Manan OS: Her Shadow part 2/2 updated pg.6 ( may 18th)

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ershilpavyas

@ershilpavyas

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Posted: 10 years ago

#71

Its vry vry heart touching story...you penned it very beautifully...hats off yar 👏

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radhika

@Excel00703

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Posted: 10 years ago

#72

Fabulous thought I just loved it please pm me when you update a new story next time :)

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Witcher

@Witcher

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Posted: 10 years ago

#73

I read the first part along time ago and didnt find the next part, i had saved the link on my mobile and i forgot

Okay anyway, this was beautiful magnificent and perfect

I thought the first part was awesome but the second part was just wow

Manik, he was just so in character, i can see him doing this, there are so many stories which make him do something that he would never do and thats okay but its nice to read the show manik

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wonderstar13

@wonderstar13

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Posted: 10 years ago

#74

this was so beautiful...i was literally crying while reading this..love is what makes life worth living n u expressed it so beautifully through ur words..

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miamalhotra

@miamalhotra

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Posted: 10 years ago

#75

👍🏼ok i know m quite late...but but but...this was awsome wat i jst read...i read ur his light earlier and it was too gud i was crying read though m not that kind of a emotional person u made me cry and i thank u for that...so sorry for not commenting that time but i lost the link that day that is why couldnt do it...and today also i was jst carried with flow...i neva wanted this story to end up...thank u for this...other than the fab storylines the way u write is so gud...its jst mesmerizing...its jst wow...i was compelled to comment...though m a silent reader...once again thanku...keep writing pleasss...👏