Hope Wins-My Take---4 Shots ---Part 4 Updated

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This is based on the [Epi-181] n Precap where Manik said "Hope Mujhe bhi kuch miljaye Nandini ,tumhe dikhane keliye before this day ends n Taake main bhi tumhara first reaction dekh saku" n off course Dhruv's Dilemma ...So I ll continue from there, this can take one,two,three or four shots also so that's y I said My take n dint mention how many shots, so I ll write it later how many shots.

U guys can take as my prediction also...So without much ranting I ll start...Hope u guys like it

Hope Wins---My Take

Part 1

Manik was worried but was sure that there is something wrong about Pandit n he was correct abt it.

Nandini calls Manik to a room where she was waiting for him with a band on her eyes...Nandu asks Manik to see the pic in her cell n she wants to see his first reaction seeing the growth of their hope tree.Manik clicks a selfie while kissing her n Nandu feels the happiness of Manik through that only...Nandu leaves from there saying that only one day is left.As soon as Nandini left Manik says "Hope Mujhe bhi kuch miljaye Nandini ,tumhe dikhane keliye before this day ends ,Taake main bhi tumhara first reaction dekh saku" ...Manik decides to take help from Aliya or Mukti to talk to that girl.

On other side Nandini reaches music class where Dhruv was waiting for her...Nandu tries to talk to Dhruv but before that Pandit enters the room n asks them to play...Practice goes well...Pandit gives them break n tells them that they ll practice will b whole day today...Dhruv leaves from there as soon as Pandit leaves.Navya asks Nandini abt Dhruv's anger but she cudnt tell...

Manik reaches Fab3 n tells about Pandit to them, Mukti n Aliya gets shocked...n asks Manik that Y Nandini is taking all this.As Cabir understands because he knew everything Cabir says "That's not the matter now,Pehle hume sach ka pata lagana hai"

Mukti:Haa Manik bol kya karna hai...

Manik:K guys listen...one girl called me but she thought some girl wanted to talk to her but as soon as she heard my voice she hang up so I think if one of u can just try to convince her to come n meet us or she can tell anything abt Pandit then it ll b helpful to expose that Pandit infront of Nandini.

Aliya calls that girl n convinces her to come n meet her at SPACE...Manik feels happy that atleast now Nandini will believe him...Mukti,Cabir n Aliya also gets relieved seeing that girl agreed to come.

On otherside Dhruv's mind was messed up with the thoughts that Nandini was the reason to separate Manik n Him...n was thinking how to reveal it to Manik abt Nandini.Nandini calls out Dhruv's name n he comes out of his thoughts...

Nandini:Dhruv I m sorry whatever I said yesterday,I dint mean to hurt u...

Dhruv:Tum kya ho mujhe samaj aagaya Nandini...dont act smart...

Nandini n Navya were shocked to hear that...Before Nandini can say anything Pandit enters so Navya leaves from there...

Pandit :Chalo shuru karo...

Nandini was lost in Dhruv's words thinking that what she has done now why Dhruv said like that...n cudnt play well

Pandit:Ab kya hua Nandini...break se pehle accha play kar rahi thi...

Nandini:Sorry Panditji...

Pandit:Nandini tumhe pata hai na I want to display ur talent world wide so u have to work hard for that...aur tumhare liye ek surprise plan kiya hai maine kal Fusion concert me...n I m sure u ll like it...

Nandini rolls her eyes n simply smiles as she was annoyed with his rant...

Dhruv looks at Pandit n Nandini surprisingly ...

Pandit:Theek hai tum dono discuss karlo notes n practice I ll cum back in few mins...

Nandini gets a call from Manik to come to Audi urgently...as he is waiting to tell her something

Nandini along with Navya heads towards audi...

NavNi reaches Audi where Nandini was tied her band on her eyes...

Manik asks to open her eyes n he ll turn his back as a girl is waiting for her to tell something...

As soon as Nandini opens her eyes she spots Pandit standing at the other door of the Audi...n then she turns to that girl who was waiting...

Unknown girl:U r lucky to have Panditji as ur Guru...He is a great Musician

Fab3 along with Manik were shocked to hear what she just said

Mukti:R u crazy...tumne phone me kuch aur kaha tha

Manik gets furious but calms himself down n says :Listen tumhe darne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai,jo sach hai wahi bolo...

Navya was clueless n was wondering what was gng on

Nandini:Manik ye sab kya hai...

Manik:Nandini ,this girl told us that Pandit's real face is different n he is a complete creep

Unknown girl was tensed hearing that but was helpless...

Nandini shouts:Manik calm down...I told u many times that what u r thinking is not correct...abt Panditji

Manik gets furious listening to that

Nandini notices Pandit leaving with a smirk...

Pandit leaves from there thinking that Nandini is completely trusting him

As soon as Pandit leaves

Nandini:Manik I trust u completely bcz I know what Pandit is upto so mujhe kisi proof ki zaroorat nahi hai

Nandini turns towards that girl

Nandini:I know u r lying...n I can understand Y...So u can go for now, Thanq for coming...

Cabir:wait u cant leave like this ,Nandini kya bolrahi ho...abhi tumne kaha ki --------Cabir was confused too

Everyone gets shock seeing Nandini's changing reactions with in min...asusual Manik's anger was ruling bcz of which he cudnt understand...

Unknown girl was worrying thinking abt Pandit

Nandini ignores Cabir's question n talks to Unknown girl:Don't worry he is not watching u...he left as soon as u lied...

Everyone was confused along with Manik

Unknown girl:Thanq somuch for understanding...but plz be carefull

Nandini nods her head in Yes...

That unknown girl leaves from there...

FlashBack:

As soon as Pandit left the music class Leaving DhruNi to discuss notes n that unknown girl banged into Pandit while searching for Audi...That girl panics n Pandit recognizes her ...

Pandit warns her saying "Agar tumne apna muh khola toh tumhare liye accha nahi hoga,aur tumhe pata hai main kya karsakta hun"

Flashback finished...

Everyone looks at Nandini with questioning eyes...

Nandini understands:Guys she was afraid of Pandit as he was keeping an eye on her...I noticed him as soon as I opened my eyes...he was standing at the door at the other end of Audi...thats y that girl lied

Everyone was shocked listening to that...Cabir runs to that girl along with Mukti,Aliya thinking that they cant let her go like this...bcz they need her to expose Pandit...Navya runs behind them to know whats the actual matter

Everyone was searching for that girl who just left with a worry...

Cabir spots that girl with Pandit ...he goes near n overhears their convo as Pandit was threatening that girl again...Cabir comes back to girls with that news...n was thinking what to do...

Nandini blindfolds herself n turns towards Manik

Nandini:I m sorry Manik that I shouted at u

Manik holds Nandini : why don't u understand that I cant leave u alone with that jerk...

