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Posted: 10 years ago
Awsome...Amazing...Lovely update...
The way manik console nandini...it was mindblowing...👏
Finally manik complete first step...And gave nandini a good memory of rain...their first kiss😳...awsome😊
Thanks for 2 parts...And...Thanks for PM
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Chapter 15 A


Night went out peacefully Nandini didn't woke up due to her bad dreams. But the whole night Manik woke up time to time to check Nandini an unknown fear was still in his heart although he was almost succeeded in his intentions but still he had doubts. Next morning he slowly opened his eyes but the other bedside was empty. He woke up with a jerk but immediately he got sight of his angelic beauty standing in front of mirror struggling with her blouse strings. He smiled and got up from bed and slowly walked towards her. Seeing Manik coming to her Nandini's face lighten up that now he will help her in tying the strings.


"Ohhh thank God Manik you are awake please tie these strings na..!! Main bohat dare say try kar rahi hoon ni ho raha..!!" Nandini said smilingly ignoring the intensity and desire in her husband's eyes. Manik held Nandini from her shoulders and pulled her towards him Nandini gasped as her almost bare back touched his rock hard chest. Manik gently lowered the fabric from one of her shoulder and kissed her there Nandini closed her eyes and clutched mirror shelf for support. Manik was enjoying his effect on her,he turned her and made her face him.


"Nandini..!!Open your eyes..!!Look at me?" Manik said seductively and slowly started tying her strings. Nandini shyly opened her eyes and looked in his magical eyes.


"You remember last time when you asked me to untie these strings? I was about to kiss you na?" He said naughtily and Nandini was red tomato. "But at that time my phone started ringing and the moment was ruined..!! So that kiss is pending..!!" Manik completed with a smirk and leaned closer.


"Ooo acha..!!" Nandini said slowly and placed her hands on his chest Manik was about to claim her lips when Nandini pushed him away. Manik was like What-The-Hell.


"Ab kya Nandini..!!" Manik asked angrily.


"In your dreams Mr.Malhotra..!! Go and get ready for the office you are getting late..!!" Nandini laughed at his condition. Manik was standing crossing arms on his chest. "Aur waisy bhi I am against these unhygienic kiss..!!" She said naughtily and again started laughing.


"Unhygienic..?" Manik asked confusingly.


"Yes Mr.Romeo..!! Ap ny abhi tak brush nahi kiya hai..!!" Nandini said smilingly and Manik was like pulling his hair on her stupid logic.


"Fine..!" Manik showing fake anger,tapping his foot entered the bathroom. Nandini went to the kitchen for his breakfast.

After sometime Manik came downstairs and saw Nandini laughing with Nayonika. His heart skipped a beat her carefree attitude,her giggles,her twinkling eyes,her lips curved in a wide smile was driving him all crazy. He reached the breakfast table.


"Good Morning pretty Ladies..!!" Manik exclaimed. "What's up..??"


"Good Morning sweetheart..!! It's just I was telling Nandini about your childhood...!! How much naughty you were..!!" Nayonika replied and Nandini again started laughing to which Manik frowned.


"Achaw..!! So you both were laughing on me..!! I see..!!" Manik said angrily and both the ladies again burst out in laughter. Manik too joined them they started breakfast. Manik was admiring both the ladies.Love of his life now he can't even imagine his life without them. After breakfast Manik went towards his car and Nandini followed him.


"Acha Nandini..!!" Manik was about to sit in the car when he turned and said.


"Hmmm..!!" Nandini asked casually.


"Tum aj sham ko kya kar rahi ho??" Manik asked a little hesitant.


"Manik..!! What kind of question is that? Of course I am free..!!" Nandini said a little surprised.


"Cool than..!!" Manik exclaimed. "Ok bye..!!" Manik again was about to sit in the car Nandini held his hand.Manik gave her a confusing look.


"Ummm..!!Woo..!! Aren't you forgetting something..!!" Nandini said lowering her eyes. Manik smirked recognizing that what he has forget but he acted like he don't know.


"What am I forgetting...!! Nandini..?" Manik said naughtily.He saw her cheeks flushed.


