manan-cant live without u ch24-pg136 (thread 2 limk on index)

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

mairaallauddin

@mairaallauddin

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#741

Awesome update

Cabir surprise was superb

And manik was so happy to see nandini

And then manan update was amazing

And manik cares about the baby and nandini alot and he loves them alot

Superb update

Loved it

Loved the update

Update the next part soon

Quote

harshikarocks

@harshikarocks

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#742

Amazing update...cabir told manik he is halucinating hahaha... N tgen its actually nandini... N then maniks dialogue cabir tu aaj kuch bhi kar main tujhe rokunga nhi... Wanted to see cabir on full teasing mode n manik being helpless because he himself gave him permission... Anyways it was amazing... Pls dont separate manan by sending nandu to manglore... Thanx for d pm... Cont soon

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

shruti_gupta

@shruti_gupta

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#743

Nice update...
Update soon...and thnx for the pm...

Quote

Saddy12

@Saddy12

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#744

awesome update

manan scene was amazing

plz cont soon

Quote

firefly09angel

@firefly09angel

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#745

Nice update...
Please don't it so soon...
😭
I really liked ur ff very much...
Tumne pehle kaha tha that u will write
a sequel of it...please don't end it...
Continue soon... 😊

Quote

sadiya51

@sadiya51

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#746

Chapter 23
Next morning after getting ready nandini was walking at the corridors...searching for manik...she went to cabir aliya n dhruv's room to ask for him but he was not there...she tried to call but unfortunately manik had left his mobile in their room itself...as soon as she reached mukti's room to ask for manik...before she could knock on the door a loud thud sound came from the room...nandini was taken aback a bit but then she got worried n thought something has happened to mukti so nandini knocked the door a bit loudly n called her name...as the door got open...nandini opened her mouth wide making an O out of shock...manik cabir mukti were standing in front of her...totally smashed by the haldi paste on their bodies n the the whole room was messed up as if they had a war over their
Cabir wiped the haldi from his lips...waved his hand in front of nandini n said - hi nandini

Manik stood next to cabir n did the same...nandini looked at three of them n shouted

Nandini - what the hell is this guys
Cabir - nandu its a komdi ka piece gadi ka number 420
Nandini - what?
Manbir mukti laughed loudly...which annoyed more to nandini
Nandini - u guys are impossible...like seriously...ye kya halat bana rakhi hai tum teeno ne apni...aur ye sab haldi aise kyu lagaya
Manik took some more haldi paste from the bowl kept on the table...throw it on mukti n she shouted on him
Mukti - manik ab fir se haldi mere upar dala na to maar dalungi tujhe
Manik again throw haldi on her n said - le fir se lagaya...bol now what will u do
Mukti also took some haldi paste on her hand n ran behind manik to smash it on his face...but manik was dodging behind cabir...mukti couldn't take it anymore...she threw the hadli on manik but he hid himself behind cabir n the paste fell on cabir's face
Cabir - pagal go gayi hai kya mukti tu...Maine kya kiya yaar
Nandini - ayyapa!!...ye log abhi tak bade kyu nahi hue
Manik - nandini ye sab na mukti ne ki hai...aur cabir se bhi puch lo...sab mukti ka kiya dhara hai
Mukti - hoo saaf jhoot...nandini he's lying...manik started it first
Manik - no u started it first mukti...now don't blame me
Nandini - cabir tum batao kya hua
Cabir - arre mujhe kya malum yaar...main to tumhari help karne ke liye manik ko dhund raha tha...and when i found him in this state I couldn't stop myself from laughing...n just bcoz I laughed at both of them...they did this to me
Cabir explained nandini helplessly
Nandini - I don't know what to say now...u guys have ruined ur clothes...ab aliya won't leave u three
Mukti - oh shit now we have to change aur clothes aur ye outfit Jo hum kharab kar chuke hai ye aliya ne decide kari thi ab uska colour combination kharab ho jayenga...Sab teri galti hai manik
Manik - nahi its ur fault Maine kaha na
Mukti manik again started fighting...pulling each other hair n throwing the haldi paste on each other...n cabir was just grinding between them...nandini tried to stop them but fab3 was just not listing to her...so to stop them...nandini held her her stomach n screamed
Nandini - aah manik...its paining a lot
Fab3 stopped the fight right their...without any delay manik came close to nandini...but she stopped screaming n didn't let manik or anyone touch her
Manik panicked n said worriedly - nandini what happened?...tumko uthaunga tabhi hospital ja paenge na
Nandini straightened her herself n said casually - kuch nahi hua mujhe...tum teeno ki fight rokne ke liye acting rahi thi
Manik looked at nandini angrily n shouted - are u mad...is this the way to stop us or u were scaring me
Nandini got a bit scared but she didn't let it show on her face n smiled...while fab3 look at her with anger n shock as manik has shouted on her but still she's smiling...then they thought it must be some of her mood swings so they chucked it n fab3 wanted to hug her but again she backed off
Manik - nandini enough of ur mood swings now
Mukti - ha kabhi smile karti hai kabhi pass nahi ane deti
Cabir - lagta hai main pagal ho jaunga
Nandini - all three of u go and change ur clothes first then I'll think about a hug...coz I don't want to ruin my dress
Cabir - hmm smart...lekin hum teeno to fas gaye..aliya ne colour combination khud decide kiya tha now she will scold all of us
Mukti - not everybody...only three of us
Manik - oh come on guys let's just clean ourselves first aur baki Sab baad me dekhenge
They all agreed...then manik held nandini's wrist tightly n walked to their room...as soon as they got in manik locked the room n turned towards nandini...he walked close to her angrily while she was taking each step back
Nandini - manik kya hua itne ghusse me kyu ho
Manik didn't reply
Nandini - listen I'm sorry
Manik - u seriously think that sorry is enough for scaring me like this
Manik was glaring at nandini with so much anger that nandini shut her eyes tightly...manik smiled as she did that...he picked up the bowl of haldi from the table n applied it on her face...as soon as she felt the soft cold paste on her face she opened her eye to see a smiling manik standing with the bowl in his hand..he took some more paste on his hands...applied on his own cheeks...leaned forward n rubbed his cheeks with her
Manik - I won't say sorry to scare u...coz it was ur punishment
Nandini hugged manik tightly n said - shit manik u scared me but I know that its not even close to ur fear
Manik - exactly

