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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing
Yeehhh manik and nandini ko koi separate ni kr sakta
Yeehhh i m so happy

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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow that was superb
Amazing chapter
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter 24

Dhruv was trying togo inside the room but fab3 navya n aryaman were blocking his way...while aliya was shouting n scolding them from behind to let dhruv come in

Aliya - guys pls just let him come inside...he even paid u all na

Aryaman - arre paise dene se kuch nahi hota...hume aur bhi kuch chahiye

Dhruv - Bhai pls mujhe jane de andar

Manik - buddy since when did u became so desperate

Dhruv - arre yaar...main desperate nahi hu...I'm just tired n I want to sleep

Cabir - ya we all know u want to sleep with aliya...right

Aliya - dhruv don't u dare sleep...or else i will kill u

Dhruv - arre aliya I was just joking

Navya - kitne besharam ho tum dono

Mukti - ya exactly...itne openly apni wedding night ki baat kar rahe ho

Dhruv - arre yaar kaha fas gaya main

Aryaman - ya bro...tu to fas gaya...bola bhi maine...mat kar shaadi par nahi...meri baat to koi sunta hi nahi hai

Aliya - just shut up aryaman n let him come in

While everyone were fighting...nandini abhimanyu came n nandini directly pushed dhruv aside n hugged manik...he was taken aback a bit then manik too hugged her back

Cabir - isse kya ho gaya hai

Abhimanyu - amms manik ko Mangalore le jane ke liye maan gaye

"What" everyone screamed in unison n jumped on manan for a group hug...aliya also got up from the bed n joined them for the hug...after breaking the hug...aliya held dhruv's hand n got him inside, before anyone can do some mischief

Aryaman - shit yaar nandini tum bhi na...dekho tumhari wajah se dhruv andar chala gaya

Manik - aye hello...meri nandini ko kuch nahi bolna

Aryaman held his ears - oh OK sorry bro

Manan smiled looking at him...then everyone turned towards dhrulya

Nandini - guya jane do na...let them enjoy

Dhruv - thank god nandini tum aa gayi...warna aaj to meri wedding night andar nahi bahar hoti

Nandini - but on a serious note kal ready rehna...kyuki tum dono ko pehle Delhi jana honga

Aliya - par hum Delhi kyu jayenge

Manik - coz Macau ki flight delhi se hai direct

Dhruv - Macau ?

Cabir - oh come on dhruv now don't be so innocent

Mukti - we have booked everything in Macau for ur honeymoon

"What" said dhrulya in unison

Aryaman - n this honeymoon package gift is from all of us together

Aliya - omg u guys are so awesome...I just love these random plans

Dhrulya called for the group hug...everyone joined in...after breaking the hug...teasing them some more...they all retired to their respective rooms




After coming back to the room n changing into a night suit...manan were cozily lying on the bed wrapped under a duvet...Actually nandini was lying on the bed with manik above her...his head was over her tummy...he was kissing her belly n mumbling I love u to baby n nandini continuously while nandini was ruffling his hair...smiling looking at him the way he was showering his love to their baby n her...he was really happy plus excited coz amms herself told nandini that manik can stay in Mangalore...he again Nuzzled in her belly button to which nandini giggled

Nandini - manik stop its tickling me...(she said with a chuckle)

Manik - umm don't stop me nandini...I'm really happy...I still can't believe that amms maan gaye

Nandini - then believe it Mr malhotra coz its absolutely true

Manik - wow I just love u...love u soo much...n I love u too baby...ummah

Nandini - acha sirf baby ko hi kiss karonge ya mujhpe bhi thoda dhyan donge

Manik instantly came close to her face n kissed without giving her time to react...nandini locked her arms around his neck as soon she started responding to his kiss...manik was creasing her bare waist...coz manik didn't let nandini wear her top as he wanted to cuddled his baby more skin to skin...after breaking the kiss manik looked at nandini with desire n love in his eyes which he was trying to control since a long long time...she was breathing so heavily that she couldn't say anything n just blinked her eyes as a yes...then that was it for manik he started kissed all over her body yet carefully...nandini kept on pulling him more and more to herself...soon they they were under the duvet devoid of their clothes...finally he entwined his fingers with her pinning on the bed n claimed her smoothly...she left his hands n hugged him tightly digging her nails on his back n hidding her face in his neck...he left her soon n thumped behide her...both were breathing heavily looking at each other with a broad smile...nandini again hugged manik and he adjusted the duvet over them properly n hugged her back after kissing her forehead...unintentionally they slept looking at each other as they were really tired



In spite of sleeping late night after the lovemaking session...nandini woke up early in the morning...she rubbed her eyes with her knuckles n looked at the clock...it was 6am...she got up holding the duvet near her chest n looked at manik...he was sleeping on his stomach with his one hand on her body...she saw her inner garment with his clothes lying on the bed...moving a bit ahead she picked his T-shirt with her garment n quickly wore it...manik moved a bit coz of her body movement...he wrapped his hand around her stomach in sleep...nandini kept sitting resting her head back on the bedboard like that for more than 45mins so that manik won't get disturb...but all of a sudden her back started paining n slowly slowly the pain got much more than before n she literally screamed holding her back

Nandini - aaahhh manik...