"Nothing..!!"She turned to leave but Manik caught her hand and pulled her towards him she banged in his chest. Manik smirked and kissed her cheeks.pecking her forehead.


"That's what I was forgetting haan?" Manik asked lovingly and Nandini lowered her head shyly,just hugged him.Manik laughed at her innocence.


"Acha if your blushing session is over now can I go to office?" Manik asked holding her close.


"When will you come back..?" Nandini asked still hugging him.


"Ummm I'll be a little late..!! Actually I have a dinner tonight..!! Dinner with someone special..!!"Manik said naughtily. "Someone special" hearing this Nandini instantly broke the hug.


"Special? Who..??" Nandini asked angrily.


"Bus hai koi..!! Acha bye I am getting late..!!" Saying that Manik jumped into his car,waving her bye he left.Leaving a hell jealous and angry Nandini behind. She went back into Mansion tapping her foot.

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On reaching office Manik called Cabir because he has to plan a surprise for Nandini.In no time Cabir reached his office. Cabir worriedly entered his cabin because in msg Manik had wrote "Emergency come to my office"


"What happened Manik? Are you ok?" Cabir said worriedly sitting on chair in front of Manik.


"Yeah yeah..!! Everything is ok..!! It's just I need you help...?" Manik said hesitantly. He was afraid that when he will tell cabir that he want to plan a surprise for Nandini he will pull his leg.


"What kind of help?" Cabir said confusingly.


"Wo..!! Actually I want to plan a surprise for Nandini..!! A dream date..!!" Manik said and as expected Cabir started with his jokes making fun of Manik after a lot of teasing session Cabir become serious.


"Acha..!! Tell me what kind of date you want..?" Cabir said seriously.


"Kuch aisa jis say wo bht khush ho jye...!!" Manik said excitedly and they discussed about it for a long time. Finally the discussion was over Manik asked cabir to go and do all the preparations.

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It was 5 of the evening and again Manik still hadn't called Nandini. She was fuming with anger thinking about his dinner with someone special. Meanwhile doorbell rang Nayonika was in her room and Suresh Kaka still hasn't returned from his village so Nandini went and opened the door. There was a man,actually courier man.


"Mrs.Manik Malhotra?" He inquired. Nandini nodded and he handed over her a red box she signed the paper and carried the parcel to her room.She saw a greeting card over the box. She opened the card and all her anger on Manik flew away.

To,

My Nandu..

From,

Your Manik..


She happily opened the box. Her eyes twinkled seeing a red saree with silver work. Matching delicate diamond jewelry and shoes...!!flat shoes so he remembered that she don't wear heels. And a note:


"Nandini..!! Meri Nandini..!! Sirf Meri..!!


Tonight I want you to wear this red saree for me..!! Only for me..!!


Tonight I want you to get ready for me..!!


Tonight I want you to look beautiful for me..!!


Tonight no fears,no doubts will come between us..!!


Tonight I'll not let you anyone come between us..!!


Tonight I will make you mine..!!


It will be OUR night..!!


Just You and Me...!!Forever


Manik..!! Tmhara Manik..!! Sirf Tmhara..!!"


She smiled and blushed. She was feeling out of this world. She quickly dialed Manik's number. He picked up the call on first bell but before Nandini could say anything Manik started.


"Liked it?"She heard his cheerful voice.


"Liked it? I loved it Manik..!!! Thank you so much..!"Nandini exclaimed and she heard Manik's laughter.


"It's nothing..!! There are more things to come..!! Just wait for tonight..!! 8pm sharp...!! Driver will pick you up..!! And no arguments..!!"Manik said in a romantic way making Nandini tremble at her place.


"OK..!!"That's all she could managed to say and she hung up. She immediately got up to get ready. For the first time she was getting ready for her Manik. After getting ready she looked herself in the mirror. She was looking breathtakingly beautiful. She felt like butterflies floating in her stomach she was shivering on her thoughts. Guessing about Manik's surprises. She came out of the Mansion driver was standing outside opening the car door for her she silently sat inside. After about half an hour journey the car stopped and driver asked her to get down as it was the place where he was ordered to drop her. She got down of the car and looked at the Villa in front of her. It was small and very beautiful. She slowly walked towards the entrance the main door wasn't locked. First she hesitated then she opened the door and stepped in.