Nandini - arre tumne mujhe lagaya but u didn't applied it on our baby

Manik - oh freak

Manik bend down on his knees...he started creasing her tummy n gave lots of kisses to baby through tummy

Manik - sorry baby...mama itna pareshan karte hai na mujhe ki main aapko bhol hi gaya tha for a moment...but don't worry now ur dadda is here...so time for some haldi

Nandini moved the fabric from her tummy...manik gave some more pecks n slightly applied some haldi on her belly...he stood up n after a long kiss confessed to each other

Nandini - I love u
Manik - I love u too
****************
Haldi decoration
www.udaipurweddings.com/images/devigarh/4.jpg
Aliya
baggout.tiles.large.s3-ap-southeast-1.amazonaws.com/Craftsvilla-Gracious-Chitrangada-SIngh-In-Exclusive-Yellow-Designer-Saree-30138656-d1f77b1f-444f-4870-ac61-af76291e6751-jpg.jpg
Nandini
baggout.tiles.large.s3-ap-southeast-1.amazonaws.com/Craftsvilla-Gracious-Chitrangada-SIngh-In-Exclusive-Yellow-Designer-Saree-30138656-d1f77b1f-444f-4870-ac61-af76291e6751-jpg.jpg
Mukti
www.fashionlivemedia.com/wp-content/uploads/2013/11/Maxi-dress-Indian-style-443x1024.jpg
Navya
cdn.shopify.com/s/files/1/0611/8081/products/72004-A_MADHUBALA-BOLLYWOOD-DESIGNER-SALWAR-KAMEEZ-MAGNIFICENT-OFF-WHITE-_-YELLOW-GEORGETTE-ANARKALI-SALWAR-KAMEEZ-WITH-CHIFFON-DUPATTA_medium.jpg?v=1437748732
**********************
Mandaps were set n the elders with navni kavya were waiting for fab5 abhi arya to show up n start the haldi ceremony...but bcoz of the early morning haldi fight manik mukti cabir ruined there outfits which aliya selected for them...so they were all gathered in aliya's room
Aliya - what the hell is this guys...why are u wearing black
Mukti - actually my dress got ruined bcoz of manik
Manik - hey stop blaming me all the time...n what u did ha
Mukti - what did I do?
Manik - oh my god...don't try to act innocent...mukti u ruined my n cabir's kurta
Aliya sat on bed with her face covered by her palm n said - u guys ruined the while picture
Cabir - picture...what picture?
Dhruv - Wo photographer pic lenga to u guys will look odd in the pic bcoz of the colour of ur outfit
Cabir - dhruv why are u behaving like a girl...aur ye kya colour colour laga rakha hai...ab chalo sab
Aliya - no I don't want to come
Aryaman - aliya don't be stupid...ur the bride u have to come
Abhi - nandini ka msg bhi aa gaya hai sab wait kar rahe hai ab chalo
Dhruv - aliya its ok...itni choti si baat pe kyu ghussa kar rahi ho
Manik - OK aliya agar tum itni ghussa ho to main cabir aur mukti group pic me nahi ayenge
Aliya looked at him with disbelieve n shouted - how dare u say that manik...ye stupid colour ke liye u will remove ur self out of the frame
Manik - bullseye..!!
Aliya - what?
Manik - I was just blackmailing u yaar...chill nothing to worry now
Cabir - thanks bro tune iska dimag jagah pe la diya...chalo ab haldi time
(Dolli)
cdnsb.shaadibazaar.netdna-cdn.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/06/05-FarahZaidHaldi-0307-300x200.jpg
Mukti took dhruv with him at the main pool side where the haldi ceremony would be held...while the boys made aliya sit in a dolli n manbir aryaman abhi carried the dolli from the main door till the mandap n rishab was walking in front of them clicking their pictures...as soon as they reached the mandap...they saw three guys with exactly same height wrapped up in a bed cover
This tradition was made by none other than the fab5...even during manan n cavya wedding they followed this same tradition...the groom will be wrapped In a bed sheet with two more people individually n the bride will be sitting in a dolli n the guys of their family will take her till the mandap...then the bride will have to recognise the groom