Nandini:Manik don't worry u r here only na...mujhe kuch nahi hoga n Navya is also with me...n Dhruv toh class me hi hai mere saath...so don't worry n trust me I ll take care of myself ...n if I sense anything wrong I ll call u... promise...

Manik:Nandini...i cant see that jerk around u

Nandini:I know Manik...but as of now u r imp for me n I cant lose u this time...thats y I told u everything as u said not to lie na n I m aware of Pandit from start but we cant expose him with small things na...u have seen how that girl was afraid...

Manik:Nandini...plz let me handle this

Nandini:Manik plz...kal tak sab theek hojayega n he ll b out of our lives

Manik:But we cant let him go like this ...Y don't u understand

Nandini:I know we cant but we cant even expose him...we r helpless... so plz for me control ur anger Manik

Manik was thinking how to expose him n Nandini was trying to calm him down

Nandini tries to divert the topic:So r u ready for performance...

Manik gives a stern smile as he was not sure abt performing with Nandini bcz Dhruv is not listening to him...

But Manik hugs Nandini to assure her n was thinking that atleast they dint had any MU bcz of that girl n Nandini understood him n his hope won when it came to Pandit's truth cmg out infront of Nandini...as now he has to expose him soon...

Part 2

Nandini cums to music room...

Pandit was happy as he saw how Nandini dint believe Manik n he was in dilemma that finally he is parting Manik n Nandini...

Pandit:So guys aajke liye itna hi baki hum final rehearsal kal performance se pehle karenge so be ready...

Nandini understood as why he is happy n leaving them so early...

Nandini gets a chance to talk to Dhruv that why he said like that...as soon as Pandit leaves

Navya cums inside...

Nandini:Dhruv tumne aise kyu bola...what do u mean to say that

Dhruv:Zyada bholi mat bano Nandini...tum kya ho aur kya kar rahi thi mujhe sab samaj aagaya...

Nandini was confused...But Navya questions him

Navya:Kya bol rahe ho Dhruv...ab tumhe Nandini se bhi problem hogayi

Dhruv:Navya tum beech me mat pado...Nandini ko samaj aagaya hoga ki uska asli chehra saamne agaya

Nandini:Kya bolrahe ho Dhruv...mujhe kuch samaj nahi aaraha

Dhruv:Kyu...tumhara plan , tumhe hi samaj nahi aaraha...Tum jaan bujkar mere aur Manik ke beech MU paida kar rahi ho na...

Nandini:What...but main aisa kyu karungi

Navya:Dhruv tum pagal hogaye ho...ye kya bolrahe ho aisa kya kiya Nandini ne...woh toh tum dono ki milane ki koshish kar rahi hai...

Dhruv :Nahi...Mere aur Manik ke beech ki differences Nandini ki wajah se aayi hai...kal mujhe sab samaj aagaya ke jabse tum hamari life me aayi ho tabse Manik keliye sirf tum important hogayi ho aur woh hamare taraf dhyaan hi nahi deraha

Nandini:Dhruv aisa kuch nahi hai...tum galat samaj rahe ho

Dhruv:Main galat samaj raha tha...aaj samaj aagaya ki tum ek taraf mujhse friendship kar rahi thi aur dusri taraf Manik ke saath...chi mujhe toh kehte hue bhi sharam aarahi hai...

Nandini was shock listening to all this...She was hurt n cudnt say anything

N Navya was going mad listening to all this...

Navya in anger:Nandini chalo yaha se...

Nandini:Nahi Navya bolne do ise...mujhe sunna hai...aaj mujhe Manik ka pain samaj aaraha hai

Dhruv: Wow tumhe aur pain...Mujhse pucho pain kya hota hai...Tumhari wajah se Manik aur Aliya ka bhi breakup hogaya...tab mujhe laga ki Aliya galat hai but aaj main kehta hun ki jo bhi hua woh sab tumhare wajah se hua...Tumhari wajah se maine pehli baar Manik ko punch kiya aur uspe shak kiya...tumari wajah se Fab5 me differences aayi...Tumhari wajah se Manik humse jhooth bolne laga,baatein chupane laga...aur main samaj hi nahi paya...Aur main usse lad pada...Ek taraf tumne mere saath friendship ki but jab tumhe laga Manik mujhse better hai toh tumne mujhe NO bola aur Manik ko accept kiya...tum hum dono ke feelings ke saath khelrahi thi...

Navya shouts :Chup karo Dhruv...tumhara dimaag toh theek hai na...Nandini kuch nahi bolrahi hai toh iska matlab ye nahi ki tum bakwaas karoge aur hum sunenge...

Nandini Humne kaha chalo yaha se...

Dhruv:Ye chup hai kyuki maine jo bhi kaha woh sach hai...Jabse Nandini humare life me aayi hai tabse problems shuru hui hai...

Nandini was hurt n tears started rolling down her eyes...

Navya:Tum bohat pachtaoge Dhruv...Tum sach me pagal hogaye ho

Dhruv smirks:Nahi ab main sab sahi soch raha hun...

Dhruv leaves from there leaving Nandini shattered...

Nandini breaks down n starts crying horribly ...Navya cudnt control Nandini ...after sometime Nandini gets Manik's call but she cudnt talk to him...So Navya picks the call and answers him...

Navya:Manik woh ...

Nandini gestures Navya not to tell anything to Manik...

Navya in anger :Nandini class me hai...jaise hi bahar aati hai hum use bata denge n cuts the call before Manik can respond...

Manik feels fishy that why Navya was shouting suddenly...but waits for some time for Nandu's call n leaves a msg...

Navya takes Nandini home n consoles her not to cry anymore bcz she has to perform tmrw n leaves...

Navya reaches home where she spots Mukti,Aliya n Cabir...

Navya's anger was noticed by Cabir...

Cabir:Kya hua...chehre pe 12 kyu baje hai...

Navya avoids his questions:Humari Amma kaha hai...aur tumlog yaha kya kar rahe ho...

Mukti n Aliya gets shocked listening that line...

Cabir: Tumhari amma meri Mom ke saath gayi hai... ye mera ghar hai...Aur tumhara dimaag toh theek hai , tum mere friends ke saath aise kaise baath kar sakti ho...

Navya:Kyu nahi karsakte ...tumlogo ko bhi toh pata hona chahiye na jab apne dosto ko koi kuch bole toh kaisa lagta hai...

Cabir:Ye sach me pagal hogayi hai...sarpar chot aayi hai kya...bakwass band karo aur point pe aao

Mukti:Guys calm down...Navya I know something is wrong...kya hua batao

Aliya:Haa Navya...what happened tell us what happened...

Navya:Ek toh woh Pandit aur uparse yeh Dhruv ...Nandini ko rulane me koi kasar nahi chodte...mann kar raha tha kheechke thappad lagau

Cabir:Pandit ne kuch kiya kya...ya fir Dhruv ne...

