless how well cabir explained maniks vulnerability to Nandini.
Nice update.
Continue soon

Thanks dear... 😊😊😊

The part was pretty dear to me too, took awhile get it conveyed. Glad it reached you the way I wanted it

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rev4eva

@rev4eva

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Posted: 10 years ago

#196

Originally posted by: NAVYA64
lovely update

Thanks dear😊

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rev4eva

@rev4eva

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#197

Originally posted by: Sidhaarthi
Hi you penned it so well!!! Cabirs words r still ringing on my ears so beautiful and very touching!!!! Manik needs happiness along with Nandini waiting for the next update

Thanks dear...😊😊😊

I'm so happy that you enjoyed the Cabini convo... It's my personal fav part too.

Next update should be up by end of the week

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rev4eva

@rev4eva

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#198

Originally posted by: angel98
Beautifully penned...
Cabir know manik better than himself...
I love cabira...
Cont soon...
Waiting for nxt...

LOVE,
AAROHI...

Thanks Aarohi😊😊😊

You were so right... Cabir always knows Manik better than himself.

Cabir is my jaan too...

Next part will be up by end of the week

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rev4eva

@rev4eva

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#199

Originally posted by: Nikki_Titli
Wow just wow..Cabir's every line abt manan relation to nandu ws epic true n u hv written it in most impactful manner..hope nw nandu get back Manik back to who he was before she left him..

Aww Nikki...🤗

Thanks dear... Nandu will be back to her Manik...

I promised you a happy ending nah, you will get it soon😊😊😊