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riyatolani90

@riyatolani90

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Posted: 10 years ago

#431

Awesome awesome awesome tysm for update dear it was just fantastic love the cute romance...pls add more 😉 update next soon dear hats off to ur writing keep goin👏

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Ayesha Nazrat

@musicialtie

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+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#432

hayeee the rain kiss...

tthe bathroom door scene... just changing the place of manan... i really could see hat infrnt of me...

no need to say u HOW MUCH I LOVED THE UPDATE...

addicted of ur ff...

loved how you show the 2 Rs...

main to maar hi gayi...

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Darshika

@Darshika888

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#433

awesome update
loved it
thanks for pm

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anjali

@anj521

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#434

update new part soon...plzzz😊

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Absa hasna

@Hasi-Pani1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#435

wow its amazing dea..i jus loved it plss contnue soon.. 🥺

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piyu008

@piyu008

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#436

hey jz read all part in one go...

amazing dear..the storyline flow ..its perfect..

MaNan falling for each-other..their marriage ..aaliya thingy..all written so well..

loved the last part..i too wanted them to kiss in rain n they did😃

update soon😃

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Fatima

@Fatima_mir

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#437

I read the second part today kal nhi read ker ski buttt buttt I loooveddd it sooo much seriously
The song
Ahmmm the kisss ;P
And the best part was 'this is my pillow' awww :**** thanku so much for writing so beautifully