Navya:Pandit toh khush hoke chala gaya par maine Dhruv kaa aaj aisa roop dekha ...hume aisa lagaraha tha ki kya ye wahi Dhruv hai jo humesha shaant rehta tha...

Mukti:Hua kya

Cabir:Tumna paheliya bujhana band karo aur straight forward hua kya ye batao...

Navya calms down tells everything to them Dhruv's each n every word she shares with them...

All three of them were shocked...

Mukti:Dhruv sach me badal gaya...but woh aise kaise bolsakta hai...Nandini was his friend first

Cabir:Bolsakta hai,Jab woh hum sabko itna kuch bolsakta hai toh Nandini toh abhi friend bani hai uski

Aliya:Exactly ,He has lost completely...he can never come back,he is not aware how much pain he is giving to everyone...

Navya:Hume toh kuch samaj hi nahi aaraha...kal concert hai aur bohat mushkil se humne Nandini ko chup karaya hai...

Mukti:Guys hume Manik ko batana hoga...only he can handle her...

Navya:Nandini ne batane se mana kiya hai...

Cabir:Guys I think we shud wait till the concert is over n we have to deal with that Pandit also...Pata nahi Manik kaise perform karega Concert me...looking at Dhruv's behavior I don't think he ll allow Manik to sing with Nandini...

Aliya:Mujhe toh samaj nahi aaraha what is he upto...

Mukti :Haa yaar ek taraf he is hurting us n blamed Manik for everything n dusri taraf usne saara blame Nandini pe daal diya...

Navya:Matlab woh tumlogo se gussa nahi hai ab...sirf Nandini se gussa hai shayad

Cabir:I don't know I m blank ...dekhte hai kya karna hai...uss ladki ko bhi convince karna hai to expose Pandit...hope we can manage everything n Manik manages Dhruv for the performance...

All four of them were worried abt the present situation...

Manik was waiting for Nandini's call...at clg only

Nandini checks her cell after sometimes n replies Manik saying that "Sorry cudnt meet u after the class as I was tired so came home "

Manik reads it n gets worried that how come she dint meet him "Hope nothing went wrong"

As the day was ending Manik was getting restless n on other side Dhruv's words were haunting Nandini ,

For a sec Nandini started thinking that did she really gave wrong signals to Dhruv anytime that he said somany things to her...Nandini falls asleep thinking ab that

Manik lands up at Nandu's place thinking that she must b worried abt the performance...Manik calls her n thinks that she must b sleeping when she dint answer his call...

Nandini gets up with Phones ringtone...n cums to the window...Manik spots her before she can hide...

Nandini straightens herself n goes down to meet him with a fake smile...

Nandini avoids looking at Manik:Sorry Manik I cudnt meet u after the class as I was tired so main ghar aagayi woh Navya mere saath thi na...

Manik notices that she is not looking at him...Manik lifts her chin so that she can see into his eyes

Manik:So u were crying...wait ...Pandit ne kuch kaha,kuch kiya...tell me...

Nandini:No...he was happy may b he thought that girl lied n we cudnt get any proof against him...

Manik calms down:Toh fir kya hua...dont tell me u r worried for tmrws performance...

Nandini looks at him n remembers what Dhruv said...

Suddenly Nandini moves back n says:I think u were right Manik...i shud not worry abt the performance n now u shud go...

Manik feels weird when Nandu moved back from his grip...then he pulls her closer n puts his both the hands around her so that even air cant pass between them...

Nandini tries to get out of the grip...but fails...

Manik sees her struggle n pulls her closer n tightens the grip so that she looks at him

Manik:Kya hua

Nandini:Kuch Nahi...

Manik:Don't worry ...i ll req Dhruv to step back from concert for us...n I m sure he l do that...

Nandini:Manik its k... we ll do this challenge someother time...as of now let Dhruv do what he wants...waise bhi mere wajah se tum dono ke beech aur differences aagaye hai...i don't want anymore ...

Manik:Nandini u don't worry abt that...woh mera buddy hai toh he ll understand me...

Nandini was silent n cudnt tell anything as many things were gng in her mind...

Nandini simply nods her head n gives a stern smile...

Manik feels relieved as she smiled n leaves her...

Manik:Sooo...main jau

Nandini:Hmm...

Manik:Be ready for tmrw...

Nandini nods n smiles...

Manik leaves from there...

Nandini thinks:Sorry Manik I cudnt tell u n I think we shud stay away from eachother ,May be Dhruv is right I m the one who creates troubles in ur life...

Nandini cudnt decide what to do...n falls asleep...


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Part 3

As I m using the Precap scene which was shown in todays episode[182] where Manik convinces Nyonika ..Bcz Some myt b knowing that I also said in my predictions that Manik is gonna use reverse Psychology for Nyonika ,the day when Nyonika spotted Nandini at Malhotra Mansion after that campaign...where he said to Nyonika"Who said I have forgiven Nandini"...n then he said "I cant expose Nandini to Nyonika one more time"...those who r regular on my posts they know what I predicted...

Most awaiting day has come finally...

Many of them were in their own thought process...

Manik:Today I have to convince Dhruv for stepping back from concert...n handle Nyonika

Nandini:Shall I go for the concert or not...

Cabir:Uss ladki ko kisi bhi tarah concert me laana hoga

Aliya:I have to stop Dhruv before he mess up everything

Navya:Hume aaj Nandini ke saath saaye ki tarah rehna hoga...Iss Pandit aur Dhruv dono ka kuch bharosa nahi...

Mukti holds the joker doll:Abhi hope I manage to bring smile on everyones faces like u did...

Dhruv:I have to tell Manik that Nandini is the reason for our fight n she was n is playing around his feelings.

Nandini comes down...n gets surprised seeing Ams with Panditji downstairs...in the hallway

Nandini feels happy to see Ams n runs to her...n hugs her...

Pandit:So I hope ab tumhe gaane me koi problem nahi hogi aur tumhara dhyaan sirf music me hoga...na ki kisi aur cheez me

Nandini breaks the hug n looks at Pandit...she understands what he was trying to say...

Nandini:Ji Panditji...

Pandit:Ab chale college keliye late horaha hai

Nandini gets shocked seeing his orders that too infront of Ams...

Ams also agrees:Haa Nandu...tumko jana chahiye ,u must b getting late...

Nandini:No Ams...i have some work on the way so I ll go later

Pandit :Come I ll drop u there

Chachi understands:Nahi Panditji...main jaarahi hun Nandu ke saath toh plz aap chale jayiye waise bhi concert toh sham ko hai...toh Nandu thodi der Amma ke saath rehlegi...

Pandit gets annoyed:Ji theek hai...N leaves from thr...

