Manan ff- Let Me Love You updated NOTE on pg 73 - Page 37

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Posted: 10 years ago
u r writing is hilarious
i read u r ff as stressbuster. to be honest .
i just wait for ur update so that i can laugh .
this story has been soo well written .
great job👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
Aww poor manik 😆
manik ke izzat daupe n nandini save him 🤣
alya new hair cut [:D/] i rly love ur ff
awsm update 👏
Edited by Dark-Beauty - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hilarious update!!
Drunk nandu super cute.. Poor Manik
Hahahhaha superman Manik n superwomen nandu.. Pretty cute
i guess Manik wud help nandu..
Continue
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Posted: 10 years ago
writer tune likhna bandh hi karrdia abto! 😭
mai to bhool b gayi kya padha last time...
not done writer not done...
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itne dino baad aayi wo b itna chhotu sa update leke!! 🤢
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Posted: 10 years ago

Manik -dialed kanta's no.-abhi yaha pounchoo 10 min mai yaha

kanta-par woh chudail

manik-chudail kisko bolaa woh woh meri meri nd thinks wat to say nd says mangetar hai haan wohi

kanta-kyaa e saach tha

manik-hello jaldi yaha pounchoo nhi toh dusra kaam doondh lena kal se

Manik -took nandini's cell phone nd messaged her chachi to sent the address nd hospital details

IN GARDEN

Nandini as per thr tradition jumped out the window

Watchman-madam aap yaha kya kar rahi hai nyonika mam ghar pe aagayi hai

Nandini-aagayi chudail pata mujhe

Watchman-arey aise nhi bolte saas hai aapki


Nandini-oooh sorry will not repeat it ayippa saasu maa future bahu coming

Watchman-aap kaha jaa rahi hai

Nandini-abhi to kaha saasu maa urf chudail se milne

Watchman-window see

Nandini-smiles-sshh patah unke saath unki maa ko bhi meri super window entry pasand hai soo don't worry ab jaooo tumare soone ka tym hogaya .

Watchman-sambhal ke madam aapki saas bhut ghussewali hai

As they say karma it is the window was opened

Nandini makes the grandentry through window-sawgat nhi karoo gaye humara saas bahu milap tune play

Nd looks around nd finds the room to be empty

Suu saa su cheee tu susu sound kar raha hai bloody tongue twist -mother in law mother in law

Nd hears the sound from bathroom

Nandini-taking bath aaa nd locks the bathroom from outside nd

Opens her cupboard -

Nandini-yee principal hai yaa model kapde toh dekho

Nandini -checks nd finds the bikini dekha I knew it ye chudail ke paas hoga

Nd while closing the door a file falls down

Nandini -what is this stupid file nd takes out the paper nd throws it outside the window

Nyonika off the shower nd was trying to unlock the door nd was not able to

Nyonika -wat the hell

Nandini -was giggling-hw boring isski kaikai awaaz idea ganna on kar deti hoon

On her phone

Arey prefect song for u saasu maaa

Chhoti chhoti baaton se hai tune jo sataaya mujhe

Ungli pe nacha ke tune chuna jo lagaaya mujhe

Arrey ja ja ja go to hell arrey ja ja ja i want silence

Jaa chudail jaa chudail yeah yeah jaa chudail

Nyonika -was fuming with anger whoo the hell is dis-iam telling u it I will kill u if u don't open the door .whooo the hell r u

Nandini-smiles nd changes the song

I know you want it,

But you never gonna get it

Tere hath kabhi naa aani

Maane na maane koi duniya ye saari

Mere ishq ki hai deewani

Ab dil karta hai huale haule se

Main khud ko gale lagaaun

Kisi aur ki mujhko zaroorat kya

Main to khud se pyaar jataaun

What's my name?

what's my name?

what's my name?

My name is Sheila, Sheila ki Jawani

Nyonika-wat sheela who the hell sheela . open the door I say.. sheela u wat the open the door

Its suffocating here open nd was feeling unconscious

Nandini-laughed nd boom manik opened the door nd found nandini laughing on the floor

Manik quickly got her up nd was taking her to his room.

Manik called kanta -kanta nyonika madam ko dekhnaa zara

Nandini-arey kanta baby u camee see ye mera fianc hai dekhaaa kaise mujhe utta ke lejaa raha hai uooo

Kanta-opens the bathroom nd finds nyonika unconuisous

Kanta-sprinkles water

Nyonika-gets up nd shouts- u worker bloody servant - u bloody hell u r fired I will make sure u won't get work in near future . I won't leave u here I will give complaint to police nd was about to slap her

Manik comes in-kya hua

Kanta-madam hum ne kuch nhi kiya nd goes out crying

Manik-stops her nd says -thanks tension mat loo mai baat kar lunga

Kanta-tension nhi yee toh aapka un chudail ke saath maagni hone ka dukh hai .ooh iamj saaryy wohi madam par apne aisa nd runs away crying

manik-god save mee

Manik -goes inside his room nd finds nandini again missing

Manik -wat the kahan hai yee

Nandini-comes out of the washroom

Manik gives questioning look

Nandini-wat!! Ayippa ab mai tumhe andar kya karne gayi thi ye bhi batau eww manik

Manik-stop it aaj kya hojata pata hai tumhe agar nyonika ko pata chalta ye sab tumne kiya hai toh u would have been destroyed.she would have killed u . scholarship chali jaati aur tum uske liye kaam karti hona right salary bhi ruk jaati phir kaise chalega u r house . I kno u r in financial crisis . it doesn't mean..

