MANAN/KY2 FF HEART BEATS(part 6-page 11) - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
ok now its going to be so interesting
purani dosti and new pyaar
wow solid compition hoga boss.
do continue
bye sumi
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
part 3B was awsome...loved manan long drive ...so cute...😉
pls continue soon dear...
take care😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
Thanks for the comments ...hope u all like the next part too...

PART 3C

Nandini went down and sat beside rishab who was giving her a 'i know what u dont know' smile...she got confused and asks him"kya hua rishab,?why are u smiling ?kya chal raha h ap Sabke beech mein"
Rishab nodded in a no and chachi said"arre nandu kuch nai wo bas aise hi..tu bohat kush lagrahi h tho vo bhi kush h...hai na rishab"
Rishab nodded in yes...
N:OK(she said still confused)chachi mujhe neend aa rahi h mein jaa rahi hu sonne ...good night...

Good night they said in unison...
Nandini shaked her head and went upstairs...
As soon as she went up chacha chachi rishsab started laughing...
"Aaj tho bal bal baach gai warna isse abhi Sab pata chal jaata"said chachi...
"Aur abhimanu bhi naraj ho jaata...bichara surprise dena chahata h isse"said chachu...
...
Here abhimanu was video chatting with Aisha ...and doing stupid antics
"Aishu jab vo mujhe dekhkegi na tho...vo tere stupid Hindi serials Ki thara uske Baal udne lagenge...mein slow motion mein aage aaunga aur vo mujhe dekhke shock ho jaayegi phir bhagke mujhe hug karegi...phir"

"phir vo bolegi mere bhaiyaa ap aa gai haina"said Aisha teasing him and she started laughing seeing her brothers chanced expression...
"Chup re vampire jaada bola na tho tere daat tood dunga samjhi..."he said angrily with a cute pout...
"Awww...I was just joking...par bhai aap une kab bataoge apne feelings ke baaremein..."said Aisha little concern for this two...
"Very soon baby ...very soon...but now I need to take a long sleep kal college ka first day h mera"
"OK take care bhai bye..."she said waving her hand...
"Bye "
He closed his lappy and said to himself "kal...it is a big day nandini murty ...I will make sure its the best reunion for us"
...
On the other hand this two love birds manan were thinking about each other and the long drive...

Next morning...
Nandini got ready and went downstairs...
Chachi:dekh tere liye kuch aaya h nandu...dinning table pe rakha h(she said smiling to herself as she know it was abhimanu's gift)
Nandini opened it to find a basket full of dairy milk silk...and a note saying. 'Hay princess this sweet chocolate for the sweetest girl in this world...from 'A'...'..
Nandu first thought it was manik but it said 'from A'...
She got confused but ignored it...
She went to college...at 8:30 while trying to call manik but some one pulled her in a room no doubt it was her very own monster manik...
"Manik"
"Tho aur kon ho sakta h...nobody except me has the guts to drag u in a room,...hm"he said with his killer smile...
"Manik chalo koi aa jaaye ga "she said...
"Don't disturb me I wanna be here with u "he said with a pout...
"OK but only for two minutes .."she said seeing his cute face...
With out wasting time he moved to kiss her...BUT BUT maniks phone started ringing ...and manik got irritated and say it is cabir...nandini was trying hard to control her laugh...manik gave her a deadly glare and picked the call...
"Kya hai? Tu wait nai karsakta kya ?tujhe abhi call Karna tha... u..."
"Arre ruk jaa mere milkha Singh saaas le meine issliye phone kiya taki tu jam room mein aye ...dhruv and alya ko much kam h sab she jaldi aa pls...aur Jo tu kar raha h use thode waqt ke liye pospond kar de"he said in his I am so cool tone...
"Chup aa raha hu ...rak phone"he said and cuts the call and looks at his angel...
Nandini understands the situation and tell him to go...
He kisses her nose and tell her that he will be meeting her in pandits class...
Nandu nods and kiss his cheek ...and ran out of room...
"This girl...she is driving mein crazy..."he said to himself...and went to jamming room...
...
Here we see a guy coming out of his car...looking hot...very girl starring at him ...and guys getting jealous...abhimanyu ...he just loved attention... He went inside college and went to niyonikas cabin...without knocking he entered the room and without asking permission he sat on chair
"What kind of behavior is ..."nyonika stopped as she saw abhimanu's face..."ohh Abhimanu its u..."
"Yes niyo...its me ..how are u ?hope u r handling this college well as dad is not here hmmm"he said with attitude...

"What do u think abhimanu?"she said smiling but thought "ohh god how am I gonna handle this mess...why is he taking admission here...its a big trouble for me"
"Of course I know u handle things well ...that's why dad gave the responsibility of this college to u right niyo...any way bye I just came to see you bye niyo..."abhi said with attitude...