Manbir forwarded their hand to aliya...she held their hand n cane out if the dolli
Aryaman - come on aliya now u have to find dhruv
Abhi - aur sambhal ke sab same height ke hai confuse mat ho jana
Aliya - I don't need to get confuse..I'm smart enought to recognise my man
Guys hooted in unison - wooh...come on aliya
Nandini - dhruv koi signal mat dena...warna...
Navya - ha warna aaj raat tum dono ki shaadi nahi ho payengi
Aliya - guys let me concentrate
Everyone were teasing aliya...n she was poking checking out each n every clue to recognise dhruv...after taking some 15mins aliya kept her right shoulder on the middle guy n shouted that he is dhruv...dhruv's mother untied the rope bind over the sheet...n yes it was dhruv, aliya was right...she hugged him lightly n the shy boy kept blushing
Dhrulya were sitting on a small stool for each...then one by one starting by the elders amms dhruv's dadi mom followed by others...then friends turn came n cavya with kavya first applied small tip on their faces followed by mukti aryaman abhi kavya...at last manan came...they applied the haldi paste on dhrulya together holding each other hands...dhruv's dadi who was standing right behind dhrulya said in between
Dadi - dhruv aliya tum to bade kismat wale ho...Jo ladki pregnant hai aur dulha dulhan ki rasmo me saath deti hai...WO jodi hamesha khush rehti hai
Amms - ha aur khushiya unki agge peeche rehti hai
Manan n dhrulya blushed n everyone blessed the two couple...after the formal haldi...all the youngsters started throwing n smashing their faces with hadli...fab5 navya arymaman abhi were running after each other like they will fill the haldi in their ears n mouth...nandini kavya were sitting under mandap watching n enjoying the moment...manik n cabir winked each other...with that they pushed aryaman abhi dhruv in the pool
Aryaman - these rasams are so freaking awesome...wooh
Mukti aliya pushed manbir to the pool but manik got saved n cabir was inside the pool...mukliya ran behind manik n he hid behind nandini
Aliya - not fair ha manik...stop hiding behind nandini...come out now its ur turn
Manik sat beside nandini...slit his hands around her waist n resting his chin on her shoulder
Manik - no I won't come...I'll be with my love only
nandini - arre manik go...its ok...tum drain ho bhi Gaye na to bhi I won't stop u from holding me
Manik - nai jana mujhe...main yahi baithunga tumhare saath
Kavya - Chachu I'm alto (also) hele na
Manik - of course baby I know ur here...n I won't let anybody touch u
Kavya - Chachu u ale the best
Nandini - aur massi best nahi hai?
Kavya - u ale also best Chachi
Manan kissed on kavya's cheek...then mukliya pulled manik together n he went away showing a sad puppy face to nandini n she smiled looking at his cute antics
Before mukliya could push manik...he pushed them before...while girls were abusing for pushing them...manik pulled dhruv n they both jumped in the pool together

So here is the update...I hope I'm not that late than before...actually I wanted to give an update yesterday only but I didn't want u guys to read small chapters so I updated today

I hope it was okay
N pls do comment n I have talked about a sequel before but I want at least 5-7 pages comment for the sequel then only I will be able to proceed with it

But for now let's forget about the future n pls do like n comment as it helps me to write as fast as I can

132

Quote