Edited by Mawara_Ejaz - 10 years ago
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Chapter 15 B


As soon as she entered the Villa she felt like something falling on her she gathered it in her hands and noticed it was rose petals. She smiled, twirled around and gathered them in her palms. Then she noticed the whole hall was beautifully decorated with lamps.


"Nandini..!!" She heard Manik's voice but he was nowhere in the sight.


"Manik..?? Where are you ??" Nandini asked excitedly. She just wanted to run in his arms but he was not there.


"Shhh just walk out of the hall..!! I have lots to say Nandini..!!" Manik's voice again came disturbing the silence. Nandini followed his orders and saw a door she walked towards it and there she came out of the hall. The sight in front of her was breathtakingly beautiful. A pool with crystal clear water candles were floating here and there in it. Trees decorated with dainty and fragile lights. In a corner a round small table with dishes placed on it,two chairs. A sofa near the pool. But still Manik was nowhere.


Manik saw Nandini she was looking extremely beautiful. Manik's breath hitched when he saw her in that red saree. He felt like flying in the air.He slowly walked towards her.She was looking here and there her eyes continuously searching for him he knew it. He was facing her back he hugged her from behind.


Nandini gasped at the sudden hug but the touch was familiar,very familiar. Love of her life..!! The man who meant everything to her..!! Her husband..!! The man who knew her,understand her more than anything in this world..!! She can spend her entire life in his arms..!! She can live for him..!! She can die for him..!! She never ever felt like this for anyone else..!! When he was nowhere in her sight she was getting restless..!! She wanted to be in his arms..!! She was craving for his hug..!! And now he was there. She broke the hug and turned to face him..!! Here standing her Greek god..!! With all his glory..!! He was of her..!! He gently hold Nandini's hands.


"Nandini? Tonight I want to tell you something..!!" Manik started seriously. Nandini kept quiet waited for him to continue.


"Nandini..!! You know the first I saw you when you accidentally hit me with that flower pot..!! I hated you at that time..!! But don't know why whenever I saw you talking about or with Mayank an unknown feeling crept in my heart,that was jealousy..!! That night when I saw my name on your hands I was something different for you..!! The feeling I never felt for Alya..!! Then I never thought we will be bonded like this..!! Seriously I wasn't ready for this wedding...!! But you agreed for this..!! So I had no other choice..!! During the rituals when I lifted your dupatta to put sindoor you were crying..!! Crying for Mayank...!! I felt defeated Nandini..!! Then when we came home again you were crying for him..!! But in spite of all this I couldn't resist myself from taking care of you..!! I can't stop myself from loving you Nandini..!!" Manik explained in his ever loving voice. When Nandini heard the word "love" she looked more deeply in his eyes.


"Yes Nandini..!! I love you..!! I love you so much..!!" Manik again said seductively nearly a whisper. Tears welled up in Nandini's eyes and she felt herself the most luckiest person of the world. She hugged Manik tightly like she never did before. Manik hugged her back a content smile curved on his lips.After sometime Nandini broke the hug and cupped Manik's face,looking deeply in his eyes. She closed her eyes and without any hesitation touched her lips with his. When Manik saw her taking charge he smiled on her innocence and held her waist to deepen the kiss. Nandini kissed him passionately Manik returned the kiss with equal favor,her fist full of his hair,she was pulling him more towards her like there was no tomorrow. After sometime they broke. Both breathing heavily. Nandini was looking into Manik's eyes.


"Nandini? Kya dekh rahi ho?" Manik asked tucking her hair behind her ear.


"Daikh rahi hoon that I must have done something good in my previous life that I have got you..!!" Nandini said still lost in his eyes. To which Manik laughed.


