manans new journey ff(part 10.... 24/3/15)

parichauhan thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#1
part 10:: some1 knocks on the door...to escape from manik nandini goes towards the door to open it...thats wen manik realises that nandini is in her bathrobe and says aye nandini she turns and says wat...he says wat r u doin...she says wats wrong with you manik some1 jus knocked on the door...manik says i know but wats wrong with you...havent u seen wat uve worn...she luks down and realises and luks back at manik...manik says you go to the washroom ill open the door...nandini goes in the washroom n manik opens...its the laundry guy...manik tells him to wait...he screams from outside the washroom ms murthy the laundry guy has come so...and before he can say nytin ahead nandini opens the washroom door and shoves the laundry bag with her clothes into maniks hands...manik says ohh hello im not here to do laundry service for you...nandini says manik!! He gives the clothes and shuts the door and nandini comes out...nandini says chalo manik now go to your room...manik says listen nandini as ive said before im not goin nywhere...and not specially wen ur dressed so pretty...i mean i didnt know that with 1 hot comment for an actress ill get to see you in a bathrobe...i mean we shud watch movies more often...nandini says aiyappa save me from this torture and says m very tired manik let me sleep..manik says haan toh maine pakadke ke thodi rakha hai...sleep...nandini says i wanna sleep in my room manik go to ur room and sleep...manik says nope im not moving from here till the lights come on...infact i was planning of stayin here only tonite u know incase raat ko light chali jaaye again toh then it doesnt luk good waking you up naa to open door...nandini says toh tum nai jaoge?? Manik says nope...nandini says fine...and she covers herself with the blanket and sleeps.. Its morning time now...nandinis alarm rings and she wakes up...she luks on the bed and cant find manik der...she luks around the room and cant find manik der so she gets up and is happy and says thank god manik has gone away to his room...thank you aiyappa...she gets up and goes towards the washroom to freshen up and thinks and says aiyappa my clothes havent come yet wat will i wear...so she decides and says ill call the laundry first and is moving away from the washroom wen the washroom door opens and sum1 pulls nandini into the washroom...nandini gets scared and screams...manik puts his hand on her mouth and says ssshhh nandini its me...she stops screaming and says tum yahan kya kar rhe ho?? She sees manik shirtless and is covering her eyes...Manik replies log washroom mein kya karte hai nandini...nandini says bahar niklo and starts pushing him out...he pulls nandini into the shower area and puts on the shower...nandini says manik tum kya kar rhe mujhe bhiga kyun rhe hai...waise bhi my clothes havent come yet and ur making these wet too...manik says sshhh...backgr ound mein zehnaseeb song is played...both are gettin wet...manik moves nandinis hair from her face and kisses her forehead...nandini kisses manikk on his cheek...he comes in closer for a kiss and she puts her hand on his mouth and says manikk...he stops...some1 knocks on the door...manik says ill open it..nandini says manikk ur fully wet ill open it...she goes and opens the door...it is cabir who is shocked seeing nandini wet in a bathrobe...nandini says good mornin...cabir says good mrnin and enters the room...he says actually i was lukin for manik...so i thot you wud know...and that very moment manik comes out in his towel...cabir is like what the...tum dono bheegey hue...and laughs...i mean kya kar rhe the...nandini blushes...manik luks away...cabir says isnt this room too hottt!! Manik says yes cabir and its got hotter ever since uve come here...cabir says ohhh...laughs and says acha we r goin for breakfast jab tum dono ka ho jaaye and laughs again tab neeche aa jaana...manik doesnt reply...nandini says yaa cabir actually kal galti se manik ne mere kapdon pe icecream gira diya tha so im jus waitin for my clothes to come from laundry...cabir laughs and says icecream?? Galti se?? Manik ne giraya??he Laughs and leaves... Cabir leaves and manik is standing and lukin at nandini...shes dripping wet...so manik calls the laundry n says i had given some clothes last nite havent gt them yet...the man says yes sir the laundry