MaNan FF : Life With Nandini [Chapter 23 Updated - Page 149] 1 July - Page 9

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Hey Guys! Thank you all for the amazing comments for the previous chapter. Here is the next chapter. Hope you all will like it.

Do read and Comment and let me know how is it. Waiting eagerly for your comments.

The look in this chapter is created by me. Its crappy so please bear with it.

Happy Reading! 😊

Chapter - 5

Location - Villa

After a while, Manik came out after taking a shower and asked Nandini to go. Nandini moved in and quickly took a shower and stepped out draped in a towel exposing her legs, hands and shoulders. She looked at the room - totally cleaned and immaculated - and smiled realizing Manik have done that. Yes! The Manik Malhotra - once a messy and scruff - friendly soul who would unfurl all the scrap and junk all across his room - under the influence of his cleanliness freak Mini Monster had also turned into a hygiene loving person. He became more organized and avoided spreading trash as she hated it.

She saw him standing near the glass wall, gaping at the scenery, keeping his hands in his pockets, accoutered in black shorts and black tee with his signature bracelets on his wrist in one hand and his Favorite Black Ra-do watch - which was gifted by her - on his another one. His hair nicely gelled up in a modish hairstyle. He was all ready. He looked prepossessing and bewitching as always - she thought and moved to her travel bag to get her clothes. Manik turned and saw his wife, enveloped in a towel - her damp hair garnered on one side and her skin gleaming, as the rays of Sun fell on her body. A smile crept on his face when he recalled the day, after their marriage when Nandini accidentally stepped out of the bathroom in a towel, not aware of his presence. He remembered how she hid behind the curtain and blushed like a tomato. He had to pull her out from behind the curtain and explain that she dint need to hide herself from him. He had teased her saying she can blush but not shy and she dint need to as she is beautiful and he is no stranger but her husband. She understood him but it took time for her to adjust and he gave her that. And now, whenever he sees her in this form, he smiles comprehending she had adjusted and was now comfortable in cladding a towel in front of him.

He saw her rummaging through her bag trying to decide what to wear. He moved closer to her and hugged her from back, sliding his arms around her waist. He then forwarded a bag to her and she asked him what it was. He replied sheepishly Woh I was getting bored in London while I was free. I saw Mukti and Aliya creating looks on a site. I too tried to mismatch some stuff and create a look for you. And this is what I came up with. Its my first time. I hope you will like it. She was overwhelmed by his gesture and awed listening to him talking so innocently. He always made her feel special in some way or the other but she never imagined he could do anything of this sort. Her eyes welled up with joy but she nimbly blinked them away as she din't want to spoil the moment. She took the gift from him and kept in on the bed and without unwrapping it, turned and snaked her arms around his neck and said I already love it because you have put so much efforts on it and I know you have an amazing choice and the world is aware of the fact that when it comes to Mrs. Malhotra - Mr. Malhotra chooses only the best and unrivalled. Saying she pecked on his lips and continued You always amaze me with your surprises. I feel too special when you do such stuff. I dont know what is there in the bag, but I am already in love with it. Thank You for the beautiful gift. I Love you. He smiled warmly and replied You don't need to thank me for anything Nandini. Its nothing compared to the euphoria I am experiencing, since the day you stepped into my life. For the merriment and jollity that you have gushed in my life, its me who will be grateful to you till the end of my life. You deserve much much more Nandini and I know, no matter how much I try i will never be able to repay even an ounce of Love and care that you have showered on me. I Love you too. She kept his hand on his heart and said You don't need to repay anything Manik. You have already done a lot by making me yours and loving me so much. And you know what? The most precious reward that I could ever get is already in my possession. Your beautiful heart. Saying this, she lightly patted on his heart and kissed it. He hugged her instantly and she hid herself in his protective arms. He pulled apart and leaned to kiss her. Their lips were inches close and he was about to claim them, when a loud knock on the door disturbed their moment. He sighed and moved to open the door to find Mukti and Aliya standing outside with loads of shopping bags in their hands. They shoved Manik aside and scurried inside saying they needed to show their dresses to Nandini. Manik shook his head and said looking at Nandini Main Cabir aur Dhruv ke paas jaraha hoon. Tum jaldi se ready hoker bahar ajana. Saying this he left the room giving some chit-chatty time to the girls.