Ams:Nandu kya hua ...Pandit was trying to tell something that u have changed after coming to Mumbai...

Nandini understands that somewhere Pandit has bitched about her being with Manik...to Ams

Before Nandu could say anything Chachi replies:Amma aap bhi kiske baton me aagayi...ye bacche hai aur woh teacher...teachers ko toh har bacche me problem nazar aati hai...

Nandu smiles at Chachi for being with her...

Nandini spends time with Ams...till afternoon

In College Manik goes to Nyonika with a plan...so that this time she cant use Nandini for her dirty plans

Manik:Nyonika...I want to perform in FC

Nyonika:What ...u know I cant

Manik:Don't act as if u don't know anything...i need to b thr in concert so that I can spoil it...n Teach Nandini a lesson...So u ll have to handle that Pandit in case he creates any problem rest of the things I ll manage...

Nyonika:But I don't want that FC to be spoiled...

Manik:Ohh Come one u know how to handle the press...so decide urself that what u want in return if at all I m successful in spoiling the FC...Manik leaves from there

Nyonika smiles n thinks"Mujhe kuch nahi karna padega Manik...bcz u do what u want I ll just watch n enjoy...

Manik then goes to Fab3...

Manik:Guys we cant expose Pandit infront of media...these media ppl can irritate that girl n Nandini to with their weird questions...

Cabir:I secont that

Aliya:But how will we expose him then...

Mukti:How abt complaining a file...n asking those girls to come n give their statement against Pandit n bcz we have done the campaign thing...girls will help us in this...

Manik:That's great a idea...

Cabir:woh sab toh theek hai par ab Dhruv ka kya...

Manik:I ll ask him n request him to step back ,I m sure he ll not say NO to my req...

Manik runs to Dhruv...

Cabir:I hope Manik don't get disappointed with Dhruv's NO...

Pandit asks to practice

Dhruv:Panditji akele kaise practice karu...

Pandit:Kyu kya problem hai...waise Nandini ko aane me der hojayegi...toh tum practice karo...

Pandit leaves from there

Dhruv was thinking "Why Pandit is somuch into Nandini now a days?"

Dhruv was then thinking "I have to tell to Manik abt Nandini that how she became a problem in our lives"

Manik comes to Dhruv...He comes out of his thoughts

Dhruv:Nandini yaha nahi hai Manik...

Manik:Main apne buddy se milne aaya hun...

Dhruv:Mujhe bhi tujhe kuch bolna hai...

Manik feels so happy to hear that:Really...(Manik hugs him ) I knew kit u mujhse zyada der gussa nahi reh sakta bolna kya kehna hai...

Dhruv:Pehle tu bata aaj Nandini ke bajai meri yaad kaise aagayi...

Manik:Dhruv...i need a favor from u

Dhruv:Kya...

Manik:I need to sing with Nandini in this concert so plz can u...

Dhruv:K...I ll step back...only for u ...

Manik gets surprised :Mujhe pata tha kit u mujhe na nahi bolsakta

Dhruv:Hum bachpan ke friends hai toh koi hume itni aasani se alag nahi karsakta Manik

Manik:Thanks Buddy...thanq somuch...

Manik was abt to leave but turns back to ask abt Nandu

Manik:Waise Nandini kaha hai...

Dhruv:I wonder tujhe kaise nahi pata...bcz Pandit knows everything abt Nandini now a days...

Manik gets confused why Dhruv said like that...

Manik:No problem ...its just that I want to tell her abt the performance

Manik leaves from there

Dhruv thinks:Manik I want to take out that blind trust of urs on Nandini aur dikhana chahta hunk i how she is playing with ur feelings.

Nandini comes to college n Fab3 along with Navya meets her...

Cabir:Nandini kal job hi Dhruv ne kaha uspe dhyaan mat do...u just concentrate on the performance

Nandini smiles...:Its k Cabir...i m fine...aur aaj mujhe apne Ams keliye gana hoga...

Mukti:Ams...who...

Nandini:Meri Grand mother...Panditji invited her n I guess he said something abt me n Manik aslo to her...

Aliya:What ...he is so cheap ...how can he stoop somuch...

Nandini:Plz it's a request don't tell anything to Manik...even abt Dhruv...

Manik spots Nandini standing with Fab3 n Navya n runs towards her...her back was towards him...

Manik:Guys there is a news for u all...

Nandini turns towards Manik but he turns back so that Navya's promise cant b broken...

But Nandini makes him turn towards her :Manik its k...i can understand ...I dont want to b trouble in ur life anymore...so for now let it be...Let Dhruv sing in the concert...

Nandini leaves from there n Manik was shocked n confused...

Manik was confused:Navya kya hua...Tum uske saath thi na har waqt...

Navya:Humse kya puchrahe ho ,apne friends se pucho...

Navya also leaves from there...

Manik looks at Fab3...But Cabir diverts the topic

Cabir:Tu bata tere paas kya news hai

Manik:Arre wahi toh main batane aaya tha ki Dhruv stepped back from concert so that I can sing...i told u guys he ll come around...So let me go n get ready...Ab I ll give surprise to Nandini on stage itself... ...n u guys keep an eye on Pandit

Manik leaves from there...

Cabir:Ab ye Dhruv kya soch raha hai...

Mukti:Shayad Navya theek bolrahi thi...now he is not angry on us n will blame Nandini...

Aliya:Dhruv will lose most important thing in life that is Manik...if at all he is going to say the samething to Manik abt Nandini...

All were worried...Nandini got ready n her entry was first n later it was Dhruv's entry...as it was a surprise so all were thinking it ll b Dhruv except Fab5

Everyone took there seats...everything was ready guests also have taken their seats...

Nandini was worried n a bit upset bcz of Dhruv's words

Navya consoles her n says all the best...Pandit comes there n wishes her...n goes to search Dhruv...as Dhruv went n took place in audience already...


As always Nyonika hosted the the event...

Nandini came on stage n took place near the Veena holding it...She started her song thinking of Manik n time spent with him

Moh moh..Moh moh ke dhaage
hmmm...
Yeh moh moh ke dhaage ...Teri ungliyon se ja uljhe

Yeh moh moh ke dhaage Teri ungliyon se ja uljhe
Koi toh toh na laage...Kis tarah girah ye suljhe
Hai rom rom iktaara...

Hai rom rom iktaara...Jo baadalon mein se guzre

Nandini's tears roll down n she fumbles...

Yeh moh moh ke dhaage...Teri ungliyon se ja uljhe
Koi toh toh na laage...Kis tarah girah ye suljhe


Manik steps onto the stage...seeing Nandini's tears...

Tu hoga zara paagal, tune mujhko hai chuna
Tu hoga zara paagal, tune mujhko hai chuna
Kaise tune ankahaa, tune ankahaa sab sunaa
Tu hoga zara paagal, tune mujhko hai chuna

Tu din sa hai, main raat
Aa na dono mill jaayein shaamon ki tarah


Nandini feels very happy seeing Manik along with her...

