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Posted: 10 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: gaurimenon


Ya dear i understand...i just wanted to show u, the new nd completly transformed maanik...
nd we all knw nandu is always everyones favrite



This Manik is loving and bond with people beyond Fab 5 :) but please show some special bonds of Nandini too :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52
aww chutki was adorable n i jst love manan...i hope u continue writing even after diwali ends n show manan love n bonding during nandini pregnancy⭐️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: gaurimenon

Ya dear i understand...i just wanted to show u, the new nd completly transformed maanik...
nd we all knw nandu is always everyones favrite

Ya dear ..i ll definitely try it in next update.bcz thats gonna be the last one
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54
I love ur DP :-):-):-) gives me the feels... romantic wala! And ur story is super cute too... loving it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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pls update soon...cant wait anymore now😭
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Part 7A

Since the last part is gona be lengthy .i hav divided it into two

(now cabir was sitting on the kitchen slab,me and navya were busy in cooking)

Navya: yeh chutki bhi na,agar use manik mil jaye phir usse kisi ki bhi parwa nahi rahti,yahaan tak ki mujhe aur cabir ko bhi nahi dekhti

Cabir: ya that's true madhu bala

Me:dono lovers jo hain...

Navya: nandu tumhe yaad hain ,ek manik tha jiss se poora college daraata tha...aur ab dekho iss manik ko jo sirf pyaar karna jaanta hain..

Cabir: so toh hain,kya jaadu kiya hain nandini tumne uspe?7 saal pehle meine sapane mein bhi nahi socha tha ki hume kabhi esse manik ko dekhne ko milega jiske andar gusse ke alwa itne saare emotions hain

Me: nandini's magic😊😊...but aisa kuch nahi hain cabir meine kuch nahi kiya voh pehle se aisa hi tha par usne apne saare emotions ko vo monster mask ke andar chupa diya ta ki voh tum sabko protect kar sake...par ab voh sab express karne laga hain

Cabir: no nandini seriously...itna change...almost 7 saath saal ho gaye tumhare relation ko aur aaj bhi pata hain jab bhi tumahari baath aati hai, ya phir tumahra koi phone call, nahi toh ghar vapas aneke time, itna excited rehta ki jaise tum dono kal hi lovers bane the... kabhi kabhi toh mein usse jhoru ka gulam kehke chidatha hoon...par usse koi farak nahi padta, he just gives his smirk ,and says u r jealous of our love...agr yeh pehle hota toh voh mujhe maar daalta

Me:( I cudnt stop my blush)

Cabir: nandini im serious ...tum ho kya yaar ?hum sab ki life tumne badal di...tumhare vajah se ek monster majnu ban gaya, aur tum hi thi jisne pehli baar mere dard ko samjaa, jab socha ki mere life mein abhi pyaar keliye koi jagah nahi hain tumne hi chutki aur navya ko mere life mein beja,dekho ab meri life kitni sorted out hain,aur toh mukti jo bachoo ki awaaz se itna chidthi thi voh dekho aaj more than 100's of bacchon ki maa hain,voh aaj apni dil ki baat sun rahi hai , Abhi manyu ke sapaane pure kar rahi hain aur voh bhahut khush bhi hain,tumne usse samjayaa tume use ek direction di life ki aur, aur alya aur dhruv ka patch up bhi tum hi ne karvaya tha na.ab dekho hum sab kitne khush hain yeh sab tumahar vajah se

Me: bas cabir ...not anymore( I had tears in my eyes)

Cabir: no nandini bolne do mujhe...now we cant imagine our lives without you.pata kya impact hain tumara hum sabki life .maanik ke saath saath tum bhi hum sabkeliye ek strong pillar ho jispar hum sahaara le sake.jab manik physical strenghth se hume protect karta hain tum hume emotional strength deti ho...nd we all luv u for that...u r one in a million friend

Navya: voh kaise nahi hogi .pehli humari friend jo hain...ab bas karo tum dono nahi toh hum ro denge

Me: mein bhi...aur tum sab meri firend nahi family ho...aur tum sab ko khush rakhna meri duty hain...aur tum sabki vajah se meri life itni colourful hain.

(cabir walked towards me and took my hand in his...)

Cabir: nandini aaj mujhe tumse kuch chahiyee...tum dogi na mujhe

Me: ha..bolo cabir kya baat...hain?...u knw na if I hav I ll defintly give u?tell me wat u want

Cabir: I knw nandini ,hum itne saal ache dost rahe,tumne mere life ko sambala,tumne meri mumma ko samjaya,mere aur navya ke rishte ko ek naam diya...

Me: bas cabir...wats all these,ur suspense is killing me...

Cabir: waah tum to maanik ki carbon copy banti jaa rahi ho...

Me: stop it cabir..i m serious..

Cabir: ok...I ..i...need a sister,mujhe ek behen chahiye...i knw we don't hav any blood relation ...par phir bhi...

