Hope Wins-My Take---4 Shots ---Part 4 Updated - Page 16

Originally posted by: priya_sejwal

Wow...awsumn ending!!!

Just loved it...each n evey part was very well written...manik's anger on dhruv,pandit jii real intentions got revealed,manik punched dhruv😛 n the best manan confession...😊

Aftr reading this...eagerly waiting to see all this in show...!!!

Superbbb...!!!👏👏

Thanq somuch...i m really glad that u guys liked it...

Originally posted by: sal_aphrodite

Lengthy tha but I loved it ,Hope to see this in the show as well.I loved the Way Manik spoke his heart out .😃

I know sal Likhte likhtlengthy hogaya...i shud hav added Dhruv's part in 3rd but i thought it ll b fun to read in last part but it became very lengthy
but i m happy that most of them liked it🤗

Originally posted by: aairahahmad

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amazing ss...

Aww Thanq somuch🤗

Originally posted by: poonz26

Everything was perfect in the story n think it may proceed this way in the serial also. Fingers crossed. Loved their confession in the end.

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hope so they show it this way

Originally posted by: kristii

sach kahu toh i loved the ending..whatever happened wid dhruv..😆..he deserved that..

amazing ff..

pandit deserve the worst punishment..

loved the most awaited confession..

loved navya ,fab 3,manan ,chaha ,chachi,all bas amms ko thoda jhatka laggaya..

hope u will return with another soon..

i just wanted that confession...let CV's do whatever they want but i made MaNan confess here so i m more than happy

Originally posted by: sandy_111

awww...its amazing...superb ending...kritika u r an excellnt story teller...i luv all ur posts bt ur fs's are jst too gd...keep writtng n b happy 😊

Aww thanq somuch Sandy...u never fail to read my works...i wud love to write more

Originally posted by: nimarious

marvellous update
loved it very very much 😃
u penned each n every emotion of each character so
fabulously
it was just excellent 👏
yayyiii u finally gave us the most awaited punch 🥳
confession part was well written and executed
it was simple yet perfect
ur an amazing writer
do write more 😳

thanq somuch
u mentioned every point of my writeup
thanq somuch for likeing it
will surely write if anything comes to my mind

Originally posted by: Akshi0019

Awsum dr... it was amazing... i wish same happen in show... i always loved ur prediction...
thanks for pm dr

Thanq Akshi...🤗

kritu u know wat, u r the boss😎

Originally posted by: DHRUVLOVER

kritu u know wat, u r the boss😎

i actually felt it has happened in the epi😳

love to u🤗

Aww Thanq Shrutu🤗🤗🤗
Hope u got some relief after reading this