Pandit hears the male version n runs to check who is on stage...

Fab3 along with Navya n Nandu's family was very happy,As Chachi was more than happy but some were confused the ppl who were expecting Dhruv

Manik gestures her to sing further...

Nandini starts another song in happiness...sharing her feelings

Hawa ke jhonke aaj mausamon se rooth gaye
Gulon ki shokhiyaan jo bhanwre aake loot gaye
Badal rahi hai aaj zindagi ki chaal zara
Issi bahaane kyun naa main bhi dil ka haal zara
Sanwaar loon haaye sawaar loon
Sawaar loon haaye sawaar loon


Manik continues with other song...with his feelings

Hmm.. hmm...

Dehleez pe mere dil ki Jo rakhe hain tune kadam
Tere naam pe meri zindagi Likh di mere humdum

Haan seekha maine jeena jeena kaise jeena
Haan seekha maine jeena mere humdum
Na seekha kabhi jeena jeena kaise jeena
Na seekha jeena tere bina humdum


Nandini suddenly remembers Dhruv's words n gets upset n sings...

Yaara...
Manzilein ruswa hain...Khoya hai raasta
Aaye le jaaye...Itni si ilteja
Ye meri zamaanat hai...Tu meri amaanat hai aa...

Mujhko iraade de...Kasamein de, waade de
Meri duaaon ke ishaaron ko sahaare de
Dil ko thikaane de naye bahaane de
Khabon ki barishon ko mausam ke paimane de
Apne karam ki kar adaayein
Kar de idhar bhi tu nigaahein

Sun raha hai naa tu...Ro rahi hun main
Sun raha hai naa tu...Kyun ro raha hun main (x2)

Manik understands that what Nandini is going through ...but he was unknown abt Dhruv thing...he starts his song to cheer up Nandini n finishes the concert as he cant see Nandini in pain anymore...n take her away from everyone

Dil hote jo mere seene mein do
Doosra dil bhi main tumhe deta todne ko


Hosanna..Hosanna..Hosanna...Ho..Sannna...Hosanna..Ho...

Dilkash thi woh shaam pehle pehal...Jab ke tumse mili thi nazar
Aisa chakraya ki ab ye na jaanu...Ke jaaun tto jaaun kidhar
Hosanna tum samne thi pal...Hosanna Agle hi pal thi ojhal
Ab kya bataaun main...Kis haal mein hu main
Yahaan-wahaan bas apna dil aur hosh dhoodta hu main

Hosanna.. (Madhoshi deewanagi)...Hosanna.. (main aur teri bandagi)...Hosanna.. (ab hai yehi zindagi)...Hosanna..

Everybody wanna know be like be like
I really wanna be here with you
Is that enough to say that
We are made for each other is all that is Hosanna true

Hosanna... be there when you are calling i will be there
Hosanna... feeling like my life's changed
I never wanna be the same..
Its time we re-arrange i take a step
you take a step and me calling out to you

Hellooo... Hellooo... Hellooo ooo
Yooo Hosanna

Ho..sanna...ooo...

Udti hui titli ki rangeen parchhaai reh jaati hai phoolon mein
Waise hi tum ek tasveer ke jaise chhaye ho inn aankhon mein
Hosanna, Tum jo mera khwaab ho
Hosanna, Dil kyon na betaab ho
Kahoon to kya kahoon
Main kyun deewana hoon
Tumhare baare mein hi har ghadi main sochta hoon kyun.

Hello.. Hello.. Hello...
Hosanna... (ab din ho ya raat ho)
Hosanna... (dil chahe tum saath ho)
Hosanna... (bas haathon mein haath ho)
Hosanna...

Dil hote jo, mere seene mein do...Doosra dil bhi main, tumhe deta todne ko


Finally there was a huge round of applause from the audience...

Manik offers his hand to Nandini to stand up...as Nandini was giving a fake smile n got up...and thanked the audience...

Finally the concert was grand success...

All were happy except three People Pandit,Nyonika n Dhruv...for obvious reasons...


So the next update (final show down)will b the last one hopefully...enjoy reading...i m a bit bad at selecting songs so sorry for that...havent cross checked so sorry for spelling mistakes if any...hope u liked it...drop ur views

Edited by kresham - 10 years ago
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This is a very huge update...as it covered two showdowns...so spare me...if u wish read it or just ignore it...
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Part 4

Nandini goes to Murthy's n Manik was stopped by Nyonika...

Nyonika:What the hell was that Manik...Tumne kaha tha...before she can complete he interrupts...

Manik:Toh tumhe kya laga...sirf tum games khel sakti ho...see ,this win u owe to me...last time it was me who made u win n this u made me win...

Manik smirks n Nyonika leaves in anger...

Nandini was a bit upset but was having a fake smile for her family...who were congratulating her...Nandu took blessings from Ams...Navya cums there n hugs her n takes her away excusing themselves from there...

Nandini informs chachi to wait for her for few mins then they ll head towards home...

NavNi comes to a Jam Room where Fab3 were waiting to congratulate both Manik n Nandini...But Nandini was so upset that she was unable to enjoy the success of the performance also...

Cabir:Nandini ab kya hua...ab toh tum dono ne saath me perform bhi kiya...

Mukti:Haa Nandini...aur tumhe pata hai Manik ke req karne par hi Dhruv concert se piche hatgaya

Navya:Par kyu...aur aise kaise maan gaya...kal toh woh

Nandini looks at Aliya who was silent n Somewhere Nandini had that fear that Dhruv is gng to say something to Manik which will not be good ...n can increase the conflict

Manik was searching for Nandini n comes to Chachi...

Chachi introduces Ams to Manik...

Manik:Chachi woh Nandini...

Chachi:Haa woh Manik pehle Amma se milo...Nandu ki grand mother

Manik:Ohh Hi...n puts his hand forward for handshake

Chachi:Amma ye Manik hai...Nandu ka dosth...jo abhi stage pe Nandu ke saath garaha tha...

Ams dint had any good impression on Manik as Pandit has already bitched abt Manik...

Ams:But Trilok ne kaha tha ki koi Dhruv gane wala hai hamre Nandu ke saath

Chachi gestures Manik to touch the feet n take blessings...

Manik touches her feet but Ams just do a formality ...

Chachi:Haa woh Manik hi gaane wala tha par achanak Dhruv ko lena pada par kehte hai na jiski jagah hoti hai woh usiko milti hai

Manik feels awkward:Chachi main chalta hun...

Chachi:Manik woh Nandini ko Navya legayi hai...agar Nandini mile toh bolna hum yaha wait kar rahe hai ...aur koi jaldi nahi...

