Manan ff- Let Me Love You updated NOTE on pg 73 - Page 35

Manik gets up from bed nd says- koi ghar mai ghus gaya hai mai dekhke aata hoon

Alya blocks his way -manik leave it naa koi nhi hai

Manik -shouts hai naaa nd ten adds koi hai alya need to check

Nd alya keeps finger on his lips-shhh nd turns

Manik-confused nd touchs her hair nd -says alya u have soo sliky hair

Nandini-was listening nd murmers to herself- sliky bloody shit sees my hair ish the besht

Alya-wat!! Unzip mee

Manik-wat!!! Noo

Nd alya pins manik to the wall nd goes near him to kiss him nd closes her eyes

Nandini-hww chudail meri manik ki izzat looting noo nandini the superwoman will save u manik

abhiii dekhaati hoon nd goes behind the power areas nd switches of current supply nd

The house iss pitch dark

Manik moves away his head nd looks out with somehow

AND ALYA kisses the wall nd tastes the paint

Alya-tuuu chee wat the manik nd opens her eyes nd finds everything pitch dark

Alya-shouts manik iam scared

Manik-murmurs haan mai toh comedy flim dekh raha arey I too hate dark ness yaar

Tum ruku emergency light dekh ke aata hoon

Alya-nhi nhi manik

Manik -I have too otherwise hume andhere mai rehna padega catch this phone troch on karlo

Nd untangle himself nd goes into hall

nandini-pats herself nd says-gud job superwoman nandini u saved superman

Nd nandini enters the room - kya karoon nd sees arey scissors finally milagyi

Nandini was crowling around room she went under the bed nd hit her head while getting up

Alya-shout aaahhh mummaa bhoot nd dropped the phone down

Nd stood up from the bed

Nd while nandini was on crowling parade hits alya

Alya -mumma - ohh god mujhe toh hanuman chalisa bhi nhi aati nd sat on the couch mummy bachaooo plzz

Nandini was getting bored -mujhe kuch katnaa hai kya kaatoon nd nd sees alya's hairs in dimlight of the phone

Nandini-smoooth hairs naa bhi dekho superwoman ka kaamal started cutting her hair from behind the couch

Alya-in tension didn't realise

Manik went nd switchs on the power

Nandini rushes nd crowls under the bed

Manik comes into room nd gets shocked to see alya

Alya-shouts wat now!!

Manik-your hairs nice cut haan

Alya -sees herself in the mirror nd screams -nooo aaah

Manik close u r eyes noo don't see i need to go rite now *sob* sob*

Nd rushes out

Nandini-sees her jacket nd shout -areyy kapade toh pehenlooo

Manik -sees around from where the voice was coming from

Nandini again try to get up nd hits the bed

Nandini-ouch aah phirse oyee bed ayippa se bolke terii pitii karaungi deknaa

Manik bent witnessed the nandini giving dhamki to the bed

Manik-ab bhar nikalengyi

Nandini-haath toh doo nandini getsup nd pushes manik down on the floor

Manik-wat the hell nd pulls his hair in frustration

Nandini-says manik tumare paas desi daru nhi hai I heard zayada effect hota .ye zayada nhi chada mujhe daaru desii nd starts doing the step

Manik-opens his eyes -wide -acha rum whisky ,vodka, brandy sab milake peene baad tumhe ab desi bhi chahiye

Aur maine tik se suna nhi ki ye zayada kya nhi chaada

Nandini-oyee fianc ho mere itna toh sehnaa padega

Manik-kya ye kab hua aise hi chalta rah toh 10 min baad bologei shaadi hogayi humari

Manik dials -cabirs no.

Cabir-hellooo kaminey friend

Manik-broo need u .

Cabir-kyun gay mood aagaya tera alya yaa Julie bol

Manik-nhi bee nandini who peeke taali hogayi I can't manage her tu jaldi ghar aa jaa

Cabir-aaahaaa 🤣par mujhe kaun MG BAR se ghar pounchayegaaa nd paas out on the phone

Manik-hello hello cabir kutte kaminey saala peeyakad nhiii ab mai isse kaise manage karoonga

Nandini-chudail two gone ,chudail one comes .heheehh nandini superwoman gooo nad starts running

Manik -holds nandini noo ways nyonika ko bhi aaj ghar aana tha yaa remember Wednesday file transferring day how culd I forget ek hi din toh ghar aati hai who bhi aapne kaam se

Nandini-broom broom I have too save the world from this chudail leave mee

Manik-nooo nyonika alya nhi hai she will kill you stay here hilnaa maat

Nandini-stands still as u say darling superman

Manik -ooh noo seductive mode on escape

Nd locks the room nd goes outside to meet nyonika

Nandini-superman idiot hai superwoman ko open window ke saath kaamree mai band kardiya

MANIK rushes out into hall nd sees nyonika

Nyonika-well I hope ki u remember that u have leave tommrow evening with vikas to delhi

Manik- yaa I remember

Nyonika-intersting no aruguements is everything fine manik

Manik-tats none of your concern ur work is being done so be happy

Nyonika-well in tat case Iam happy nd goes into her room nd locks it

Manik-phew baal baal bachee

Nd goes into room nd finds nandini missing

Manik-shit nooo plzzz goodness death coming .idiot idoit manik how culd u forget to close the window eee

I just hope nyonika aapne room ka window close rakhe

Nd was about to go out

And sees nandini's phone ringing

Chachi-beta paise arrange hue I kno tujhe aise pareshaan nhi karna chahiye but hospital walon ne kal sham tak ka deadline diya .hai I kno beta sorry nandu na

PRECAP

Nyonika -nandini convo

manik comes nd saves nandini

next day hangover.

sorryyy for such delayed update .

i was still in the hangover of holidays nd was feeling lazy so didn't write so here goes the update finally

nd readers do comment love reading ur comments also the new joiners luv all

keep enjoying the manan kiss yeee dedicated PANI ye i love them

superb update very hilarious

thanks for the pm
marvelous update

oye oye tu aagayi mastwala update plz yaar tmhari story main vi kiss lao oh god kya bol rahi hu khud nahi pata i loved nandu hihihi broom broom i havt to save the world from dis chudail hah kya dialogue hai thnx for the pm cont soon

I am silent reader first time commenting.

Originally posted by: aminahin

oye oye tu aagayi mastwala update plz yaar tmhari story main vi kiss lao oh god kya bol rahi hu khud nahi pata i loved nandu hihihi broom broom i havt to save the world from dis chudail hah kya dialogue hai thnx for the pm cont soon

Originally posted by: a_minion

I am silent reader first time commenting.

Your fanfic is awesome.

Loved this part very hilarious it is.

Loved Aliya-Nandu interaction🤣

Liked this side of your nandu.

Keep writing such amazing parts.

Rofl hilarious

Originally posted by: aryapk1997

yaaa finally kiss rakhne wali thi phir woh set nhi hoo raha tha situation ke saath iss liye nhi daala

but don't worry there would be kissy wala update coming too.

rofl rofl rofl tumhe pata hai tmne dusri ff tin bar update kiya huh aj sabpagal ho chuke hai theek hai but i want kiss bas n i love u baass 😳 kiss mujhe chahiye hi chahiye

Originally posted by: aminahin

rofl rofl rofl tumhe pata hai tmne dusri ff tin bar update kiya huh aj sabpagal ho chuke hai theek hai but i want kiss bas n i love u baass 😳 kiss mujhe chahiye hi chahiye