Mukti and Aliya showed their dresses one by one to Nandini which they have brought from London and as usual she praised their choice. They were talking casually when Mukti suddenly screamed. Both the girls got tensed and asked her anxiously what had happened. Mukti then moved near Nandini and caressed the love bites on her skin as Nandini was still in the towel that clearly displayed the bites on her neck and back. Mukti looked at her and said Manik pagal hogaya hai kya? Itne sarey bites woh bhi itne deep. We know he loves you a lot and is very passionate but itna bhi kya hai. Wait let me talk to him. She was about to leave but Nandini stopped her holding her hand. Nandini then turned to the mirror and said brushing the love bites No Mukti. Don't tell him anything. Because if you say anything to him then he will stop giving me these love bites and I don't want that. Mukti got a little confused and asked You dont want him to stop giving these bites? But why? Dont they hurt? Nandini smiled and continued They don't hurt me at all Mukti. In fact I love them having on my body. For me, they are testimonies of Love. Pure Love. They show me how much he loves me and makes me feel the most beautiful girl in this world. I don't want these marks to fade away from my skin ever, as they mark me as his. She said it all in a trance, all the while looking at herself in the mirror, tracing the marks with her fingers and blushing. Mukti and Aliya were astonished hearing her reply and their respect for their love grew more.

There was one more person who was dumbfounded by her answer. He was none other than Manik, who came back running halfway when he heard Mukti scream and returned to see what had happened. He heard their conversation and waited to know Nandini's reaction. His heart brimmed with happiness thinking about the love she has just for the marks that he left on her body. He ascertained that he can never measure the depth of her love as it was beyond infinity. He never imagined anyone could love him to this extent and now he was experiencing it. This girl, he thought - was an ocean of love. And her love was only for him. He silently thanked God for the umpteenth time for sending this angel into his life. He grinned widely and moved to meet Cabir and Dhruv.

Back in room, Nandini turns around and then mischievously continues And moreover its not that only he tortures me. I am no less than him. You can check it if you want. Mukti and Aliya just laughed and shook their heads in disbelief and said in unison You guys are crazy. Seriously. They laughed heartily and then pushing away the topic Aliya asked Nandini what she was wearing. Nandini revealed the bag and Aliya saw that it was the same packaging as their bags and concluded that it was definitely from London as the store was located only in London. Before she could shoot questions at her, Nandini observed their expressions and said Manik saw you both creating looks on this site and he made this one for me. She said proudly, remembering him all the while. Aliya and Mukti were flabbergasted as they never envisaged Manik doing such a thing. Mukti then breaking the silence said Unbelievable! God Nandini! He loves you soo much. Its the cutest thing I have ever heard about a guy doing something for his girl. The boy who hated shopping, created a look for you. Awww.. Nandini blushed and replied I know he loves me a lot. But lets see what he created although I m pretty sure its beautiful as its concerned to me. She said cheekily and carefully opened the packaging while Aliya and Mukti just watched getting excited and exuberant with each passing second.

The box opened to reveal a cut sleeves baby pink peplum top in scuba fabric with floral net covering for the neck and shoulders. It was paired with white waistband cigarette trousers. There was a set of matching pink colored Balle Flats, a white crochet tribly hat, a pink colored delicate bracelet and the most important - a pair of pink colored stone earrings. The girls were dazed at his selection and already became a fan of his matching skills. They wondered why they weren't able create such a look. Nandini just admired his efforts and inwardly praised her Monster's capability of doing anything he does with great dexterity.

Here is the look


After an elaborate 'Praise Manik' session, Nandini got ready wearing what her husband had brought for her. She looked endearing. Just like a doll. Cute and gorgeous. The girls complimented her and they moved together to see the boys. The boys were waiting in the lawn and Manik was continuously eyeing the door, waiting for Nandini to come wearing his gift. His wait finally came to an end and he saw her entering clothed in what he had brought for her. She looked exactly the way he had envisioned- like a delicate and beautiful doll. She was actually looking like a human doll. He eyed her from head to toe as she walked closer to him. The color of the dress mixing with the color of her cheeks. He should make her wear this hue more often - he thought. She saw him gazing at her, taking in her appearance and revering her. She came closer to him, and stood in front of his leaning form. She tip toed a little and pecked him at the corner of his lips and thanked him, smiling her brightest. He straightened himself and said You are looking like a doll who have came to life. My Human doll. She grinned and replied Thank you Manik. This dress is so pretty .. She was cut in the middle by Manik who continued Aa aa .. It was just an ordinary dress. You made it beautiful by wearing it. Nothing in this world can match your prettiness baby doll Saying this, he cupped her face and dropped a kiss on her forehead and both said I Love You at the same time. They looked at each other with a smile and he took her in a bear hug. Fab-4 were just awwing and adoring this cute couple. Cabir then faked a cough, breaking their moment and making them realize that they were not alone. They broke the hug but tangled their fingers and moved closer to their friends. Cabir then said Manik is right Nandini. You look like a doll. Nandini thanked him and all of them proceeded to have their breakfast. On the table, Cabir asked Nandini about the plan for that day. She said that they will be going to the beach and have some fun. Everyone agreed happily and started walking to the beach after completing their breakfast as it was really close to the Resort at a walk-able distance.