Chachi smiles at Manik n he understands Chachi that she was giving him permission to spend time with Nandu

Manik reaches Jam room n senses the seriousness ...n spots Nandini

Manik:So u won haa...

Nandini doesn't respond to him

Manik:Ab kya hua ...ab toh wahi hua na jo tum chahti thi...ur hope has won n u r not happy...
Cabir:Manik woh hume kuch batana tha tujhe...Woh Dhruv...

Manik:Cabir ek min...Nandini what happened

Nandini was silent

Meanwhile Dhruv comes in says...

Dhruv:Buddy main batata hun ki woh khush kyu nahi hai...

Manik:Buddy...kya hua...

Dhruv:Tujhe pata hai ye khush kyun nahi...bcz iska plan jo fail hogaya

Nandini looks at him shockingly...

Manik smiles :What plan...

Cabir:Dhruv chup karega...

Aliya:Dhruv I m telling u just cut it here itself orelse u ll lose everything

Dhruv:I can understand ur pain Aliya...so let me talk...now I understood that what u must have gone through when Manik broke up with u

Manik was confused...:Buddy what r u saying...

Dhruv:Manik she is playing with ur feelings

Manik:Buddy tu galat samaj raha hai aisa kuch nahi hai

Nandini:Dhruv u know what ...I thought u were the most sensible guy but I was wrong...

Dhruv:Accha ...ab tum kahogi ki u r not playing with Manik's emotions also...

Nandini:Dhruv plz...if u think that I m the reason for the differences between u n Manik...then I can happily go away from here...bcz the first thing I liked abt u both was ur friendship n I ll never come in between that...

Nandini tries to leave from there...Manik holds her hand but she don't listen to him n leaves from there

Manik was clueless abt what happened

Manik:Guys whats going on koi mujhe batayega...

Navya who cudnt take the tamasha shouts at them...:Hum sabse kya puchrahe ho...jisne ye sab kiya... pucho apne dosth Dhruv se kitne saari baatein boli usne Nandu ko...Galtiya tumlog karo aur dosh dusron ko do...Agar main Nandini ke jagah hoti to hiss Dhruv ko toh main...

Navya leaves behind Nandini in anger...

On otherside Pandit reaches at Murthy's n asks for Nandini...

Pandit:GuruMaa Nandini kaha hai...

Ams:Haa woh apne friends ke paas gayi

Pandit:Kahi woh Manik ke paas toh nahi gayi

Chachi was fuming like anything as she was feeling fishy

Chachi:Nahi woh Navya ke saath gayi hai

Pandit:Iska matlab Manik ke saath hi hogi...GuruMa yeh wahi ladka hai jo Nandini ko pareshaan karta tha aur use music par concentrate karne nahi deta tha

Ams:But Trilok...main use mili abhi n I dint felt anything like that...n tumne dekha na Nandu ne kitna accha perform kiya...n that boy also was good...

Pandit:Nahi Guruma aap samaj nahi rahi hai...n bitches more about Manik

Onotherside ...Dhruv was spitting his anger

Dhruv:Buddy tu jaanta nahi Nandini kaisi hai...woh pehle mere feelings ke saath khel rahi thi aur ab tere feelings ke saath khel rahi hai...aur hamari fight ki wajah bhi woh hi hai...

Tujhe yaad hai na maine tujhe punch bhi uski wajah se hi kiya tha...jabse woh hamari life me aayi hai tabse problems shuru hui hai

Manik was controlling his anger ...

Aliya:Then what were u doing Dhruv...ek taraf tum Nandini ko like kar rahe the n then u were with me also...was that correct...I think its high time I have to accept that...tumhe Nandini pasand zaroor thi but I forced u towards Nandini to get back Manik...i was forcing u to express ur feelings so that Manik can distance from Nandini n comeback to me

Manik was now shocked n was getting more angry...

Cabir n Mukti were also shocked...

Cabir:Aliya ye sab kya hai...

Aliya:Haa Cabir I accept it ...I was insecure n when I saw Manik n Dhruv were attracted towards Nandini I thought to get back Manik n for that I used Dhruv ...

Dhruv dint understand Aliya in his madness:Aliya plz tum kyu Nandini ko support kar rahi ho...jabki tumhe bhi pata hai woh kaisi hai uski wajah se tumhara Manik ke saath breakup hua...

Manik finally shouted at Dhruv:Shuuuttt Up...

Tu kya bolraha hai buddy...mujhe laga tujhe mujhse problem hai...tu Nandini ko kyu beechme laaraha hai...

Dhruv was abt to say something but Manik stopped

Manik:Let me clear one thing...Mere aur Aliya ke breakup ki wajah Nandini nahi hai...We broke up bcz we were just dragging along that's it...i wasn't there in that relationship...N Nandini was ur friend first...usne toh mujhse friendship bhi nahi ki thi...but I was attracted to her infact I was obsessed with her...that's y I used to trouble her n made her a spot so that she stays around me...Usne mujhse partnership ki kyunki her brother has same problem which u have...jaise main tere attacks ko leke helpless tha waise she was also helpless abt her brother n we both were working on that...n I was falling for her...infact I dint like her friendship with u...

My feelings were increasing for her...she gave me a moral support whenever I was at breakdown point bcz of u guys...When I came to know abt Cabir's secret I was shocked n I cudnt share it with u guys but unknowingly I landed at her place...

Dhruv remember's last nyt incident where he landed at Aliya's place...when he came to know abt Manik's sacrifice

Manik continues...Infact when I was moving close to her she felt I m cheating her n Aliya both...

But she took time to accept my feelings even after I told her that I have broken up with Aliya...

She never had problem with our friendship guys...she respects our friendship...she never had any problem with u guys also,I got used to her bcz she has to solve my problems infact bcz of her Fab5 tootne se bacha hai kayi baar...not only me but she understands all of u guys n what we r going through in our lifes...she used to make me understand n then I used to solve ur problems

Cabir smiles n interrupts:Haa guys...infact mere secret ke bare me tumlogo se pehle Nandini ko pata chalgaya tha infact R ke bare me bhi ,she heard my convo with R...n I told her to use it as Musicana was ahead n agar woh chahti toh Harshad ko batadeti or Fab5 ko break karne keliye kuch bhi karti but she dint...Infact Uske wajah se Manik ne apna gussa control kiya warna ye toh R ko kabka...