After listening to her painful voice manik instantly woke up rubbing his eyes...he saw nandini was holding her back hissing in pain...he got up with a jerk...cupped her face n asked worriedly

Manik - what happened nandini...aise chila kyu rahi ho...

Nandini - manik...I'm having a backache

Manik immediately grabbed his phone lying on the bed n called the same doctor who has checked her once before when nandini got fainted...but before the doctor can pickup the call...nandini took his phone disconnected the call...while manik snatched the phone from her hand n again tried to call the doctor but nandini again took his phone...which made manik really angry so he shouted

Manik - nandini I'm done with your mood swings now...why are u not letting me call the Dr...

Manik shouted so badly that nandini got scared and she started crying...looking at her crying his heart melted...nandini hugged him tightly to which manik sighed in helplessness...he wrapped his one arm around her waist n the other hand was lightly patting her head to stop her from crying

Nandini - manik sirf back me pain ho raha hai...(she said between her sob)

Manik - then why are you not letting me call the Dr

Nandini - it will be fine soon...wo I was up from last 1hr na so maybe that's why my back is paining...but we don't need any Dr for it

Manik broke the hug with a jerk n looked at her angrily

Manik - are u really out of ur mind...kyu baithi this itne der tak...(he said angrily to which she made a sad pout)

Manik - don't try to act cute with me...I'm really mad at u right now...

Nandini - sorry

Manik - ye acha hai...kuch bhi kaam karo fir sorry bol do...itna easy hai na...lekin tumhe kya hai...chalo now lay down...(he said all in one...made her lay on the bed n kissed her forehead)

Manik - is it still paining

Nandini nodded her head in a no...manik got up from the bead after wearing his tracks...he made some call standing a bit away from her n after getting done with it he came back to nandini n sat in front of her

Manik - I know its still paining but don't worry...patience rakho thodi der me theek ho jayenga...(he said all the while pressing her shoulders n arms to soothe her pain)

After some minutes their was a knock on the door...manik opened the door n two ladies came inside the room with a bag...nandini was about to got up but manik strictly gestured her not to move...

Manik looked at those ladies n ordered - don't make her lay on her tummy...she's 3 months pregnant so be careful...pain kam karna hai badhana nahi...

Both the ladies nodded n came towards nandini...they started preparing for her massage...while nandini gapped at them with lot of confusion...she looked at manik for an answer

Manik - thai massage specially for u...ab back me pain nahi honga

Nandini gestured an I love u to manik for which he replied in the same way...soon the ladies got started with her massage...while manik comfortably lied on the couch looking at nandini lovingly...both the massagers made nandini change lot of postures as they cannot make her lay on her tummy...but it was a relief for nandini...towards the end of the massage nandini slept unknowingly...manik paid the ladies with a heavy tip n they left...he covered nandini with duvet properly and after pecking her face he went inside the washroom to get fresh

As soon as manik came out of his room...he saw his dad walking towards him...he hugged his dad greeting a good morning n went to walk around the garden

Manik - thank u so much dad...for convincing amms

Mr malhotra - I didn't do anything beta...its bcoz of nandini only

Manik - stop being so modest with us dad...par ha i agree that nandini ne bhi amms ko manaya

Mr malhotra - vaise veebha ayi nahi wedding par

Manik - baat hi mat karo uski...call aya tha sangeet ceremony ke din...that she won't be able to show up in the wedding...uncle ke wajah se usse London Jana padh gaya...aur dadi to ab zyada chal nahi sakte to isiliye hum pehle hi unse mil ke aa gaye

Mr malhotra - chalo ye acha kiya tum logo ne...by the way nandini where is she

Manik - she's sleeping na...aaj back me bohot pain hua usse...pagal kahi ki

Mr malhotra - hey don't u dare say anything to my daughter

Manik - dad aap to mujhe bhul hi jate ho jab bhi nandini ki baat hoti hai

Mr malhotra - how can i forget u son...ur the main reason jiski wajah se nandini humare life me ayi

Manik - she's our star

Mr malhotra - absolutely...now go rest n be with her

Manik went back to nandini...she was still sleeping...he saw the time it was 9:30...he sat next to her n called her name lovingly while creasing her hair

Manik - nandu wakeup

Nandini stirred in sleep but didn't woke up...so manik planted soft kissed on her body...at first she didn't responded but later she started shivering smiling bcoz of his touch...slowly she opened her eyes to see the most handsome person sitting in front of her...she stretched her hand and rubbed her eyes after sitting resting her headback

