MANAN/KY2 FF HEART BEATS(part 6-page 11) - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Humzy

lovely update

loved it
very nicely written
cont soon

will update soon thanks for liking it
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52
heheh J manik ...
Cont soon
Aswm update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53
wow...amazing update...loved it...
cabir is so sweet yaar...😉
pls continue soon dear...take care😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54
Poor abhi ur life is danger bro u woke up the monster
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Posted: 10 years ago
#55
Thanks for the comments and likes...hope u all like the next part too... 😊

...PART 6...

Manik was damn pissed so he started roaming through out the jam room murmuring to him self "ye ladki khud ko samjthi kya h?mujhe ignore kar rahi thi mujhe...manik malhotra ko...dost kya mil gaya mujhe dhul gai...muud ke dekha bhi nai...aur kya bol rahi thi...mein isse bohat miss kar rahi thi...aur vo Abhi ...vbhi...what is his name...haa. Abhimanu vo tho meri nandu ko ese hug kar raha thhe jaise chodega hi nai...uski tho mein ..."he smiled evilly and went to niyonikas cabin...

"Niyonika I need to talk to u"manik said entering in to cabin and taking a sit with out permission...

"What ?do u want now,manik?"niyonika asked with out looking up...

""Ek naya ladka h ...abhimanu" but he was cutted by niyonika..

. "oh yeah ...abhimanu...manik pls use pareshan mat Karna...wo iss college ke trusty ka beta h ..."
"Tho mein kon hu"asked manik confused...
"Manik...I don't have full hold on this college...Mr singhania is a main trusty...he can do any thing with this college...he have gave me responsibility of this college...so don't spoil it..."she said angrily yet requesting him...

With out saying anything he walked out angrily ...when he saw nandini laughing her heart out due to abhimanus stupid jokes and antics...

His mind was blasting like a volcano ...he just wanted to hit abhi like anything...

But he controlled him self and went towards them...
"Hii nandini ...enjoying a lot wit ur FRIEND "he saidstressing the word ...friend...

"Manik...tum?kya hua ..."she asked with a smile...
"Miss murty I think hum pandit ke class ke liye late ho jaayege...we should go"he said trying to drag her with him away from abhimanu...

"Arre arre wait..."she said freeing from his grip...
"Abhi..bye and ya don't roam here and there
Or else tum gum ho jaoge...take care hmm.and yeah pick me at 2...OK"she said giving abhi a hug...

"Bachha h kya Jo gum jaayega...mujhe tho aise concern hoke nai bola Ki mein gum jaauga college mein"said manik to himself tighting his grip into punch and grinning his teeth...

"Ohh god I am not a kid baby doll...,I will pick u ok,...chal jaa varna u will be late..."said hugging her back...
"Bye "manik said and dragged nandu with him
"Kitna weird h he ladka manik"he said looking at maniks tactics...
Manik pulled nandu into practice room and started yelling"tum kud ko samjti kya ho...kya kar rahi this tum us abhimanu ke saat"

"Ahh manik u r hurting me"nandini said feeling his grip on her skin...
Manik realized it at left her...
"Manik wo mera dost h ...tho"
"Tho tho kya ...usse hug karne Ki zarurat kya thi...itna concern hone Ki kya zarurat thi...mere liye tho nai dekha tume aise mein"manik said angrily holding her again but making sure she is not hurt this time...nandini had tears in her eyes...when manik realized what he did...he was going to apologize ..but pandit entered and saw them like this...
"Ye kya ho raha h...manik tum se kitni bar bola h leave her alone...just get out from here I don't need u in this concert."pandit said angrily...
"Manan left each other and manik said "do what ever u want but I am not going anywhere"

"Oh really then I will be here when u will be out from concert ..."and he walked out...
Nandini just gave a look to manik and went away ...
Manik was thinking " why I have to do this things to her ...shit...manik"he was angry on himself
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PRECAP

pandit to replace manik...with abhi in fusion concert...

Sorry if u didn't like this part
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56
wow ...jealous manik .. Cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#57
awsome...pls continue soon...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#58
Great update... hopefully the MU between MANAN gets cleared soon...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59
jz read all d parts..all are awesome cont. soon😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#60
such an awesome ff
plzz continue soon

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