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twinkle10

@twinkle10

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: prati_25
wow beautifully written.👏
you made every word of your post worth reading and feeling the pain ..

Aww absolutely overwhelmed with this comment. Thankyou so much babe for the praises. <3

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sosweetsumi

@sosweetsumi

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#22

i was waitng for such post
please do continue
bye sumi

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twinkle10

@twinkle10

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: .SobtiLicious.
Oh wow u have written it up so beautifully ..👏
Loved it ❤️

Thanks girl! <3

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twinkle10

@twinkle10

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: LIKEDMG
Awesome write up for Manik's pain..the girl he doesn't want to b out from his sight is missing .. Whn she was wid him.. Hw painful .. Hw emptiness..hw darkness..for Manik Malhotra ..

Very well said... *sighhh* seriously Parth was amazing today!

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twinkle10

@twinkle10

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi
i was waitng for such post
please do continue
bye sumi

Thanks so much Sumi...glad you enjoyed the read <3

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Preeshaxo

@Preeshaxo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

*SIGHHH*
Read two posts in one day.. SLAYEDDD!!!!
If anything in these last two days I've missed your writing, when you become someone's habit not reading their words is torture!!
Like Kaisi?? You incorporated the never have I ever game into his feelings?? TAKE A FREAKING BOW MY GIRL.. PURE GENIUS THIS WAS!!!

Oh man my heart broke for Manik!! The desperation, the restlessness, the panic, the worry.
Manik and Nyonika's conversation was too good. The amount of times he tell hers I'll kill you, I'll kill you if you touch her. He screams "Nandini kahan hai" him begging her to tell him where she is and his own mother just says I'm not your only enemy. The weakening of his knees as he still doesn't know who has her. That last scream of her name, that came from the depth of his soul just broke my heart.
As his friends make their way to help him they see him in a way they never have "don't you understand we're wasting time here" the police come to question him, he looses his cool. "pyaar karta hoon usse"
Oh my heart broke even more!
Manik told her during the whole soha fiasco to never pull a stunt like this again. He has always said to her I want you safe in front of my eyes. I don't think anyone realises how he can't imagine his life without her. A couple of hours ago they were happy, in each others arms and now? She went missing from right under his noes. He knows every second he is separated from her the danger surrounding her is increasing, every moment away from her he is dying that little bit more inside. Nandini is his sanity, his piece of mind. I always knew Nandini would be Manik's weakness and it's proving day by day.
"I have to find her, I have to find her now, I need to see her, I need to see her safe" The pain in his voice, the thoughts of the moments he just spent with her.
He broke my heart!!

He tells pandit that I am a monster, we shall all witness a side of Manik Malhotra that no one has seen before not even Manik himself!!!

Love
Preesha aka Your Soheesha 🤗

Edited by Preeshaxo - 10 years ago

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ajith37

@ajith37

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

I just don't know how u do it. Awesome writing. I salute u my dear.

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twinkle10

@twinkle10

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: Preeshaxo
I'll be back..
Real life be taking over 😭
Hopefully I can do these two posts by this weekend!
I miss you 😭

Soheesha!! Omg I miss you too... Hope you've been though and I'm going to wait for your return so we can let out some emotions! Love you <3

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anotheranfan

@anotheranfan

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#29

I am back to my old format of points 😆 just because i am too tired catching up replying to all the threads 😃

1. Maanik's panic on finding out that nandu is missing.. I thought it was acted out really well.. The way he keeps looking even behind the branch and trees.. keeps shouting her name while pacing along..

2. Nyo seriously has good dialogs 😆 *lagata hai he has managed to do it this time with evil smirk*... She is feigning innocence but maanik - shut up and stop pretending.. He knows her so well na.. He knows that she is behind this.. He shouts at her, begs her.. Really thats the love.. He already cant see anything happen to her and now to just recent intimacy adds to the emotional level.. And that part came out really well in this scene.. And maanik said he will kill her... will he realise at the end that he can kill for Nandu? Because even though his heart might have healed but this question remains unanswered...

3. Pandit thinks he is taking nandini away for her well being 🤣🤣 How delusional one can be😆

4. Cabir taunting Mukti that her only aim in lie was to bring Manan together 🤣🤣

5. Maanik called Dhruv 😃 Guess the fight really resolved everything 😃

6. Pandit is really in one psycho mode 😆 and the new entry - he saw earring fall on the road 😆😆😆 But he didnt see nandu in the car back seat,., Didnt hear her banging the window 🤣🤣🤣 what a lame way to stretch the drama..

7. Police came, blamed maanik, he got angry on them and then police did nothing 🤣🤣 He was so annoyed and irritated that they are asking faaltu questions instead of going on the search.. That part came out nice.. And when police blamed him for her missing, the way he said he loves her and fights with the police.. really the stress, guilt, panic, irritation that maanik felt,, the need to go, do something to find her asap, it showed nicely..

8. Niti acted well.. Her fear of what pandit is doing came out really well.. Pandit thinks nandu is going to thank him for saving her 🤣🤣 When he made her drink water i thought he would mix someting in it.. Atleast they didnt use that cliche.. 😆 Pandit asking nandu why she is resisting him 🤣 psychoness ki height hai.. 🤣

9. Nyo explaining definition of kidnapping and giving 101 lessons of kidnapping to pandit 🤣🤣

10. Chachi - maanik conversation - i felt so sad for Maanik.. It just adds to his guilt and sadness..

11. He needs to find her asap.. He has reached pandit's house but hope they dont stretch this any further..

12 omg what is editor doing .. just randomly adding those confession scenes on Judai song.. The song started abruptly and ended abruptly too...

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anotheranfan

@anotheranfan

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#30

what have you done twinkle.. Loved how you tied this episode to this never have i ever game.. Expressed maanik malhotra's state of mind and heart like never before.. He is like angry sher at moment... And then there is pandit who doesnt know he has kidnapped Nandu 😆😆😆 Pandit ki to khair nahi ab.. 😃

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