Manan ff- Let Me Love You updated NOTE on pg 73

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Posted: 10 years ago
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as i said my previous ff iam soo gonaa finish but know i don't know so an idea popped for a new ff
CHARCTER SKETCH

MANIK MALHOTRA-a big time flirt nd sweet outside the college but once he enter the collage premises you find a full time bully image

NANDINI MURTI-crazy gals high ethical values bubbly nd chirpy with only friends nd usually don't have nice opinion about boys due to past experiences. family same as the show .

FAB5-is there as same as in the beginning of the show


guys wait for next update i am soon goona update the first part

INDEX
part1-pg2

part2-pg4

part3-pg6

part4-p9

part5-pg13

part6-pg17

part7-pg20

part8-pg22

part-9-pg28

part-10a-pg31

part-10b-pg32

part-11-pg37

part-12-pg40

part-13a-pg44

part-13b-pg49

part-14-pg53

part-15-pg56

part-16-pg63
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..Mellifluous.. thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey !!
IF have some BB codes ...once have a look at it..u will understand...:) :)
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Originally posted by: ..Mellifluous..

Hey !!

IF have some BB codes ...once have a look at it..u will understand...:) :)
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thanks dear
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wow we got a new ff from u but woh wala ff kyu katam ho raha hai i dont want that...
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Congo for the new story
interesting character sketch
continue soon
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Originally posted by: Dhariya_

wow we got a new ff from u but woh wala ff kyu katam ho raha hai i dont want that...

abhi kuch fixed nhi hai uss fix ka that i will finish it or not on popular demand iam might continue that ff too
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*Tringgg tringgg *

MANIK-hello bol kya hai mai nikal raha hoon abhi ,haan haan I know kal freshers aa rahe hai its goin to be fun nd cuts the phone.tabhi macha dengaye

MANIK-driver jaldi nikalo airport jaana hai fast

The road was fully packed with vehicle

MANIK-damn it aaj hi traffic😡 itna hona tha

Manik looks here nd there in frustration nd notice a group of boys staring at the auto nd commenting

BOY1-dekha be uss auto mai

BOY2-sahi hai yaar kya dekti hai

BOY3-smile dekha uska

Manik hears all this and tries shift his positions to see the girl in auto.

. He sees her hands holding the pillar of the auto covered with colourful bangles nd then she slightly tucks her hair behind her ears nd here comes her jhumka nd she was wearing a long skirt nd he saw a small tattoo of a music note on her ankle nd a colourful anklet. below it.

He became restless to see her face tried all ways to see her face

at that very moment the auto driver turns nd looks at manik

MANIK-ask him through hand signals that hows the girls face??❓

AUTO DRIVER-says super👍🏼

Manik- signals the auto driver tilt the rear view mirror so that he can see😃

AUTO DRIVE-signal haath be jaaa tadap😛

MANIK gets angry nd frustrated😡 nd see a bit of gap nd asks his driver to move forward nd then the driver turns manik shows middle finger😈

AUTO DRIVER-smiles nd takes his auto too forward nd turns nd gives double middle finger😎

MANIK-damn it !!!!

INSIDE THE AUTO

The girl -chachi iam telling ye hoarding wala bangle is sooo pretty .mai ne fix Karli joh bhi ye bangles abhi karde ke dega mujhe mai uss se shaadi kar loongi

AUTO driver-mam abhi kardne chale

GIRL-hello aage dekhke chalo ok

CHACHI-oye pagal ladki aisa kuch mat karna mai hi dila doongi tujhe who bangles tik hai

GIRL-chachi tis is y I luv sooo much muh college mai pohuchne ke baad call karoongi bye

AIR PORT

A foreigner lady was standing ahead of manik nd nandini was standing behind manik

The lady suddenly drop her wallet nd her money falls while picking it up her top goes a bit up nd manik notices it nd nandini notice manik staring nd gives hopless boys🥱 look though manik doesn't see nandini

The lady stands up nd continue standing in the line

Nd manik enjoys the show as I said manik iss such pervert he takes his wallet nd takes RS100 notes nd keeps the wallet back in his pocket nd drops one 100 rupee note nd ten

MANIK pats on the lady shoulder-mam I think is tat urs

LADY again bends to take the money nd manik smiles😃

Nandini's eyes widens -such a

Manik was abut to drop another note

Nandini-takes his wallet from his back pocket nd manik turns

NANDINI-excuse me mam( nd takes all the money in the wallet nd gives the lady-)mamm its all ur money

MANIK-oh freak aaa

THE LADY -looks surprised

MANIK-yaaa yaa( wid a sad face)😭 all ur money

The lady takes it nd turns happily

Nd stretches her hand nd gives his wallet

Manik was abut to take it nd notices the bangles and suddenly bends nd sits

Nandini gets surprised nd moves backward🤔

Manik searches for the tattoo nd anklet he finds nd smile nd he is heart beats raise to see her face

Nd he lifts his head nd he finally sees her

Her big doe-eyes ,petal like lips, her earings ,her beautiful sliky hairs nd he keeps staring her dreamingly

NANDINI-hello excuse me idoit nd pulls his hands nd keeps his wallet

Nd she moves forward towards the ticket counter .

A man comes-beta aap ko nhi jaana toh saara side haat jayiye

Manik snaps out of his dream world nd finds nandini is gone

PRECAP-

what happens if manik finds nandini in his college

nandini finds this pevert in the college nd that too senior to her

hope u guys liked the update i can't assure u regular update but will try to nd do hit like nd drop in ur comments

guys intro scene is inspired by a movie i recently watched though the movie iss old but luved tis scene so used it for the intro of nandu

Edited by aryapk1997 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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loved it
i'm waiting...
plz cont soon

Edited by kristii - 10 years ago
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I know this story.😉😆.I dont want to reveal it...so u r a south Indian...??
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Originally posted by: ..Mellifluous..

I know this story.😉😆.I dont want to reveal it...so u r a south Indian...??

yaa i luved tis scene so kept it but the story is totally different its a college story
Edited by aryapk1997 - 10 years ago

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