Manan OS: Her Shadow part 2/2 updated pg.6 ( may 18th)

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baisakh45

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

This is so beautiful. I don't have words to describe how amazing it is. You made me so emotional. Oh god right now I am a mess. It's just beautiful. It's the only word I can use for this piece. I will be eagerly waiting for the next part.

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Samiyra Shergill

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

As heartbreaking as this is, you did a wonderful job penning it down. Kudos girl!

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kriti094

@kriti094

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

This is so damn amazing
badly waiting for the second part
i am a big fan of ur writing skills

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missviolet

@missviolet

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Umm wow this is really beautiful. I love ur concepts they are heartbreakingly beautiful. I have read nandani promise before and i legit cried so much while i read that...and this too brought tears to my eyes. Their struggle is painful but i know they will find a way.

You write well. I enjoy what you write.You should write more often. And please update this soon:)

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Humairaa

@Humzy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

wow it left me speechless

literally made me cry

loved it

cont soon

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aliyaangel

@aliyaangel

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

OMG.. it such a beautiful os..
i cant define how much i love it ...
they way u hve described nandiniz turmoil.. what shez going through,how she misses all those beautiful moments.. it just amazing...
n manik.. how can someone be soo loving n caring.. i mean he is doing evry possible thing to bring her back.. he wont leave her ever.. walk with her in every situation.. awwweee
im in love with this manan... both want the best for each othr.. n im sure its him whose behind hr..
btw i loved when she tried chcking his forehead he ws kissing her hand instead.. n the line he said about her disappearng image one..
all in all the best i hve read..
n this is truly my longest commnt till date..
plllzzz post the next part soon.. n ofcourse the short film too... :)

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Serena

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

That was really beautiful. The way you brought out Nandini's need for independence, to be herself; Manik's need to protect and care for her and the final collaborative enterprise - very much in character, therefore all the more beautiful.

Manik is watching her, isn't he?

Waiting for Part 2...

Love,

Serena