MaNan SS : The Incomplete Song (Part 10 - Pg 62 - 13th April)

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Manya

@manya_189

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Posted: 10 years ago

#181

I could so relate to each abd every word of Cabir..
It was so real and emotional..
Great update !!

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arshuaar

@arshuaar

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Posted: 10 years ago

#182

amazing... beautifully penned ... read all parts in one goo
so real and emotional

Hats off to you👏...

Bira... was just awesome The way he explained about MaNan relation and about his life

Waiting for the next update

Cont soon

Thanx for PM😊

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pagolmeye

@pagolmeye

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Posted: 10 years ago

#183

Sorry was out of the city for somwe work thats why couldntsee ur post. Read the last 2 chap in one go. It was perfect. The convobetween cabir and nandini was soo goid. I was like 'awww'.
Manik nandini convo was the best part. Especially that sentence pierced my heart into pieces, "Alive and singing"
Hope you give us more of MaNan moments in next update and I am dying to know abt Manik's condition after that convo.

Good luck 😊 😊

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Kapk

@Kapk

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Posted: 10 years ago

#184

I just read all the 4 parts in a row! Breathtakingly beautiful story that is so damn well written. You manage to execute each of their emotions SO perfectly with your words. Loved every single bit of. The latest part was heart wrenching. Thank you so much for writing long parts. I actually didn't want any of it to end - that is how much gluing your words are.

I am really looking forward to your next update. Do PM me too if possible 🤗

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Kapk

@Kapk

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Posted: 10 years ago

#185

P.S.: This has to be One of the Elegant and finest SS that I have come across 😳

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Nisha

@nisha150

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Posted: 10 years ago

#186

WOOWW!!

U penned it down very beautifuuulllyyy

Cabirrr...he is such a sweetheartt

The way he told everythng it was jst superrrbb

And virattt i jst love this cutiee pieee

Sry frgt to mention abt him in my befre comment

Jst loveee him

Waiting for MaNan's Reunion and fab5's reaction

Do pm me .

Love

Nisha❤️

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Cooki

@Cooki

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Posted: 10 years ago

#187

awesome...👏

cabir's speech was showing the pure love between manik & nandini...

marvelous..

cont soon...

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Kuushi

@Kuushi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#188

Wow..u are an awesome writer..u beautifully penned cabir's speech of love and also the pure love of manan..love cabira for putting all his heart in bringing manan closer and also could feel his pain while revealing his emotional past.. he doesn't want manan to experience that kind of pain or to loose their true love...well loved every moment of the chapter waiting for nandini's reaction and to read more of the story..and don't worry we love the long updates..so please continue soon with a long update and Thanku for the pm :)