"Hahaha..!! Acha..? Ok Mrs.Romeo..!! Let's have dinner..!!" Manik lead her towards the table and pulled a chair for her like a gentleman to which Nandini gave him an appreciating smile. They both had their dinner most of the time the air was filled with Nandini's laughters and Manik smiling on her contentment. After having dinner Manik sat on the sofa with Nandini in his arms. Nandini resting her head on Manik's heart. They both were sitting silently. Inhaling each others scent. Gazing the stars..!! Then Nandini broke the silence.


"Manik..?" Nandini started softly.


"Hmmm..!!"Said Manik giving her sign to continue.


"Manik when I first saw you know..!! When for the first time we fought I thought of you a monster nothing more than that..!! But then Mayank left me..!! And we get married..!! When you lifted my duppata na and saw me crying..!! I wasn't crying for Mayank I was crying for my shattered trust..!! He broke my trust..!! You know Manik I never loved him..!! But I trusted him..!! And for me trust is the most important thing in a relation..!! You know if there is no love in a relation tou kaam chal jata hai..!! But when there is no trust na tou relation ni banta..!! I cried because I trusted him..!! I thought that after him I can't trust anyone but then I don't know how,when and why? I started trusting you..!! You always made me feel special..!! The way you helped me getting over those fears was something which no one ever done for me..!! I felt so good being around you..!! I was confused you know then I asked my heart what are these feelings you know what my heart told me?" Nandini explained lovingly playing with his fingers during the whole conversation.


"What?" Manik asked impatiently.


"My heart told me that "Nandini Manik Malhotra You are in love..!! You are in love with your loving husband..!!" Nandini said looking in his eyes. Manik looked at her in disbelief.


"Say it again?" Manik said in disbelief.


"Haan Manik..!! I love you too..!!" Nandini said holding hands tightly.Manik felt like he would be dead on her confession. But he was breathing..!! Breathing for his Nandini..!! Manik leaned closer for a kiss but Nandini was in a playing mood she run away and sit on the edge of pool.Manik was facing her back now. Manik kept sitting on the sofa admiring her.


"Manik..!! If I ask you something will you give me?" Nandini said turning her head a little.


"Anything..!! Just ask..!!" Manik said smilingly.


"Acha..!! You had always sing for me na? Tonight I want to sing for you..!! I am not that good as you are but I want to do it for my love..!! Will you improvise?" Nandini said ever so innocently and Manik was again surprised with her words. It was becoming very difficult for him to control his desires.


"Sing Nandini I will improvise..!!" That's all he could managed to say.


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Chapter 15 C


After getting his approval Nandini took some water in her palm and started.


Iss tarah se khudse aa mujhko jod tu
Thoda bhi mujhme na mujhko chhod tu

(She closed her eyes..!! Feeling the moment..!!)


Na yaad teri tujhko
Na yaad mujhe hoon main


(She looked towards Manik his eyes more darken with desires)


Aa mujhko pehan le tu
Aa tujhko odh loon main


(She after looking deep in his eyes turned her attention towards the water and again dipped her hand to take some water in her palm)

Katra katra main girun
Jism pe tere theharun
Katra katra main girun
Tujh mein hi kahin reh lun


(Suddenly she felt Manik's hand cupping hers in water and Manik sung looking deep in her eyes)

(Manik splashed some water on Nandini's face and she shyly got up turned to leave)


Dariya tu khaali kar de
Mujhme saara tu bhar de
Tujhko aa main pee jaaun, pyaas bujha do..


(Manik pull her towards him she banged in his chest,he leaned his head closer and sucked the water droplets of her lips and sung)

Laana kuch baadal laana
Unko mujh par barsaana
Boondein teri ho jinme, unse bhigaa do...


(Nandini continued cupping his cheeks assuring him with her words that she was of his only his)


Na yaad teri tujhko
Na yaad mujhe hoon main
Aa mujhko pehan le tu
Aa tujhko odh loon main


(Manik held her bare waist tightly and improvised)

Katra katra main girun
Jism pe tere theharun
Katra katra main girun
Tujh mein hi kahin reh lun


(Manik can't take his eyes off of her, Nandini push him and started running Manik chased her And finally caught her against a tree)

Khud se khaali ho jaaun
Aaja tujhse bhar jaaun
Tinka tinka jal jaaun
Aise jalaa do.. ho..