(I was so happy hearing this from cabir,agar rishab ke baad kisike tharaf mujhe ek bhai ka pyaar aya hain toh voh sirf cabir tha...par meine use kabhi batayaa nahi...aur aaj usne mere muh ki baat cheen li...we had a mutual feeling)

Me: aww cabir u r so cute (i pulled his cheeks...)..ek behen ban ne keliye I don't think ki u need a blood relation bus pyaar ka rishta ki kaafi...aur tum jaisa bhai mila toh mein world ki luckiest sister bani..na...

Navya:ha ha ab toh hum tumhari bhabi ban gayi...ab bohat maza ayega...

(Yeh navya bhi na...)

Cabir: so you are ok with it?

Me: double ok...thumps up

(Cabir hugged me and navya too...)

(Mukti manik alya druv chutki enters together saw us)

Mukti: wat the hell?(she ran towards us in kitchen)

Manik: yeh kya ho raha hain

Alya:shit ...

Druv: guys hume bhool gaye...

Mukti: u 3 idots,humare bina group hug...

(We 3 were still hugging)

Cabir: chal saaree nautanki come on...

(They all ran towards us and hugged us...a group hug 7 diiferent people still a single soul,a hug with full of warmth love, togetherness, friendship )

Chutki: paa mujhe bhi...

Cabir : haaan mere bachaa tub hi aaja...

(She got inside our group hug and nw she was in the center we were circling her.)

Mukti: ek minute...evryone smile.plzzz...she took groupiess...

(After our photoshoot session we broke our hug and moved to the hall...)

Mukti: oh cabir...saale...aaj kyun tujhe itna pyaar aa raha tha...in dono par (Pointing towards me an navya.)

Cabir: (he smiled and took me towards him and while keeping his hands around my shoulder)aaj mein tum sabke saamne kuch officially declare karna chahta hoon

Manik: ( shockingly) wat ?? officially?

Cabir: oyye romeo jyaada aankhen phad ke math dekh vo neeche gir jayega...mere ghar mein already do drama queen hain aur mujhe teri wali bilkul nahi chahiyee...

(All bursted out into laughter looking at maniks expression)

Alya: jaldi bolo na cabir...

Cabir: voh actually meine nandini ko officially apna behen bana liya...(he luked at me and hit his head with mine,smiled)hain na nandu?

Me: yes my dear brother...

Manik: oho...itna pyaar...so thank u cabir...punch share karne ke liye partner toh mil gaya na mujhe...

Me: maanik...i ll nt punch him,kyunki voh tumhare tarah monster nahi hain...he is so sweet

Manik: achaa...tumhe abhi batata hoon monster kaise hote hain...(he started walking towards me...and I hid behind cabir,cabir stood as wall between me and manik)

Cabir( dramatically): meri behen ko choone se pehle tumhe meri laash se guzarna padega...

Manik: punched him cahl dramebaaz...

(Then hum sab ek saath baitke baathein karne lage,aur humne bhohat bhohat baatein kar rahe thein)

Dhruv: vaise nandini tumne aaj hum sabko yaahan kyun bhulaya...tum keh rahi thin na kuch spcl hain...

Alya: oh ys nandini jaldi bolo

Me: (I stood up from the couch and also took manik )voh bas...

( then I whispefed in maniks ear tum bolo, he: no tum,me: nahi tum)

Cabir: yeh kya khusad pusad chal rahi hain

Me: nahi cabir ...voh maanik batayega...

Mukti: toh bol na manik.jaldi

(He was soo nervous...)

Manik: voh...nandu...nandu hain na...

Navya:hume pata hain nandu hain hume dikh raha hai

Manik: nahi... mein aur nandu...na...

Cabir: (irritatedly) jaldi bol saale tu kya itna bhaav khaa raha hain

Manik: ok guys ...mein aur nandu pregnant hain

(Due to nervousness his tongue slipped,and all bursted out into laugh)

Cabir:( trying to stop his laughter) nandu pregnant hain toh teek hain,par tub hi...intresting

Manik: (then realized his mistake,he is completely embarrassed) nahi mein pregnant nahi hoon,sirf nandu hain aur hum dono parents banana ja rahe hain

Mukti:wow that's a super cool surprise (she came running to me hugged me kneeled down and kissed my belly)...so chotu monster welcome to our family

Navya : ab tum jao ab humari baari,(mukti ko hatake she started hugging me) hum bohat khush hein nandu...meri chutki ke saath khelne keliye koi aa raha hain...

(Then druv and alya came together and hugged me)

Alya: congrats nandini...we are waiting

Dhruv:apna khayal rakhna nandini...

Cabir: hatoo sab its my turn...(he hugged me) thnk u so much. mujhe yeh tumhara Diwali offer bhahut achha laga aaj hi bhai bana aur aaj hi mama bhi bana diya...i love u darling...phoolom ka taaron ka sabka kehna hain ek hazzaarom mein meri behna hain.saari umar hume saang rehna hain...