boy is already on his way to the room...manik says ok...as soon as he puts down the phone sum1 knocks...nandini is still standing in the room...manik says ab tumhe special invitation dena padega to go n hide in washroom?? She luks at him angrily n goes in...manik takes the clothes and shuts the door..nandu asks him to give the clothes...manik says ur not gonna get them so easily...ull have to take it from me...nandini says aiyappa this boy!! N gets out of washroom n says manik give me my clothes...manik says nope first you give me wat i want...she asks wat do u want...he says u dont know?? Shud i show you?? She blushes and says manik give my clothes...he says i told u u have to earn it...she says ok fine...shes walkin towards manik luking into his eyes...and says you know manik i have sumtin to tell you...he says about wat she says about us...shes reached close to manik and holds his face luks into his eyes and says i wanted to say ki...he drops the clothes and says you wanted to say...she says ki n leans in close now her hands on his neck...manik repeats saying ki...she kisses his left cheek then rite cheek then forehead and then manik shuts his eyes wen nandini smiles bends takes her clothes and runs to washrum and says ki manik is a foolll !! Manik says damn it that was close...Nandini changes and comes out wen manik is sittin on bed and sneezing...nandini says manik wipe your hair otherwise ull get a cold...manik says wat?? Wat rubbish i wont get a cold and sneezes again...nandini takes the towel and starts wiping his hair...while she s wiping manik pulls her hand again n kisses it...nandini blushes...manik gets a call...its cabir...he says manik if u both r done with ur shower can ull come for breakfast we need to leave also...manik shouts on phone kyaaa...arre aise kaise dono gaadi kharab hui...haan toh theek karo...cabir gives a shocked expression and smiles and says manik tu yeh kya bol rha hai gaadi kharab ho gai?? Poora din lagega?? Remaining members of fab5 are there they hear...manik says what full day?? Listen i cant spend the full day here get the car repaired as soon as possible...both manik n cabir giggle...Manik puts down phone and nandini asks kya hua manik..manik says valet guy calld and said ki humari dono cars kharab ho gai hai so hes taking it to get repaired...nandini says dono cars?? Manik says we may have to stay back today...nandini says wat??Main ams aur chachi ko kya bolungi...aiyappa plss help me n she starts mumbling to herself in tension walkin up and down and dashes into manik.. ...manik gives her a luk and says will you relax nandini...today anyways is sunday koi bahana bana lenge...nandini says like wat manik...u know i dont lie still i lied yesterday and now again...wat if i get caught...Manik tells nandini relax...dont get worked up...he says if you want ill talk to chachi she nyways likes me...nandini says manik no need ill manage...nandini says chalo lets go down ur frnds must b waiting...both go down...dey meet fab4...mukti asks manik cars ko kya hua...he fumbles abd doesnt know wat to say...cabir covers up saying ki umm mukti manik ki car ka tyre puncture hua n aliya ki...aliya ki car start nai ho rhi...mukti says arre but achanak kaise dono cars kharab hui...cabir says mukti yaar tu naashta khaa...nandini is lost in her thots wen cabir asks her nandini wats wrong...manik ne kuch kiya kya?? She smiles and says no cabir m fine...he says no ur not...wats bothering you...u can tell me if you want...she says i dont know wat to tell chachi n ams i mean grandmom...he says ohh itni si problem...he says simple say navyas fever is not yet down n her mom is comin to mumbai to take care of her but her train arrives only tmrw mornin so she requested me to stay back...nandini says thank u cabir ur a true friend...she gets up n takes her phone and calls ams... (to b cntd)

Created

Last reply

Replies

3

Views

2.9k

Users

4

Likes

19

Frequent Posters

Dhariya_ thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 10 years ago
#2
can U plz give me the link of part 9 as I am not able to find it
priya_sejwal thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#3
I just finished reading all the parts if this ff
Awsumm updates
Just loved it
Very well written
RomComFan thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#4
Lovely... CABINI are so cute...

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".