(Nandini sung while Manik pinned her hands above her head and kissed her neck and shoulder not leaving an inch unexplored giving her love bites and after that soothing them with kisses)


Tarun main tan pe tere
Thehrun angon pe tere
Gehari jo khawahish teri
Unme duba do..


(Manik sung and Nandini switched their sides Manik touched her bare arms with his fingers sending a ticklish sensation to Nandini)


Na yaad teri tujhko
Na yaad mujhe hoon main
Aa mujhko pehan le tu
tujhko odh loon main


(Nandini sung and turned to leave but Manik held her,Manik was facing her back and in one swift motion he untie her blouse strings to which Nandini gasped and Manik started kissing her bare back)


Qatra qatra main girun
Jism pe tere theharun
Katra katra main girun
Tujh mein hi kahin reh lun


(Manik sung and lifted Nandini in his arms and walked towards the room without breaking eye lock)


Manik along with Nandini entered the room,room was fully decorated the bed was fully covered with rose petals and he placed her ever so gently on the bed. And without any warning he kissed her this kiss was harsh,demanding yet passionate. Manik broke the kiss and looked in Nandini's eyes as if asking the permission to which Nandini blinked her eyes answering his question.


"I am all yours Manik..!!" She whispered in his ears giving herself to him.That was it for Manik the rest of the night room was filled with Nandini's moans continuously whispering his name. Crushing the rose petals in her fists,crying in pleasure which her husband was giving her. It was almost dawn Nandini was sleeping peacefully cuddling to Manik. But Manik...!! he was awake. Admiring her angelic face stroking her hair ever so gently. Smiling on the moments they just shared. Suddenly he remembered something he slowly extended his hand to the bedside table and opened the drawer. He took out a ring box and opened it. He brought that for Nandini but he forgot. He took out the ring and gently slid it in Nandini's ring finger,kissed her hand trying his best not to disturb her beauty sleep. The ring was made of platinum and it had embossed something on it that was "Te Amo" (English: "I Love You"). Manik kissed her hair once again and also drifted to sleep.

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Ufff..!!! I did it..!! Is say ziada romantic main ni likh skti..!! It was more than enough for me..!! I have tried to wrote this according to your expectations. Please Please Please lamba comment krna please??? And tell me it was good or bad? Those who are asking for romance tou larkiyoon is say ziada aur romantic main ni likh skti..!! And again that Katra Katra is one of my favorite number. Please do comment and hit like button ignore mistakes.Reached 15 chapters yupiee..!! Aur Han Important announcement tomorrow I have a family gathering in my house I won't be able to update tomorrow so apologies in advance I know you all love me that much that you will understand and I love you all. Ok enough of my buk buk..!! Tata..!!

Lots of Love..


Mawara

Edited by Mawara_Ejaz - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow magical superb fantastic loved it he will go to any extends now for her coz he just can't live without her anymore loved it continue soon

Also loved the romance part it was awesome they finally confessed their love for each other it was simply beautiful and thanks for pm
Edited by HTA111 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome... :)
Superb and amazing update... :)
Loved it...
Continue soon..
Edited by lavina1612 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome...Superb and amazing update... 😊
Loved it...Continue soon..
Love the fact that you update daily.
Thank you sooo much👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
Omg!! You are love babe seriously!!
Like its not bas itna sa romantic.. It was Good Romantic ❤️
Every emotion they were feeling was astounding!!
Loved it so much!!!
You penned every detail of the setting so beautifully ❤️
It was Perfect ❤️ :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
it was a hot update 😳
i liked the way they confessed their feelings...😊
and the trust that nandini built for manik coz of which she could surrender herself to him and this all happened coz of manik's such a loving and understanding behavior towards his wife 😊
i loved cabir teasing part though u didnt mention any conversation still i was laughing imagining it myself🤣
loved the update IT WAS SUPERB❤️
please update THE NEXT CHAPTER SOON...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow, Its was Amazing.
It was a pleasure reading ur story.
U always have long updates...
U post it regularly..
I LOVE UR STORY!!

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