Fab - 4 were strolling ahead while MaNan slowly ambled behind them with their hands hooked and fingers tangled. As the public drew closer, Nandini noticed people recognizing Fab - 5 and gossiping. Some were busy in taking their snaps for posting them on social networking sites. Fab - 5 were quite famous and so was Nandini. She had her own identity as the best and youngest cardiologist in town. Along with that she was also known as the Wife of the lead singer of Fab - 5 - Manik Malhotra. Manik had kept their relation a secret in the early days, but had eventually revealed when the rumours created a lot of buzz. He officially announced their Marriage along with a stern warning that he would'nt tolerate a single abusing and insulting word against her. He was very possessive about their relation and private moments and never wished to make them public. He believed that these moments were solely theirs and no one has the right to poke their noses and gossip about them - a thought that was mutual to both of them. He just provided necessary information about her to the public like her Name and Profession. Nothing more than that. He never permitted media to approach her or to question her about anything. She accompanied him to the concerts rarely but when she did, media was not allowed to intervene. He posted a few photos of her with Fab - 5 on social networking sites only after announcing their Marraige to stop the media people who were hell bent on unveiling her face to the world and he din't wanted their personal space to be bothered in their fit. Manik was a popular figure and was known for four things - Music, His Attitude, His Charm and last but not the least - for the Protectiveness and Love he had for his wife. In Fact the Fab - 5 in common were known for these four traits. Though he never publicized their relation, they dedicated their most of the songs and awards to her. The Fans knew she was the apple of their eye and never dared to speak ill about her.

As they moved closer to the beach, she saw people getting excited, finding them there, open in the public. She observed girls drooling over her husband. Why wouldn't they? An exemplary and exquisite human of his kind. Tall in his form, with perfectly chiseled and well built body and a winsome face. His eyes deep and intense - a perfect straight and pointed nose and a razor - sharp defined Jaw Line. He was no less than a Greek God. A man whom every girl dreams of and she felt elated to be the one the lucky one to have him. She saw some girls burning in jealousy seeing her with him while some adored their togetherness. Some girl fans approached them and greeted them, shaking hands with him and demanding a hug. He politely gave them what they asked, but never left her hand. She saw girls hugging him and checking him out but did not feel a hint of jealousy . She was not a wife who would get angry or sad seeing her husband greeting his girl fans. Insecurity was far far away from her. She understood it was a part of his fame and din't find the need to be envious as she knew how much he loved her and he had already given himself to her completely. She herself took pictures of him with his fans and greeted them humbly. Some genuine fans adored her and praised her beauty and even requested to click her pictures but he politely refused and knowing his reputation concerning her, they dint argue.

He excused themselves and moseid to an Open Gazebo placed nearby while the rest of the Fab - 4 were engaged with the fans. On the way, she saw two poor kids leering at some children who were eating ice cream. She thought of helping them but soon the children went out of sight as if disappearing in thin air. She ignored and moved with him to the Gazebo. It was basically an umbrella kind of thing, a BIG umbrella, with a table and some chairs around it. He made her sit on the table and stood facing her resting his forehead on hers and asked So my baby doll wants something? We shouldnt have come here. Its a bit sunny and my baby's soft skin gets rashed when exposed to sun. She smiled at his concern and replied When You are here, nothing can harm me. I know you have setup this gazebo. He looked at her for while and asked How come you get to know everything so easily? She laughed and answered rubbing her nose with his Just like you get to know everything that I do. He warmly smiled and asked her again if she wants something. She excitedly asked for an ice cream and he giggled seeing her getting enthusiastic over an ice cream like a baby. He asked her to sit while he gets it for her.

