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Posted: 10 years ago
#51
More mambers on mission r u trying to build up a army against aryaman. But aryaman is such a jurk.update soon. And thanks for the pm sweety.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52
Amazing update but too emotional plzzz update soon nd thnks for PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53
Awesome update. ...
Continue soonnn
Tnx for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54
This will make their bond stronger!!
MaNan all the way! Woohooo!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#55
Finally Nandini spoke her heart out.
She was holding this much since so long.
She had gone through a lot and she undoubtedly needed to loose the burden off her mind. This was much needed not just to save Aliya but also the soothe herself.
MaNan hug.. 😆 👏 total bliss!!
A step towards from Manik Nandini to MaNan is finally taken.. 👏
Awesome update!!
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Continue soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56
CHAPTER 8A

"you seemed to be new." savita ma'am asked as soon as I entered the music room room with manik. "no ma'am, actually I have attended first class then I was on one week leave. I have returned today." I managed this much. She nodded and I took a seat near manik"so students,aaj lets have some fun. I mean ek hafte tum logo ko training dete hua I have been bored. let's see tum logo mein kitna talent hai so, starting with nandini. come on nandini
I sing a song for us. And no ifs and buts. Let's hear it from nandini
"ma'am but.." manik tried to stop ma'am. But I gestured him that its fine.

Duniya chhoona chaahe mujhko yun
Jaisay unki saari ki saari main
Duniya dekhe roop mera
Koi na jaane bechari main.
(I remembered how Aryaman was trying to come close to me. His words echoed in my ears)

Haaye, tooti saari ki saari main
Tere ishq mein hui Awari main
Haaye, tooti saari ki saari main
Tere ishq mein hui Awari main..
(a lone tear escaped from my eyes)

Koi shaan bulaaye
Koi daam lagaaye
Main bhi upar se hansti
Par andar se haaye..
(I choked while singing. I was unable to sing more.)

Kyun dard chupaye baithi hai
Kyun tu mujhse kehti hai
Main toh khud hi bikhra huaa

(I heard a voice and looked in that direction only to find manik singing for me. I could feel the sadness in his eyes)

Haaye andar andar se toota main
Tere ishq mein khud hi se rootha main
Haaye andar andar se toota main..
Tere ishq mein khud hi se rootha main

( I could feel the guilt in his voice for not being Able to save me that day, for not being able to stand by my side when I need him the most)

Main jee bhar ke ro lun
Teri baahon mein so lun
Aa phir se mujhe mill
Main tujhse ye bolun:
Tu anmol thi
Pal pal bolti thi
Aisi chup tu laga ke gayi
Saari khushiyaan kha ke gayi..

(tears started flowing my eyes not because of that day but Because of the guilt that manik was feeling because of me)

Haaye, andar andar se toota main..
Tere ishq mein khud hi se rootha main
(I wanted to tell him that it was not his fault. I want to hug him and take all the sorrows away.)

Haaye, teri hoon saari ki saari main
Ho.. par tere liye bazaari main!
I concluded the song.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#57
CHAPTER 8B