Manik - how are u feeling now

Nandini - good and refreshing...aur jab tum uthaya karte ho to aur bhi acha lagta hai

Manik - that's good to know...OK get ready now aur breakfast karo...we don't want our baby to starve...haina

Nandini nodded and after pecking his lips she went inside the washroom...while manik gathered everyone for the breakfast

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Fab5 navni aryaman n abhi were sitting together while the elders were having breakfast on the other dinning table

Manik - so aliya and dhruv all set to leave for ur honeymoon

Aliya - of course

Kavya - ye honeymoon tya hota hota hai daddy

Cabir - baby ask this question to dhruv and aliya

Kavya - aliya honeymoon tya hota hai

Aryaman - one second...baby tum ab bhi isse aliya bolti ho

Aliya - ha so cool na

Aryaman - yes it is...u know what kavya aaj se tum bhi mujhe mama bulana band kardo...just call me aryaman

Navya - hey mata rani...kya karu main tum logo ka...kitna bigad rahe ho usse

Kavya - Otay I will tal u aryaman only

Manik - OK guys now let's get serious...we have to get back to work now...bohot party functions kar liye

Mukti - hey but manik tu to Mangalore jayenga to how will u manage your work...

Cabir - yaar office ka kaam to Teri team sambhal lengi but what about our music

Aliya - ha after a week we have our new album launch

Dhruv - humara honeymoon trip to tab tak khatam bhi ho jayenga

Abhi - arre wah tujhe kaise pata chala dhruv ki tera honeymoon tab tak khatam ho jayenga

Aryaman - exactly...nahi rok paya tu to

Nandini - guys stop it...kavya apne questions firse chalu kar dengi

Everyone looked at kavya who was sitting ideally looking at their faces as If her family is an alien

Cabir - aww meri beti...usse kuch samajh hi nahi aa raha hai

Navya - hmm

Manik - yaar abhi Mangalore nahi Jana hai...next month Jana hai coz I have lot of pending works and then nandini have her exams too...she is not in a school ki easily transfer karo do...thoda time lagenga aur amms ne ha bhi bol diya hai

Dhruv - fine ab jab sab sort ho hi gaya hai to let's leave guys...flight ka time ho raha hai

Cabir - tujhe badi jaldi hai jane ki besharam raat kafi nahi thi jo itna desperate ho raha hai

Dhrulya started beating cabir for teasing them while others laughed looking at the trio...after getting done with the arrangements everyone left for the airport...first one were dhrulya n aryaman to leave as aryaman flight for newyork was from delhi then followed by amms to mangalore...next turn was of mr malhotra who has to leave for pune

Nandini - dad pls Mumbai saath chaliye na

Mr malhotra - sorry beta...u know na how my work is...I really can't stay

Manik - dad kuch dino ke liye to rukh sakte ho aap

Mr malhotra - no beta...I will be badly stuck agar Mumbai me rukh gaya to...but I promise main tum dono ke Mangalore Jane se pehle zarur aunga
Manan hugged mr malhotra together but nandini was not ready to leave him...she started sobbing but manik pulled her back...after planting a forehead kiss, mr malhotra left bidding a good bye to them

Then soon after an announcement fab5 navni abhi kavya with the murthy's left together for Mumbai



So here is the update...thank u for a nice response...n pls silent readers...stop reading if u can't appreciate n comment about anybody's work...n the member who comment update soon only pls stop doing that instead pls write something about the update

Guys do give long comments n tell me what u liked n what not...criticism is most welcome
N also tell me what do u want to see more in further updates

Sorry for my bakwas just like n comment long coz I will be posting next chapter immediately on the next thread so help me for doing that thank u
Edited by sadiya51 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
like the update...thanks fr the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update
Looking forward for nxt update
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awww lovely update
Fab4 teasing aliya n dhruv haha...awsummm but nandu cme in bw n helped thm
Manan romance...beautiful n thn manik got mad at her as she was having back pain due to her carelessness as she dont wnt to disturb manik's sleep...aww but manik as caring husband arranged massage for her...soo sweet lovedd it
Thn manan convo with dad...nyc
N kavya questions haha...amazing
Loveddd it...beautifully written superbbb chp
Thnk uh for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
hey amazing seriously i like it. n manik is good good husband. so caring n lovely hubby. i lIke it very much. plz update n3xt part soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
nyc update
luved dat manik and baby wala part
nd caring manik is soo cute
wud luv to c more of small small cute moments between manan and baby
continue soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Manik never fails to amaze me!
Thai massage!

Wow!
Loved it

Thanks for the pm
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
manik simply rocks.
loved his small yet meaningful gestures.
finally. amms agreed and all is well.
interesting.
hope you continue soon.

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