Nandini eyes got moist nd angry at the same time-stop it nyonika ne kabhi kisi ka bhaala nhi chaha hai aur schloriship ki baat mehnat ki hai mainee nd salary kaisa job koi aapne bte ko trouble mai daalne ke liye paise dete hai but u kno nyonika does .she has never done gud for anyone soo plz don't say I have to be under her restriction nd mai uss aurat ko raathi bhar bhi izzat nhi kar sakti tumse zayada nafart karti hoon use mai .and the financial crisis ki baat kar rahe ho tum ye bhi tumare mom ke wajah se hi .

Who kahan maregi mujhe .i will kill her who bhi aise nhi torture karke

Nd she suddenly felt dizzy nd faints

Manik picksher up nd laid her on the bed nd himself went nd sat on the couch

Manik-kyaa ye sab issne sach bola yaa phir it was the alcohol working .i mean itna hate nyonika ko wait sec ye issne uss din staircase pe bhi bola tha I guess something serious is there behind this hate .

i need to find out par kaise isse roz daaru pilaake toh saachaayi nhi ugal waa sakta naa usske saath joo free mai pagal harkatein jo ye karti hai who bhi jhelna padega wat to doo

Manik's phone rings-he picks it up -iss samya aapka dost bar ke saamne leta hua hai kripiya karke use ghar pouncha de dhanyawad evam shubh raatri nd cuts the phone

Manik-aaah dusraaa peekad saala gharpe nhi pee sakta idiot takes his keys nd goes to pick up cabir nd drop him home

After all this he enters his gate

Manik-gayi nyonika

Watchman-haan

Manik enters room nd sees nandini is not in bed

Manik-washroom gayi then finds no one in washroom n ab kaha gayi iss ladki ke wajah se mai kal poori raat soya hi nhi ab yeee bhaad mai jaaye mai soone jaaa raha hoon nd jumps on the bed

bhAAjAA GOViNdhAM bhAAJa GovindaM(tamil bhaajan it is )

manik jerks nd gets up- ab yee kya hai nd sees nandini's phone lie on the floor nd bends down from bed nd sees nandini under the bed -waha idar neend udaa ke madam ko dekhoo kaise sleeping beauty ke tarah soo rahi hai

manik pulls her out nd makes her sit on the couch

bhAAJAA GOVINDHAMM

manik-aaah ye aur isske taamil gaane nd switches off the alaram koi 4 bhajee alaram lagta hai kya

manik goes nd into bathroom to take shower

nandini-falls down from the couch while tossing around -aaah ouch

manik comes out of the washroom in towel -wah couch se ouch phirse gir gayii

nandini-aah mera saar nd opens her eyes nd finds manik in towel nd shouts -sheeezzz wat the kapde phenooo jaake idiot

manik-ohooo don't give me those sharmilii types look kaal tumne khud mere kapde nikalee thebhul gayi saati savtri jii

nandini-shouts-wat!!!!! Aisa nhi ho sakta .kaal mai chup chaap kaamre aake soo gayi thi haan

manik-wat!!!!!! Chup chap kaamre mai,hello madam kuch yaad hai aapne kal talli hoke kyaa kaarname kiye .

nandini-shuts her ears nd shouts-kiii maine kuch nhi kiyaa aur mujhe kuch nhiii jaana nd storms out of the room

kanta-giving sad looks to nandini

nandini-hain?? Isse kya hogaya

kanta-madam aapko kuch chahiye

nandini-eyes pop out-mujhse kaha aaa- who saar dard ho raha nimboo pani plz

nandini gets into her room nd closes the door

nandini-idiot aaarivr irrika unaaku

peeerahi thi toh ek type kaa peeti

muttal .aammmaaa thala valikideee

(translation-idiot dimag hai bhi yaa nhi nd pagal , mummyyy sar dard kar raha hai)

Kuch yaad bhi nhi aa raha aab who gadha jeene nhi dega mujhe

Ayippa wat have I done .kapde khole nooo nooo holding her head.