All the claps around me went numb when I saw manik loking at me with so much intensity. I could not remove my gaze from him. I liked manik from the very first day I saw him. I always admired his looks but today I got to know about his so pure heart. I never told him about my feelings because earlier he was with soha and know he liked aliya. Ma'am 's voice helped me to look away. "good job nandini and manik. You both were awesome" Ma' am said. I smiled I looked at manik he was also smiling and looking at me
After the class got over I waited outside for Manik as ma'am wanted to talk to him.
There I saw Aryaman he was running behind a girl. the girl In front of him seems to be very angry. I hid myself behind the door. Aryaman was Continuesly muttering sorry "baby please listen... I love you" after Aryaman went from there I came out. Who was she is Aryaman double dating. He is both cheating on aliya and this girl. I think I should follow him but manik... No i'll follow him. I went behind him. I saw entering him in a empty classroom. I went near the door put my ear on the door in order to hear their conversation. " you love me right then why didn't you accepted me in front of everyone... Agar tum ne aisa kar liya hota to hamara break up nahi hota."
"navya try to understand me.."Aryaman begged " no Aryaman don't follow me.." I heard her footsteps approaching. I moved away from the door and started running when I dashed in someone. I looked up to find cabir . The door opened and he hugged me tightly so that they would not be able to see our faces and pulled me to the corner. I could hear the girl going from there which were followed by some more footsteps. I thought Aryaman had also left. Suddenly, someone strongly pulled me from the hug. I looked up to see who pulled me only to find it was manik. He was angry.. No no no he is Damn angry but why? He started punching cabir. He was continuously blabbering "how dare you.. How dare you touch her.. How dare you hug my nandu... Don't you come near her got that... Otherwise.." I came between both of them "what are you doing manik stop... Manik pagal ho gaye ho kya... Why are you punching him.. " "seriously, tum puch rahi ho yeh,... Koi bhi aake tumhe aise hug karega aur tum kuch nahi bolegi tumhe toh mujh pe ho chailana hota hai na hamesha.. Ab is mein bhi. I am at the fault" he said. "oh hello, mister angry young man..." cabir started to say. But manik held his collar and pointed a finger towards him and said "don't you dare to interrupt in between... Just keep quiet." "I kept my hand on manik' back and said politely "manik ek baar baat toh suno..." I knew manik ka gussa satween asman par hain aur is vakt hum mein se kisi ek ko calmly cheezo ko handle karna hoga. Manik relaxed a bit . "listen dude... Tumhe shayad nahi pata but.." cabir tried to speak again. "I am not here to listen to anyone... Especially you... Got that" manik said to cabir. Cabir then shook his head and turned to me "nandu ab tumhi samjhao is angry hulk ko.. Bhalai ka zamana hi nahi hai ek toh tumhe bachaya ... And yeh mujh pe hi chila raha hai... Oh sorry my mistake... I accept it... Chila na toh bahut choti cheez hai no seriously... Bahut choti yeh toh mujhe maar raha hai... I mean agar koi kisi ki girlfriend ko bachata hai toh use thank you bolte hai na ki maarte hai.. Like he did to me... Nandini tumne apne iss boyfriend ko kuch manners sikhaye hai ki nahi... " "shut up cabir mein baat kar rahi hoon na... And he is not my boyfriend." I said. I so wished him to be my but... What are you thinking nandini bhul gayi he loves aliya.
"nandini will kindly explain me everything and everything includes this idiot too." manik said pointing towards cabin. "manik.." I glared him. "see, when you were talking to ma'am I found Aryaman following this girl named..."I said but I just couldn't get the name of her"Navya.." said cabin in a low tone. "you know her?" I asked "yes navya is my best friend.. Beside you. She was in relationship with Aryaman for past 6 months. But we found that he was least interested in her. He didn't had the guts to accept her infront of every one, so we thought there is something fishy with him. Just then we made a new friend dhruv when he saw Aryaman he strictly order navya to stay away from him... I just don't know why.. We trusted dhruv and navya broke up with him but he still follow her. I spotted Aryaman following navya and wanted to know how navya would react to harshad when I found... And you know.. That You are so irresistible that I just hugged you... By the way an awesome experience. I must say..." cabir said the last line looking at me and glancing at manik in between. I chuckled. "cabir such a big flirt you are" I hit him playfully. "you know him.." manik said controlling his anger. Why is he getting so angry. I just sometime don't understand him"yes, he is a great friend of mine." I said pulling cabir 's cheeks. "vaise nandini tum yeh sherlock Holmes vala stunt abhi thodi der pehle kyun kar rahi thi. Tumhe pata hai ki Aryaman kitna dangerous hai.? " cabir asked. "voh I was doing this for aliya... She has been dating him for past 2years...I want to save aliya from his trap. I and manik are on a mission to reveal true colors of Aryaman. When I saw Aryaman following navya so I thought it would be a great opportunity to get some more information about him." "so you could wait for me na..." manik said facing me towards himself. "I don't want to repeat my mistake again and again. Last I was unable to save you but not again" manik said holding me. "what happened last time..." cabir asked "Aryaman tried to force himself upon her..but dhruv saved her on time " manik said. I controlled my tears from falling. I don't wanted to fall week. "what aur nandu tumne mujhe bataya bhi nahi ..." cabir said. "ok lets not talk about it..." manik said. "vaise what's your plan about nabbing Aryaman down..." cabir said. "we don't have anything planned yet..." manik said looking here and there. Why don't he like cabir. He is so complicated sometimes. "can I help you..?" cabir asked "why...???" manik said at once "manik I elbowed him in his stomach. "because I want to take revenge from him after what he did to navya and nandini... I don't want any another girl to be heart broken" cabir said I was supper excited and agreed to it. Manik har baar ki tarha mujh pe gussa karne laga but I handled him. Now you your air Aryaman and see what we would do to you
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Rocking update finally navya nd cabir's entry nd now it is giving us hints that manik also hv something for nandu i m vry excited for their plan plzz contonue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing update dea. ...
Continue soonnn
Tnx for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#60
I wish soon he realise his feelings for nadu
GR8 update
Awsome
Cabir join the Misson then
It's gonna be so much fun
Tnx for pm Amzzzing

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