MANAN/KY2 FF HEART BEATS(part 6-page 11)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hii I am a silent reader of this forum...hope u like this story...


PART 1
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I am starting from Abhimanyu's entry but there are some changes... abhimanyu ki entry is after holi that means in hate track...and abhimanyu will have no feeling for mukthi...




Its night time ,nandini is in her room thinking about the beautiful movement with manik in holi party...
"Chal nandu soo jaa...varna manik ka pata nai par pandit ji mere sapne mein zarur aayenge vo bhi gusse wala muh lekar"said nandu to herself...

On other side ,
Manik was with fab 5 his bff...who were in total talli mood ...dancing and singing and to add more headache to his head there was navya also who was dancing with cabir ...

"I need some peace "said manik moving upstairs as he know who is the only person who can give him peace...HIS STAR... NANDINI...
He tried to call her as it was much needed for him to cool his head after this big mess in his own home...

TRING TRING TRING TRING
It rung...but no one picked the call...he tried again but of no use disappointed he rested his head on his pillow thinking that its her lap...



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NEXT MORNING:

nandini got up and got ready in a cudidar as she has to go to mandir with chachi..
She took her phone and checked it...
"OMG MANIK ...manik ke itne sare missed call ohh no nandu tu tho gai aaj..."

Nandu jaldi aa na ...phir college bhi Jana h tujhe "said chachi...
"Haa aai "said nandu..."manik ko baadmein baat karti hu "...

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HOPE U GUYS LIKE IT...


INDEX
PART 2-PAGE 2

PART 3a-PAGE 4
PART 3b-PAGE 5

PART 3C-page 6

PART 4-PAGE 8

Part 5-page 9

Part 6-page 11
Edited by sauju - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oh yes it's nice. You should continue!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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😛Oh nice ya.. Continue soon yar pls..😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow awsm start
loved it
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow...its awsome yaar...pls continue soon...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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AWESOME START...👏👏👏
Continue soon...😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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congo for ur new story. nice start. cont soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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THANKS FOR UR COMMENT'S GUYS...

Abhimanyu singhania:a full of life person...handsome , a big time flirt, love his sister Aisha a lot...lives in US...Nandus bff...has a soft corner for her...is coming to meet nandu from USA... Will join SPACE academy

PS:abhimanyu doesn't have cancer...and he won't fall for mukti...he love nandini a lot...



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PART 2

Nandu entered the mandir with chachi...she prayed for all important people in her life Manik cabir navya dhruv chacha chachi rishab ams even for alya and mukti...and went outside in front of bargad ka tree leaving chachi behind in mandir ...her eyes were close...and a tall figure stared at her...she had a cute smile on her face which brought a smile on that tall mans face...she opened her eye and tried to turn but somebody holded her bupatta she turned to find it stuck in a plant she smiled again and removed it in that process her jumka fell ...she didnt noticed it so she went to find chachi...
The Good looking man picked it and went out of mandir smiling...
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Nandu reached home till 7:30...and on the other hand our cute sons munda was sleeping on his stomach ...when he heared a loud ring...he picked it up...still sleeping he started talking..
M: itni raat ko who is it?(sleepy tone)
N:my monster its me...aur abhi raat nai subha ke 7:30 ho rahe h...panditji Ki class h 9 baaje. Jaldi utho...and get ready and reach there on time ...bye ...(in one breath )
M:arre suno baba..cut kar diya ...mera bhoot is mein aa gaya h...
He said smiling "subha subha tumhari aawaj suni tho aaj din accha jaayega..."
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Tring tring ...
Abhimanyu picked the call ...
Abhi:arre Aisha u...how are u soona
Aisha:I am fine ...aap Bangalore pohac gaai...
Abhi:arre pagal mein Mumbai mein hu
Aisha: par wo Bangalore mein thi naa...
Abhi:amms ko call kiya tha tab pata chala wo Mumbai mein h tho address lekar mein bhi waha pohac tho gaya ..phir zoor se door bajaya aur chillaya 'surprise' par rishab ne door khola aur darr gaya mujhe dekh kar mujhe cacha ise ghoor rahe the jaise zombie dekh liya ho...hmm(dramatically)
Aisha:app tho ho hi zombie...phir kya hua nandu se mile ...reaction kya that uska bolo na
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Abhi:chup pagal...wo chachi ke saath mandir gai thi meine chachu aur rishab ko bola ussa naa batane ko Ki mein yaha hu rishab bohat kush h mujhe dekh kar ..And nandu usse surprise dunga mein Any way bye soona unpacking karni h...aur space academy mein admission le li Maine how's it...ha ha
Aisha: OK aap ko joo Karna h Karo..bye aur mujhe paagal matt bolo ...bye...
Abhi:bye love u...
He cuts the call and take the jumkha in his hand...and said "I am coming princess "...
FLASHBACK
Abhi told chacha and rishab to not tell nandu about him being here...then he to went to near by mandir just to see her and there she was looking like a angel... She turned and the jumka fell and abhi picked it...
Flashback ends...
...to be continued...
PS:abhimanyu live in his own mansion in Mumbai and his father is a co-trusty of space ...that's why he get admission in space...
It was little long update...sorry...eggs, chapple welcomed
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow manik had competition
oops now things will surely heat up
our monster will not share.
please do continue
bye sumi
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hehe.. Gosh it ws nt really l'on u knw.
I loved the prt.. Seems like everything's ok b/w manan..
Abhi will add sparks😆

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