Ff: Manan love (Part 10 on pg 7 posted 6 july) - Page 2

I am not getting any words to say...

It was nice...

By the way, all couples are okay expect harshad n alya. Actually i think they look bro sis more than a couple.

But its ur wish to keep them or not. If u keep them couple it ll be good also.

Part 3

Manik WAS seeing nandinis back he move towards her and started to kiss nandinis back nandinis ego was saying k WO use slap kare lekin dil keh raha tha let him do after 10 mins nandini peeche murti hai Kiss his lips Passionately Inside their mouth their tongues were fighting their lips were on each other they were breathless they apart themselves very hardly as they didn't wanted to then they again kiss ab phir se they broke dono koshish karte hai to avoid the gaze phir manik nandini ko jacket deta hai or vo chup chap lekar Pehn leti hai dono nearby bench par beth jate hai and ek doosre ko dekhte dekhte or kch dair pehle wale moment yaad karte karte so jate hai

MORNING

Guard a kar library ka darwaxa kholta hai jis se Manan uth jate hai or chup jate haithat noons sees jab guard chale jata hai to vo bahar jate hai college gate par Fab4 and Nh4 ko dekhte hai
Navya : Nandini TM kaha thi tmhein pata hai hum kitne parishaan hogaye the
Nandini:Vo...
Abhi : Haan baby doll TM kaha thi batao
Aliya : Manik kaha the TM
Manik : Vo mein or nandini lib mein band hogaye the
Fab4 and Nh4 in UNION : kiya ???
Manik : Haan
Sab Ki naxar nandini k pehne coat par jati hai
Aliya : TM ne Manik k jacket kyun pehne hai tmhein sharam nahi ati hai Characterless
( Guys Aliya lyks manik and is possessive Just lyk not love haan but noone knows except u guys :-) )
Nandini ko yeh sun kar bohot gussa ata hai and she leaves the place ..while crying
NH4 Aliya ko Dante hai or waha se gusse mein chali jati hai Or Fab4 sochte hai usse kiya huva
WO log Usk peeche chale jate hain Iss tarah sab k chuti hojati hai

Nandini And Abhi's Home

Nandinis Room
Nan ro rahi hoti hai or sab Usk zehn mein ata hai their kiss phir achanak Alya k words ..
Nh4 use darwaxa kholne kliye kehte hai magar vo unhein Jane k liye bolti hai

Aliyas house
Sab log sochte hai Aliya ko kiya huva

issi mein pura din guxar jata hai

Next Day

Nh5 and Fab5 accidentally ek saath ate hai ek dusre ko dekh kar andar chale jate hai

Class Room

Puri Class mein Nh5 and Fab5 haste rehte hai

Announcement Room

Announcement hoti hai that Fab5 k main leader Manik Malothra k ghar aj raat party hai ..Jis ko sun kar sab bohot khush hote hai lekin Nh5 kehte hai hum nahi jayegay usi Waqt Manik ink pass akar kehta hai U all r invited come for sure or chale jata hai

Manik's House

Party shuru hoti hai Manik bar bar darwaxe par dekhta hai Cabir Maxak urata hai uska ...
And finally Nh5 agaye party mein

Precap .. Couple r made ..dance ..attitude ..ignoring

manik toh nandu ka hi intezar karega na..

Part 4

Uff Nh5 are looking damn hot , beautiful , handsome and sexy ..
Nandini wearing a backless gown
All of them entered the party
Manik is shocked seeing nandini looking sezy
Suddenly the song start Jeena Jeena And every1 start dancing Harshad with Mukti Abhi with Aliya
Cabir with Navya Manik with Rose and Dhruv with Nandini ... Aisa nahi tha k manik ne nandini ko offer nahi ki manik ne k but nandini ne mana kardia Aliya k alfax sochte huvey

ON THE DANCE FLOOR


Har koi apne partners ko dekhte hai except Manik , , Dhruv , Aliya , Rose
Manik nandini ko dekh raha hota hai lekin vo nahi dekhti hai as she know vo use dekh raha hai Dhruv Aliya ko dekhta hai but WO Manik ko dekh rahi hoti hai and Rose Dhruv ko .. ...Middle mein Nandini acha feel nahi karti to bo vaha se bhag jati hai Lenin ek waiter se taqar hoti hai and juice Usk kapro par ..Vo gusse mein dress saaf karne kliye jagh puchte hai and waiter batata hai manik ka room WO andar jati hai washroom mein saaf karne and dosri taraf dance floor mein Manik k saath bhi yehi hota hai and WO washroom jata hai

Precap Manan romance Ignoring

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Awesome ff...