Manik:Yes she controlled my anger...pata nahi kaise she was understanding me,the real me...she found the actual Manik in me...jo shayad tumlogo ko bhi pata nahi hai...Even after behaving like a monster she never had complain abt me or u guys...bcz she understood us...long back

Infact she had only one problem with me that I walked away from her for u Dhruv...when I came to know that u love her I sacrificed her...she was angry on me not bcz of u or our friendship but she was angry bcz I ditched her ...i walked away from her saying that I was taking revenge for that punch that too the very next day I expressed her my feelings n I dint even gave chance to her to express her feelings...U saved my life buddy toh main kaise tera pehla pyaar fail hote dekhsakta tha...agar who aise hoti jaise tu bolraha hai toh woh tera proposal reject nahi karti...infact I was forcing her to accept u...bcz u r better than me

Aliya speaks up:Manik he never loved her it was just an attraction...i was the one who pushed him towards Nandini...no need to explain anything to him ...Dhruv tumhe jo kehna hai mujhe kaho...No need to blame Manik or Nandini

On other side Nandini reached to her family...before her family speaks Pandit started yelling at her

Pandit:Kaha thi tum...tumne hi Manik ko perform karne keliye bola hoga hai na...

Pandit grabbed Nandini's arms :Maine tumse kaha tha Manik se dur raho

Nandini was annoyed :Sir chodiye mujhe...

n Navya was feeling fishy...

Ams tries to control his anger but even she was shocked seeing his madness

Pandit:GuruMa aap nahi jaanti ye kya kar rahi hai yaha college me

Nandini:Main apni life me kya karti hun I think u shudnt bother

Chacha n Chachi were helpless...Chachi was trying to call Manik but he was not picking the call

Rishab was trying to help her sis but he failed...

Pandit:GuruMa aap mujhpe bharosa karti hai...

Ams:Haa Trilok but I ll make her understand...

Pandit:bas mujhe kuch der keliye Nandini se baat karna hai ,main sab samjha dunga ise...ki kaun iske liye sahi hai

Navya feels fishy n runs from there...towards Manik

Pandit grabs Nandini from der n Nandini was struggling to get out of his grip...

Chacha,Chachi n Rishab were helpless as Ams has given him permission

Here Dhruv was not ready to understand anything

Dhruv:Tumlog sab pagal hogaye ho...tumlogo ko samaj nahi aaraha Nandini kya khel rahi hai...jabse woh aayi hai tabse problems shuru hui hai FAB5 ke beech...

Mukti:Accha Dhruv toh ye bata usne meri help kyu kii...tab toh tujhe hamare saath hona chahiye tha na...bcz u r part of Fab5...tu aaya tha par hamare saath kyu nahi tha

Dhruv:Woh sab mujhe kuch nahi pata...She is not correct for Manik...n she is a double standard girl

Manik gets furious n grabs his collar...but some How Cabir manages to control him

But Dhruv continues...

Dhruv:Tujhe pata hai aaj woh khush kyun nahi thi...kyunki woh tujhse bore hogayi hai...pehle mujhse friendship ki then tu better laga toh tere paas aagayi but ab Pandit interested hai usme toh shayad...

Before Dhruv can complete his sentence Manik loses his control n punches him hard...He hits him hard...

This time even Cabir was not stopping him bcz he knew How Nandini was n what Pandit was doing...

As soon as Manik stops after few punches Dhruv says...

Dhruv:Dekha Manik aaj uske wajah se tune mujhpe haath uthaya...maine use kal yahi kaha ki woh asli wajah hamare fight ki..

Manik shouts in anger:Shut uppp...Nandini ke bare me agar kuch bhi bola toh main bhuljaunga ki ones u saved my life

Manik leaves his collar n says...:If u saved my life then She taught me how to live my life... she is my soul...till now I owed my life to u Dhruv but aaj mujhe lag raha hai ki maine use tereliye sacrifice karke kitni badi galti ki...bcz when u never understood me then how u ll understand Nandini...She always protected me like I protect u guys...jabse woh meri life me aayi hai...she never allowed me to do mistakes n whatever the situation is she protected me even if she is angry on me she never gave up n stopped me from taking wrong steps...How can u think of her like that...

Manik leaves from there n calls Nandini but she was not taking the call...but then finds Chachi's missed calls...Manik dials her num worriedly

Cabir's anger speaks now..:Tujhe pata bhi hai tu kya bolraha tha...woh pandit ek creep hai...yaha hum sab Nandini ko bachane me lage hai aur tu apni bakwaas leke baithgaya...

Police inspector Comes in along with that witness girls...3 girls have come to teach Pandit a lesson

PI:Complain tumlogo ne likhwayi thi...

Mukti:Yes sir...

Meanwhile Navya comes running...

Cabir:Kya hua...tum aise bhaag kyu rahi ho tum toh Nandini ke saath thi na

Navya: Manik kaha hai...Woh Pandit Nandini ke saath zabardasti kar raha hai...

Dhruv was confused seeing all this...

Manik reaches to Murthy's

Chachi:Manik woh Nandini...

Manik:Kya hua Nandini ko

Chachi:Woh Pandit use zabardasti saath legaya...

Manik:What...Chachi woh Pandit accha insaan nahi hai...woh ladkiyo ke saath...but he cudnt complete his line

Ams was shocked hearing that...

Manik:Kis taraf gaye hai...

Chachi shows him the direction where they went it was upstairs...which was terrace as concert held in top floors Audi...

Manik runs towards terrace n Navya n rest of them comes to Murthy's...

Murthy's were shocked to see Police inspector along with them

Navya:Chachi Nandini kaha hai...

Chachi tells everything abt Pandit...

That witness girls:Woh Pandit accha insaan nahi hai...bholi bhali ladkiye ke saath zabardasti karta hai,agar koi na mane toh blackmail karta hai

Ams was in total shock that she allowed him to take Nandini with him...

Cabir:Kis taraf gaye hai...

Chachi:upar ki taraf...Manik bhi gaya hai

Cabir:Ohh God...hume Manik ko rokna hoga...Inspector chaliye...

On otherside Nandini was running...from Pandit...n Pandit locked the terrace door...n was heading towards her...

Pandit:Main tumhe kitne dino se samjhane ki koshish kar raha tha par tum samaj hi nahi rahi thi ki Manik tumhare liye theek nahi hai...

Nandini:Panditji main aapki student hun...aap aisa kaise karsakte hai

Pandit:Tumne hi toh kaha tha ki main zyada old nahi toh ab kya problem hai...aur tumne mujhe pehchana bhi nahi

Nandini grabs a rod from there n hits him hard...:Main jaanti hun tum kaise insaan ho toh mujhe kamzor mat samajna

Pandit:Don't u remember I used to come to learn music at ur place n u were my friend in childhood aur tum mujhe hi bhulgayi

Nandini was confused:No I don't remember n stay away from me...

Pandit loses his control n grabs her...Nandini somehow manages to come out of his grip n runs towards the door but in fear she cudnt open it...

Pandit smirks n heads towards her...

Nandini was horrified now n holds that rod tight so that she can attack him n stands beside the door

Meanwhile Manik reaches n finds the door is closed he finally breaks it n sees Horrified Nandini who was standing like a statue now out of helplessness...