PRECAP
Abhi:hey princess
Nan:abhi ...
She ran and hug him tight ...at the same time fab 5 and navya entered canteen and r shocked...
Manik 😡



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Sorry for this boring chapter
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
Dis is NT fair... I thot u would introduce them in dis chapter... When r u updating next... Waiting fr d next eagerly
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
part 3c was awsome...loved it ...pls continue soon dear...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
This ws nt boring.. Bt the nxt chp defo luks interesting
Cot inure soon😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
Beautiful update..
Manik-Nandu moments were cute..
I hope Nyonkia or Abhi won't create any problems..
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
Thanks for the comment... I was not gonna update because I was damn pissed of the merge episode but then thought of updating for cooling my head 😆 ...

PART 4

Manik went to jamming room to find his best friends starring at him like aliens...
M:what?kya hua?
Mukti:tu aapne phone ka karta kya h...tujhe msg kiya par.nai u didn't checked it right..nai half an hour se hum yeha tera wait kar rahe he...phir cabir ne call kiya tab jaake u r here warna ...msg check bhi karta h tu ajj kal... 😡
Cabir:arre chod na mukti aa gaya na vo...kuch important kar raha hoga...kyu manik...(he said winking cabira style)
Manik gave him I will kill u look to cabir and said: haaa niyonika ...niyonika ke sath tha...par bolo tho hua kya h ...
Alya:hmmm ...guys we...I mean me and dhruv ...I mean...bolo na dhruv
Dhruv: haa vo ...me and alya ...
Dhrulya :we are together...(they said closing their eyes )
Cabir stared at them 👏 :finally u both said it we are happy for u Right manik ..mukti...
He turned and saw mukti and manik like this.. 😲

M:kya?when did this happen...dhruv tune bataya..kyu nai...anyway I am happy for u both(he said hugging dhruv)
Mukti: but I am in a shock I mean...dhruv alya kaise...

Cabir:arre CID join karegi kya bas kar...
Mukti:hmmm anyway it call for a group hug right...
"Right"they all said in unision...

At that time manik got a msg from pandit that they will practice after 12 ... ..he said thank god and they shared a group hug
...
On other side ...,nandini got msg from pandit and she was reading it and tripped and fell down on floor and her black dairy fell down with a photo...
She pick the dairy and kept it inside the bag and then picked the photo it was her photo with Abhimanu ,Aisha and rishab ...In that photo rishab and Aisha were sitting on floor Abhi was sitting on sofa and Nandu was standing behind the sofa...she had her arms around Abhimanu's neck...seeing the picture tears started rolling from her eyes...

...FLASHBACK...

"Hii aishu...what's up?"said a cheerful nandini dressed in short white denims and pink top...
"Dii...dekhona bhai utt nai raha h mom bhi gai uttane par nai utta i too tried but no aaj hum dono family picnic pe jaa rahe h aur ye mahashay so rahe h sleeping beauty bankar...he is 16 now but still he act like a kindergarten kid..."said Aisha with a pout...

"Awww my baby ...don't worry I have an idea..."said nandini and winked at Abhimanus mom...
"What"asked an excited Aisha..abhimanus dad .mom,and nandus mama mami
Nandini went to kitchen with a bucket and pour cold water in it and took ice from freezer and added it in water...
She went upstairs at abhis room...and saw Abhimanu sleeping just like a baby with open mouth...
"I am sorry abhi"she said and pour whole bucket on abhi...
Abhimanu got up with a jerk and saw the most beautiful ladies of his life laughing...his mom Aisha nandini and nandus mami
He gave a now u wait and watch look to nandini... Nandini got his intention and ran out side chased by abhimanu ...she went downstairs and hide behind sofa...but rishab indicated abhimanu and he went there...
But before he could catch her she went and hide behind abhis dad...and his nodded in a no and nandu showed him tongue
"Dad dats not fair app sab hamesa use baccha lete ho ...except rishab no body loves me..."he said hugging rishab dramatically...

(Nandini use to live in us with her mama and Mami who loved rishab and nandini a lot because they didn't had children..and nandus mama and abhis dad r bff cum partners ...so both family use to hang out much more)

Mami:aww abhi aaha mera baccha ...jaldise taiyar ho picnic jaana h na...jaa
Abhi:ok Mami ...(abhi said showing his tongue to nandu)
Nandu to did the same ...both family got ready to go and abhi came down and put a hand around nandus neck and asked "picture click tho karte he na yaar"
"Chal "nandu said equally excited ...
And nandus mama clicked the pic...

...
FLASHBACK ENDS...

Nandini wiped the tear and smiled .."I miss those days...I miss u abhi ,aishu"she said and walked away...
Behind the door Abhimanu too had tears in his eyes and he said"now u will never miss me...because I will be in front of u always"



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PRECAP is the same ...

Sorry if u didn't like it
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
awsome update...loved the flashback scenes...eagerly waiting to read more...pls continue soon dear...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
Awesome update
.. Continue soon plsss

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