Manik: yaar .mujhe bhi toh koi badaai doo.afterall aadda credit toh mujhe bhi jaata hain na

(Then every strated wishing him)

Navya: chutki... .dekh ab tumahara ek bhai ya behen anewali hain...

Chutki:baby nandu mausi ke pet mein hain?

Navya: haan...

Chutki: toh nandu mausi ka baby ane wala hain?(she turned towards maanik and asked )boyfriend tumne nandu mausi ko kiss kiya?

(We all were shocked ,along with embarrassment especially me and maanik)

Cabir: nahi nahi tumhara boyfriend aise thodi na karta hain ?kyun manik

(Manik became tomato red)

Cabir :raat ko na ek pari ayi thi aur nandu mausi ke pet mein baby rakhke chali gayi hain na nandu

Me: shut up cabir

Chutki : muhje na ek baby boy chahiye .

Manik: haan chutki ...pakka agar iss bar baby boy nahi huva toh agli bar zaroor ...ok

Chutki: agar tab bhi nahi huua toh?

Manik: uske agle baar...agar phir bhi nahi toh..dont worry I will try...

Cabir: saale tujhe bachhe chahiye ya kya khudki SPACE ACADEMY kholni .. iraada kya hain?

(There was full of happiness around us...then we started to have our dinner )

At dining table

(Cabir and navya,alya chutki druv ,mukti me and maanik...)

Cabir: mujhe voh dish pas kar na mukti,

alya: cabir mer liye bhi

druv : wow nandini yeh toh bahut achhi bani hai

mukti : mujhe voh kheer toh paas kar.

(Navya aur cabir phirse fighting mode on ,dhruv aur aliya chutki ko khila rahe the,aliya usse bohot pyar karti thi vo bas harshad ki galti ko apne pyaar se mitana chahtithi yaha tak ki chutki ke sabi spcl occasions keliya dresses alya design karti hain ,kabhi kabhi 2 3 din keliye chutki ko apne ghar le jati hain aur use picnic par lekejaati hain...uske saare wishes poori karti hain...apni maa ke baad chutki sabse zyada pyaar alya se karti thi,mukti tho hum sabko dekh kar khush thi,aur voh phone pe apne NGO ki Diwali party keliye instructions de rahi thi..)

(Manik ne niche se mera ek haat pakada hua thaa,hum dono bahut kush thein seeing our haapy big family ...aiyappa hum sab ko aise hi hamesha khush rakhiyee..par meri aankhon ne mujhe dokha de diya...tears started rolling down.and manik sensed it)

Manik: kya hua nandu

Me: kuch nahi ,sab ko dekh kar ...I wipped my tears

Manik: tum bhi na... dara deti ho...

(He kissed my forehead )

Cabir: abbee beshramoo...humara chod .itna toh khayal rakh ki ek 6 saal ki bacchi yahaan baiti huyi hain

Mukti:tum dono bhi na...kahin pe bhi...

Manik: stop it yaar aisa kuch bhi nahi hain...

(We finished our dinner,humne saath mein games khele.wahi truth or dare walaa,then hum niche gaye patakee phode...we enjoyed each and evry moment, and now its time to depart...)

Cabir navya chutki: bye everyone...

Alya and druv:bye..aree mukti tu bhi aaja hum drop kar denge

Mukti: so bye guys...

Me and manik: byee...(we waved them)

Me: kitna acha din tha na aaj manik?

Manik: ya...so madam ab kya?

Me: matlab ab kya? Hum upar ghar vapas jayenge aur nahi tho kya?

Manik: ( he showed me the car keys) long drive pe chalee?

Me: (I was so excited) yes.😊..par one condition ...mein drive mein karoongi(I learnt driving ,manik ke vajah se)

Manik: ya ok...chalo

Me: (I took the car key)ok...so mission our favourite place❤️...

Edited by gaurimenon - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#57
awww...it was so cute...continue soon plz...!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#58
aww... did I tell you Nandini and Cabir together are loved by Pious and Me alike!!!
you didn't just gave me Nandini's relation with all but specifically a special bond between my favourite pairing!!!!

thanks so much for that :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59
beautiful...amazing ...fantastic...

cabir and nandu...conversation was outstanding...
and loved manan talks...

nannayittundu...orupdadu ishtapettu...!!!! oru part koodi undallo allae..???

pinnae exam easy ayirunno ????

take care
thanks a lot for pm...

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Posted: 10 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: aavani

beautiful...amazing ...fantastic...

cabir and nandu...conversation was outstanding...
and loved manan talks...

nannayittundu...orupdadu ishtapettu...!!!! oru part koodi undallo allae..???

pinnae exam easy ayirunno ????

take care
thanks a lot for pm...

i was waiting for ur feedback...😊😊
exam ellam ok ayirunu.orennam koodi und 4thnu athum koodi kazinjaa all done

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