How would I face him

Nandini comes out nd sees manik nd rushes back to her room

Nandini-yeee gaya kyun nhi abhi tak

Manik-smiles -autowali bada mujhe blackmail karne aayi thi see ab mai karta hoon nd smirks

Manik-knocks the door-arey aao naa darling lets go

Nandini -darling hogayi kanta mai tumari darling nhi hoon

Manik-wat par kal tumne hi toh kaha tha darling lets do it

Nandini-nooo sshhh maine kuch nhi sunna nd pushes him aside nd nd goes out of the house

Manik laughs-ohh god its soo fun

Nandini was getting out

Watchman-saasu maa ke saath kal baat tik thi

Nandini-wat!!! Kaun saasu maa shut up abhi neend mai hoo tum I guess nd leaves

Watchman sees manik- saas -bahu jhada hua kya sahib madam gusse mai gayi

Manik-who who haan bechara mai phaas gaya

AT COLLEGE

Nandini enters college nd she meets navya nd Julie

Navya-hey u r still in that house

Nandini-kaunsa,kya ghar nd panics thinking manik's house

Julie -arey manik ke wa(she was going to say ki joo manik ke wajah se tumara hostel gaya ten he shuld only help u but got interrupted)

Nandini-shouta wat!!! Mai manik ke ghar mai nhi rehti

Navya nd Julie shouts-wat!!! Tu manik ke ghar mai rehti hoo

Navya-par tune kaha ki tu aapne kisi rishtedar ke ghar ruki hai

Julie-manik ke saath tujhe pata haina he has sexuality alternation kbhi gay ten kabhi normal

Nandini-guys just shut up class haina class attend karte hai

Manik reaches college nd meets fab4

Manik-hi guys

Cabir-yoo bro thanks kal raat ke liye

Alya-wat kal raat par kal toh we were together ten nd wat manik u nd cabir were together i mean hww

Manik-alya I went to drop cabir from bar to his house tats it

alya-thank god .wat day has come now iam insecure from cabir??

dhruv-oyee tu itna tried lag raha hai kya hua kaal

mukti-dhruv yaar kyaa pooch raha hai alya thi usske saath nd see alya's face lagta hai puri raat sooye nhi inn dono ne

cabir-but alya tu upar upar se itni saanskaari kaise baangayi aaj haan all the ghungat y??

mukti-yaa haatna ye scarf

manik-leave it mukti kafi dhoop haina shayad sun tan se bachne ke liya haina

alya-thank u baby I mean yaa

dhruv-yaar freshers party hone wali soo we r asked to perfrom guys

manik-obliviously coz we rock guys . so for rocking party toh hume hi perform karna hoga

IN OFFICE

Nyonika-iss everything arranged properly .i want everything perfect this deal is too precious to me nd u better don't make ny mistake

P.A-yes madam everything is arranged bas who contract file

Nyonikaa-I have that ok no one iss suppose to touch file its confidential

ALL THE BOARD Delegates arrived

Nyonika presented the presentation.

IN COLLEGE


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Manik was about to enter but saw nandini talking to herself

Nandini-idiot kyaa kardiya tune again blunder agar kisi aur ko pata chal gaya agar chachiko then iam gone

Manik comes from behind-hello

Nandini gets scared -wat!! Tum

manik-kya hua superwoman ur superman is here

nandini-wat !! rubbidh superr super kuch nhi kyaa hai

Manik-waise mai confused tha ki freshers party ke liye kya gaana gaun ab clear hogaya

Nd turns nd goes singing

Raat javaan mast samaan -

Aise mein honthon se honth mila

Nandini-gets flashes off their dance -ayippa did I do something did we do it .y nandini y bolatha chupke romantic scenes maat dekha kar ab dekha peene ke baad khud karne chaligayi ohh god nooo. ab se nhi dekhungi ayippa promise just kissing scenes noo acha nthng

What the kyya kyaa iam talking as if I have accepted tat we have done it .nhiii nandini noo u won't do tat hainaa ayippa tellna

yee manik ne aisa nhi kiya hoga woh aisa nhi hai wat mai bhi toh aise nhi hoon

PRECAP

Nyonika in business meeting turns into embarrassing situation

Manik gets shocked when nandini hugs him tight in corridor in fornt of fab5

here goes todays update .

sorry readers for not being regular .college pressure tats y

guys plzz drop in u r coments soo that i can relax that how is the update

nd likes tooo

niyaa yaar sorry 😒

Edited by aryapk1997 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
🤣
ha ha ha nandini and manik and kanta
wow wt a hilarious ff i love it yaar
👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
aww writer babu, okie pokie..
hilarious update!
Manik finally sudharta nazar aaraha hai, nandu ki help b karri usne!
phitte muh nyonika da.. 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
hahhahaha
nandini ne nyo ko bandh kar diya hhehe
And that kanta bai is so hilarious
Nandini ko sona nahi aata kya jab dekho girti rehti hai hhehe
Aur kya gane the
So nandini trust manik good
I love this ff it makes me laugh so much
loved it
Cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: monicaratna

🤣
ha ha ha nandini and manik and kanta
wow wt a hilarious ff i love it yaar
👍🏼

thanx
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow fab update
loved it
cont soon

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