Manik looks at Pandit n loses his control n starts hitting him...Pandit also hits Manik but Manik manages himself n keeps on hitting him till he was bleeding...

Meanwhile Cabir with Inspector n all others reaches there...

Girls tries to bring out Nandini from shock but she was looking at Manik hitting Pandit n was not even blinking her eyes...

Navya was shouting :Nandini kuch bolo...

All were trying to bring out her from the shock but she was standing still holding that rod...

On otherside Manik was not listening to Cabir or Inspector ...Manik's anger was on peek...

All were shocked seeing Manik's anger...even Dhruv was speechless...seeing both Nandini n Manik...

Cabir:Manik chod use woh marjayega...

Manik was holding Pandit's neck n Pandit was half dead till then...:No Cabir ,I ll kill him...how dare he touch Nandini...

Manik almost killed Pandit...Seeing that Nandini drops the rod from her hand...

Hearing that sound Manik leaves Pandit's neck as soon as he looks at Nandini...n she nods her head in NO...

Police Inspector arrests Pandit n asks Manik n others to come and give their statement at PS...

Ams stops Pandit n slaps him:I m ashamed to have a student like u...

Police Inspector takes Pandit n those girls along with him...

As soon as Inspector leaves Ams thanks Manik n others n they take Nandini n goes from there...

Nandini dint even looked back for ones...

Fab5 n Navya were left there on terrace...

Manik understands that why Nandini dint even looked at him before leaving n was guilty bcz he thought he can't kill anyone for Nandini n distanced from her...

Manik:I lost her...she knew ki what I can do in my anger n I was abt to do that only today...I can kill anyone for her...

Cabir:Manik go n stop her ...agar aaj woh chaligayi toh shayad...ab toh tu bhi manta hai na ki u love her somuch that u can kill anyone for her in anger...jiske wajah tu uspe gussa tha...

Manik:Nahi Cabir...ab woh nahi aayegi...aaj jo maine kiya uske wajah se aur Fab5 ko tootne se bachane keliye she ll not come back...

Navya:Hume pata hai woh tumse pyar karti hai Manik...toh woh aise nahi jaasakti...roklo use

Aliya:She will come back Manik...bcz u dint kill anyone right...she stopped u from dng that mistake...

Mukti:Haa Manik jaa rokle use...

Manik:Yes I cant let her go...i have to stop her...she has to stay back

Manik was about to leave

Dhruv finally understands his mistake n says sorry to Manik...

Manik in anger:Today I got her back in my life bcz of that concert Dhruv but Agar aaj woh meri life se teri wajah se chali gayi Dhruv then I ll never forgive u n it's a promise...

Manik runs towards Nandini...n reaches near the gate where Murthy's were hiring taxi...

Fab4 n Navya also reaches there...

Manik:Chachi woh...police station jana hai toh Nandini ko main baadme chod du

Chachi looks at Ams...n both of them gives permission by nodding their head in YES...

Nandini was silent n was not looking at Manik...as Dhruv was also there

Murthy's leave from there n Cabir says :Hum Police station jaarahe hai tu baadme aaja...

Manik nods in yes...

Dhruv was guilty n left from there...

Manik takes Nandini at same place where first he expressed his feelings n fireflies were glowing on musicana opening night.

Manik holds her hands:Nandini look at me...

Nandini:Manik...I think we don't have anything to talk let me go

Manik was holding her hand as if he leaves her then she ll run away from him anytime...

Manik lifts her chin so that she can look into his eyes:Nandini u think I ll leave u

Nandini:Manik I don't want to trouble u any more...Jabse main tumhari life me aayi hun u r facing problems...n I don't want that...

Manik knew Y she was saying that:Really...aur tumhe lagta hai I ll believe in this crap

Nandini:If we r together then many ppl will have problem like Nyonika ma'am n now Dhruv thinks...

Before she can complete Manik interrupts

Manik:I LOVE YOU...

Nandini was stunned...

Manik:Kya hua...i said I LOVE YOU...kuch galat bola maine...

Nandini:But Manik...

Manik interrupts:No if's or buts...agar maine aise hi tumhe jane diya toh tum agle 10 saal tak nahi bologi what u feel for me...

Nandini's tears roll down :Manik listen to me...

Manik grabs her near with both the hands :Yes I want to listen a YES from you bcz you know I never take a NO from anyone specially from you...so don't waste time bcz if u r planning to say NO then mujhe aur bhi tareeke aate hai YES bulwane ke

Nandini's tears were not stopping...but it was happiness this time...

Manik now becomes angry as Nandini was not uttering a word n was crying nonstop...

Manik grabs her more closer:I said I LOVE YOU...now don't test my...

Before Manik completes his line...Nandini nods her Head in YES...

Manik:What...

Nandini:I LOVE U too...

Manik looks at her amazingly as those words were like he is waiting from years to listen from her ...

Manik kisses her tears which were rolling down form both the eyes...n finally seals their LOVE with a passionate Kiss ...

Fireflies starts glowing n Nandini was amazed seeing that n finally smiles...

Manik looks at her but this time Nandini says the real n actual story of Fireflies

Nandini:Manik tumne pucha tha na ki Y I smile when I see fireflies

Manik:Haa tumne bataya tha...

Nandini:My mom used to say ki "Fireflies glows when there is true love".

Manik looks at her surprisingly hearing that Fireflies story...

Manik hugs her tight n looks at fireflies...:And its proved true today...

Nandini:For me it was proved long back...

Manik smiles n hugs her more tightly...like he won the big battle of his life n came back home...

MaNan were a couple now finally...like BF n GF...

But Dhruv was on guilt trip...as Manik n Aliya was not forgiving Dhruv

Tough he was a part of Fab5 but not like before...

Then slowly Nandini forgiven Dhruv n convinced Manik to Forgive him...But Aliya was giving tough time to Dhurv...



Here ends...do share ur views on this
Edited by kresham - 10 years ago
Natashaaaaa thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wowww u r back with banggg
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow
I r bck wth writin business

Superb.. I hope smthng like this happens
Cont soon😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey, really nice!
Hope the episode also turns out like this...please do continue😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice update..!👍🏼

i just wish CVs get such ideas..and hope this happens..!😊

continue soon..!


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Posted: 10 years ago
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glad to see u back in writing
it was.fabulous
u writing skills r.amazing
hope this happens in the show.too
plz continue soon 👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Natashaaa

wowww u r back with banggg

Finally thought of writing something...bcz somany things were gng on in head so thought of pen it down
Hope u liked it
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Originally posted by: manan58

Wow

I r bck wth writin business

Superb.. I hope smthng like this happens
Cont soon😆

Thanq...yes i m back with my writing business...
its been a long time i dint write anything so thought of writing
i m glad that u liked it

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