Hope Wins-My Take---4 Shots ---Part 4 Updated

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Natashaaaaa

@Natashaaaaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#141

tu bas aishe hi. story update kiya kr
u r a gud writer

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Akshita

@Akshi0019

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Posted: 10 years ago

#142

Awsum dr... it was amazing... i wish same happen in show... i always loved ur prediction...
thanks for pm dr

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Nitz

@nits_viratholic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#143

Superb! well written 😃 👏

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kresham

@kresham

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Posted: 10 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: Queen_of_Shadow
Awesome ending kresh!! Thanks for updating!! Mujhe Lagta hai you should have given more punches to dhruv n pandit.. Beat them black n blue!! But awesome! Loved it!! Cannot wait to see this in the show!! Dhruv n pandit count down has already started!! But worried Agar ams Manik ko accept karega Ya nahi.. Loved chachi!!!

dhruv is friend so less but pandit ko toh aadha maardiya... aur zyada maarta manik toh jail jana padta...

glad that u liked it

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snehal.sharma

@snehal.sharma

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#145

Amazing chapter as usual

Beautifully written

U should write often

Thanks for the pm😊

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sosweetsumi

@sosweetsumi

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#146

sorry dont have any sympathy for dhruv

loved how now manan are together

cabie and other fab 3 members are great

please write more dear

wondeful wriitng

i hope they show something like that in the show

bye sumi

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Preeshaxo

@Preeshaxo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#147

The ending was perfect to a beautiful story!
Enjoyed this so much 👏
Confession was everything, hoping we get a real manan kiss too

Write again soon, miss your stories!!
🤗

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@One-Of-A-Kind

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#148

Wow wow wow wow... u just nailed it... i have no words to praise.. i wish this happens in the show too... i want to thank you alottty for sharing this wd us..😳

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mayaya.

@mayaya.

Inactive

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Posted: 10 years ago

#149

nice. i really liked this. that final reunion, I want to it happen like that in the show. it would be perfect.

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kresham

@kresham

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#150

Originally posted by: RomComFan
Loved the way you ended it...AMs, the police and especially the confrontation and confession was very well done. So glad he confessed with the fireflies and that she told him the truth... terrific job .
...plan on writing anymore?😉

Thanq somuch...
will surely write if something comes like this

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