MANAN/KY2 FF HEART BEATS(part 6-page 11) - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
#41
nice...
plz update soon...n pace of the story too...
Manik n Abhi faceoff.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42
wow abhi kya entry hai
oh no now nandu is again in between abhi and manik
please do continue
bye sumi
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
Update soon
It's cer interesting :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
Thanks for the comments 🤗 ...
Hope u all like next one too...

.PART 5...

"Oh god its time for party guys let's go to canteen "said a over excited cabir...

"Yeah ...let's go"manik said as he knew nandini will be in canteen...

And they went to canteen...when they spotted navya and told her to join in with them...

...in canteen...

Nandini was sitting in canteen still staring at the picture...
Abhi came there and smiled at her innocence...
"Arre aise goor goor ke us photo ko dekhegi tho photo se aishu bahar aajegi...mein tho hu hi yaha...kyu baby doll"said abhi...
Nandini turned and saw Abhi standing in SRK pose "Abhimanu naam tho suna hoga ...hmmm"
"Abhi..."nandu murmered and ran to him ...and hugged him tightly...her legs were not touching the floor ...she was crying "am I dreaming or u r really here"
"Arre yaar 90s ke heroine Ki taraha stupid dilogue marna band kar...pagal I am here "said abhi ...

And and at the same time our monster fab4 and navya entered...
Maniks blood was boiling...he felt like killing abhi ...he was going to yell at them when cabir holded his hand...

Nandini broke the hug ..."ohh god abhi look at ur self ...muscles and all and aww u r looking so cute ..."she said messing her hand on his hairs .
"Par tu aaj bhi vaisihi h...cute and bubbly "he said pulling her cheeks and they hugged each other again...
Manik was really very jealous...his anger was on peck. ...and cabir hold his hand stopping him from going and hitting abhi...
But seeing manik angry like hell seeing nandini with abhi cabir started singing"tujhe koi aur dekhe tho jalta h dil ...badi muskilo se phir sambhalta h dil..."but he stopped seeing maniks red eyes and navyas angry look...

Navya went to nandu and tapped her shoulder...finally they broke the hug...
Nan:arre navya...meet him he is my best friend Abhi...I mean Abhimanyu...
Nav:oh best friend...(sukar h maata Rani kya...she said to herself )hiii...hum navya
Abhi:ohh hi beautiful ...(he said kissing her hand and nandu shaking her head and fab 5 staring at him in disbelieve and navya made her eyes wide)
Nan:tu nai sudrega ...yeha bhi flirt...don't worry navya ye pagal h hi aaisa...(she said hitting him)

Abhi:chal nandu ghar chal I have many things to talk about...
Nan:arre no I have panditjis CLS...OK ek kaam kar pick me after 2 hmmm
Abhi:chal theek h...waise who are they?(he said pointing towards fab 5 )
Finally nandu noticed fab 5 specially manik..
"They are fab 5 best band in college...this is cabir mukti alya dhruv and manik"she said looking at manik with a smile but he made a angry face which confused nandu...
Abhi shook hand with every one ...then he forwarded his hand to manik...
Manik shook his hand with him...but squeezed his hand tight...abhi winched a little...cabir realized it and said" abhimanu ..."manik got into sense and left abhis hand...abhi gave manik a look and turned to cabir and said"yes"
"Tum nandini ko kaise jante ho"cabir asked
Abhi pulled nandini toward him and side hugged her...
"This pagal...I know her since we were going to kindergarten ...we are best friends "

"Ohh...is it so nandini"asked manik...grinning his teeth ...

"Yes he is ...and U know I was missing him a lot today"she said without realizing what she said...

"Anyway ...will u not show me the college"asked nandu
" oh yes...but u will leave soon to US na"she said sadly making manik happy

But maniks happiness was for two second..when abhi said "no ...guess what ...I have joined space..."
"What ?"manik and nandini yelled together but the difference was nandu was happy and manik was 😡 ...
"Chal mujhe college dikha "
"Chal "said nandini...
And they walked out leaving manik angry cum jealous as in excitement nandini didn't turned or looked at him...
And our cabira was enjoying all this
"Ab aayega mazza space mein"
"Kya?"asked mukti alya dhruv and cabir...
"Aage aage dekho hota h kya"he said indicating manik...
And fab 3 and navya understood it and laughed along with cabir seeing maniks face.. 🥱

Sorry if u didn't like it
Edited by sauju - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
Hahaha.. Jelo manik so cute..
Continue soon...awesome
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
lovely update
loved it
very nicely written
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
Fun update...enjoyed it, please continue soon😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
[QUOTE manan58] Hahaha.. Jelo manik so cute..
Continue soon...awesome
[/QUOTE]

I know i too love jelo manik ...
I will continue soon thanks for liking it
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: Serendipity2015

Fun update...enjoyed it, please continue soon😊

will continue soon 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
will update till tomorrow evening

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