She waited for him to come but he was taking a lot of time and she was getting bored. She was goggling the place around herself when she saw the same kids playing near the beach and walked to them. She came near them and asked Baby aplog ko ice-cream khana hai? Chalo hum jaker le atey hain. She started moving towards the icecream stall when one of the child stopped her saying Nahi didi. Humne abhi abhi ice - cream khaya woh b sabse mehenge wala. The child completed licking his lips cutely. Nandini smiled and leaned down and asked Accha? Toh apke Papa ne apko sabse mehenga wala ice - cream khilaya. Kounsa wala tha mujhe bhi batao? The children looked at each other and answered sadly Nahi didi, Papa ne nahi dilaya. Hamare Papa nahi hain. Hum dono toh yahan paas waley Anathalay mein rehte hain. Khelne ke liye yahan aye they. Nandini felt bad hearing about this but asked them Toh phir apko ice - cream kisne dilayi? The children scanned the beach to find the person and finally spotted him. They then pointed at someone standing behind Nandini. Nandini turned and a smile crept on her face seeing the person. It was Manik standing in the gazebo searching for her. She looked at the children who said a bit confusingly Woh waley bhaiyya hai na Lambe se unhone dilwaya aur thanks bhi nahi liya. Bus ice - cream dilayi aur chalegaye. She chuckled listening to the children complaining, bent down a little and said Unka Naam Manik hai. Woh aise hi hain. Bahar se tough aur ander se soft. The child innocently asked her Aap unhe jaanti ho didi? She nodded and said Haan! Aaplog khelo main jaati hoon okay. Agar aapko kuch chahiye to mujhe batana. Main wahan hoon. She said pointing towards the Gazebo. She then ran into the Gazebo and sprung in Manik's arms, who was shocked at first but reciprocated back.

He lifted her in the hug and made her sit on the table. She parted and looked at him lovingly and said cupping his cheeks I love you sooo much Manik. Manik was a bit surprised at her behavior but replied that he loved her too. Then he asked her Kya hua Nandini? Is everything alright?Yeh sab aise achanak se sabke saamne. Its so unlike you. And where did you go? I told you to sit here na. She listened him carefully, admiring him and then silently pointed towards the children. He looked back and understood everything and became a bit nervous. He then said muffly Woh ..Jab hum arahe they to I saw them ... He was shushed by her and then she continued U saw them craving for ice - cream and helped them. He nodded affirmatively and she kissed his forehead and said abruptly I want to kiss you Manik. She was so touched by his act that she just wanted to kiss him. Seeing a lady help poor children or play with them is adorable. But replacing the lady with a Man in the scenario is something beyond admiration and par adoration. Her respect for him had grown thousand times. She was proud of him and she fell for him all over again. He looked at her surprised and answered Baby everybody is here and you know I don't like sharing our moments with anyone. He said a bit dejectedly. He was sad that she asked him something but he couldn't give her as there were a lot of eyes stuck on them and if anyone captures the moment, it wont be good. He bowed his head down in an apology. She smiled understanding his point and lifted his face cupping it in her hands and said Don't feel sad. If not now then definitely sometime later. But you owe me this. He smiled and bobbed his head like a small cute baby. She quickly pecked him on his cheeks and muttered a I love You and he replied the same with a too.

He turned to take the ice cream kept on the table only to find it melted. He took the ice - cream in his hand and said showing it to her See what you did. Temperature itna hot kardiya ke ice cream melt hogayi. She played along and said naughtily sliding her arms around his neck Ab agar husband itna handsome ho to wife ka aise react karna to banta hai na. He laughed and replied Accha! Handsome husband? Mera baby bohot naughty hogaya hai. Kuch karna padega. Saying he started tickling her and she giggled heartily. He too tittered seeing her and stopped after sometime and said Yeh ice cream to melt hogayi. You wait here, i will get another one. She agreed and he turned to go when he saw FAB - 4 entering. He asked them if they want ice cream and they told their likes. He then moved to get it along with Cabir while others settled and started talking.

To Be Continued ..

Edited by yasmeenjuhi - 10 years ago
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Do continue soon !
it is awesome !👏
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Too good...
manan relationship in ur ff is d dream Relationship!!!
Continue soon!!
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heyy dearrr.. ii jstt loovvee urr stoorryyy... uuu knw one thing u fulfil all my desiring scenes for manan.. u knw.. i love urr writinngg u km=nw.. ur 1st OS:WE WILL B 2GETHER HAMESHA.. i stored it in my personal dairy.. i m also a silent reader like uu.. nd i want to stored ur this continution 2oo... may i plzzz?? . i jst love the way u poyrayed manan.. fab 4's relation with nandini.. their teasing.. u knw 1 thing after reading ur 1st 0s i want the holiday nd uu jst wrote it... chap 1 nd 2 poara ,, baki abhi parke review kal deti hu...
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Wowww nice dress... Lovely update dear...:)
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Juhi you are no less then any professional writer
I wont b surprised if you write a novel someday
The way you express every emotion is beyond commendable
I am in love with your writing 😳
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Like always.. It was a ball of pleasure.. You are such an amazing writer.. So Good :> !!
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It was a pleasure reading yur story dear!!
I Mean yur jus tooo good!!
Infact I must say Yur PERFECT!!
U potray yur story well
U always have long updates...
U post it regularly...
N I LOVE YUR STORY!!
So u r PERFECT!!
Keep updating soon... as we eagerly wait... 😃
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