Too short...but liked it!! continue asap!!!

Part 5

In Room

Nandini washroom mein hoti hai dress saaf karahi hoti Uske sare hairs agee hote hai and her sexy back dikh rahe hoti hai manik jese hi enter hota hai he is shocked to see the sexy back of nandini vo slowly slowly nandini Ki taraf jata hai she is unaware of manik's presence manik uske pass jakar Usk sexy back ko haath lagata hai and nandini aware hokar apne side change karleti manik usko hold karta hai WO karne nahi deti or usi chakar mein khulta hai shower or shower neeche dono sab bhool jate hai manik ka haath nandini k waist par pohncta hai and dosra hath namdini k face lar nandini k haath manik k neck par they both r so close going to kiss eachother sirf 1 cm ka fasla hota hai lekin nandini ko Aliyaa k lafx phir yaad arahe hote hai or manik k haath nandini k back par pohnch raha hota hai magr nandini peeche hojate hai and BUT ALIYA keh kar wahaa se rote rote bhar ajaati hai WO poori wet hoti hai to manik chupchap mukti ka dress de kar chala jata hai nandini change karleti hai manik doosre room mein jakr change karleta hai

In Party

Nandini neeche ati hai dekhti hai manik cabir ek satth batein karrahe hai vo abhi k pass jati hai and kehte hai Bhai I wann go home phir NH5 ghar chale jate hai Nandini ko jate dwkh kar vo bohot sad hota hai or cabir ko sab kch batata hai cabir zor se kehta hai MANIK MALOTHRA IS IN LOVE
party khatam hojati hai sab ghar chale jate hai Fab4 ja rahe hote hai lekinanik Aliya ko ROK leta hai baat karne k liye and Aliya bohot khush hoti hai

Maniks Room

Manik : Aliya TM mere bare mein kiya sochti ho sach sach batana

Aliya : Kch nahi

Manik : Jhut mat bolo warna Jo college mein TM ne nandini ko kaha vo kyun

Aliya : Woo ...Or Nandini ka dress waha dekhti hai kehti hai manik ye kis ka dress hai yaha kiya karraha hai tmhare kamreein

Manik : Yeh nandini ka ...

Aliya : Nandini ka dress tmhare kamre kiya karraha hai phir se character...

Manik : Enough!!!!! kiya hogaya hai TM suna kyun rahi ho WO Jo bhi karrahe tmhein kiya

Aliya : Damn !! I Love U !!! I can't see u with anyone

Manik : But O Don't Love u I consider u asy frnd

Aliya : Yy don't u Luv Me because of that jerk nandini

Manik : I won't listen anythg about her

Or phir Aliya or Manik k bohot larai hoti hai or Aliya ghar chali jati hai

Ni8

Manik nandini k bare mein soch raha hota hai and nandini manik . Manik apne ap ko khud keha hai I love her and Nandini bhi kehti hai I love him but WO decide karti hai to ignore him becox of Aliya's word Or dono so jate hai

Morning
College

Fab5 and Nh5 ek saath college mein enter hote hai dono band khush hote hai except Nandini . Classes jate hai attend karte hai Manik Nandini ko Aliya manik ko Abhi Aliya ko Rose Dhruv ko Dhruv kisi ko bhi nahi Harshad Mukti ko Cabir Navya ko starring (tarr) rahe hote hai

Canteen

Sab canteen mein apne apne table par behte hote hai achank ek dashing sa larka ata hai and nandini ko utha kar ghoomata hai or phir hug karta hai nandini chilati hai sab usko dekhte hai manik larke k pass jahi raha hota hai jab vo dekhta hai k nandini us larke ko hug karti hai nandini kehti hai AYAAN what a surprise phir Dino alag hote hai NH5 use milte hai Ayaan Nandini Ka haath pakrta hai And Manik " Jealous" ho raha hota hai ..Ayaan is nandini's childhood best friend
Preccap : Jealousy

Need ur suggestion
Kiya Aplo ko jis zabaanein likhti hun vo sahi lagti hai ya mein English mein likhu ??
Ap log ko jealous manik k ilawa story mein kiya chaye ??

Note ... Mein ne kaha tha I vl post Friday or Saturday but I am posting in mid for u guys so give me nice and long feedbacks another wise I vl finish it in one more part

The language u want to use depends on u but I would say english as it's too more easy but still ur choice..