'I Love Manik'---OS based on EPI-135---Part 3 on pg6 updated

So guys I m back with my one shot...but before that plz tell me that guys I hope I m not taking out the actual spice of next episode by predicting or my one shot based on Precaps n twists

So this OS is after last nyt episode where Nandu realizes her Love for Manik,Manik cudn't cum out of Farm house...n precap says Cabir missing...

Everyone is worried that Nandini will walk away again...but I don't think so...

N this OS is my take on this whole situation...

Part 1

Nandini stood there realizing as Khurana left...

Nandini recollects every moment she spent with Manik:I Love Manik...I Love Manik...L...Love Manik...

Suddenly she gets disturbed with a msg ---It was Manik...:..."I m sorry I ll b a bit late,plz don't go"

Nandini stays in dilemma n recollects what Mr.Khurana said ..."Fab5's carrier will cum crashing down,U love him enough that u can walk away"

Nandini doesn't reply to Manik's msg n stays there for a while...n then decides to leave from there

Nandini:I have to stay away from Manik till the album is released...yes ...i have to leave now before Manik cums here...I cant let him lose this album...

Nandini leaves the place...

After some time Manik reaches there n finds no one...he thinks that she myt have left ...he stays there for some time n calls her but she dint take the call...Manik thinks that she got really angry

Manik:She is angry damn...morning only she was angry n crying bcz she got late for workshop that too bcz of me n now I m late...n gets angry on himself...

Manik stays there for sometime ...meanwhile Watchman cums to him an asks him...

Watchman:Saab...aap kisika wait kar rahe ho...

Manik:Haa...nahi woh shayad aake chali gayi...main late hogaya

Watchman:Haa saab ...ek pyarisi ladki aayi toh thi ...koi aadmi aaya tha usne uss ladki se baat ki aur chala gaya lagbhag 50 saal ka tha ...uske baad bhi bohat der tak ruki thi woh ladki phir achanak usne apna phone dekha aur chali gayi

Manik showed Nandini's pic to watchman:Kya ye ladki thi...

Watchman:Haa saab yahi ladki thi...

Manik:Thanq...

Watchman leaves from there...Manik to himself...God...Manik u r late...again u hurt her...U r impossible Manik...

Manik leaves from there...n reaches farm house...n spots Mr.Khurana talking to Chudail...

Manik comes near n hears Mr.Khurana saying to Chudail:So I have done my work ...now its ur turn...enjoy ur life...

Manik just ignores that n asks him:Mr.Khurana aap yaha...

Mr.Khurana:Y cant I cum to meet my daughter...

Manik:No I dint mean that...

Mr.Khurana:Tum batao...tum kahi gaye the...aise hi ghumte rahoge ya Practice bhi karoge

Manik:Nahi ek important appointment tha but

Mr.Khurana:But...what...

Manik:Nothing...I m tired so I ll take leave u continue

Mr.Khurana understands that his plan worked ...n Nandini walked away

Manik leaves from there...As soon as Manik enters the house Mr.Khurana greets his daughter

Mr.Khurana:So see...i have done my work ...that too neat n clean...u were taking stress unnecessarily

Chudail:Thanq Dad...I love u so much...

At Nandini's place

Nandini was still in dilemma that what shud she do now...n thinks I shud inform Cabir

Nandini tries calling but phone goes switched off...n decides to tell next day bcz he myt b in bar as its his first day of job n its not good to tell him now

Next Morning...everyone gets ready for practice...Manik cums n asks Cabir to everyone

But no one knows where is he...Manik tries calling Cabir but phone goes Switched off...

Manik says to everyone lets split n search him...

Dhruv search go to college, Aliya go to his place ask his mom n Mukti go to his new flat...

I ll goto the bar...may b he is still there only

Manik then thinks gets worried I have to meet Nandini also...I just hope she forgives me...for last night

Dhruv cums to college n Nandini -Navya spots him...

Nandini calls out Dhruv's name:Dhruv...kya baat hai Y r u looking worried...

Dhruv:Woh...Cabir nahi milraha...he went for his job last nyt but he dint cum back aur uska cell bhi off hai

Nandini in her thoughts...thats y his phone was off...I just hope he is fine

Navya:Par humne toh nahi dekha usko...

Dhruv :theek hai main bahar bhi sabse puchta hun

Mukti at his new flat doesn't find him...

Aliya at Cabir's mom...but there also she dint find him...

Manik cums to Bar...n enquires with Manager...

Manik:Woh main Cabir keliye aaya tha main uska dosth hun...woh uska yaha first day tha job pe kal as a bar tender...who abtak ghar nahi aaya aur uska phone bhi off jaraha hai

Manager:Woh...aaya toh tha par maine usko nikaal diya...

Manik:Nikaal diya matlab...kyu nikaal diya...

Manager:Kamaal hai meri marzi...

Manik:Aise kaise nikaal sakte ho...

Manager:Kya musibat hai...pehle uski maa aati hai aur hungama karke jaati ki uske beta yaha bar tender ki naukri nahi karega,Beta aata hai job karne...ab jab maine nikaal diya toh ...uska dosth aake puhta hai kyu nikala...

Manik:Aunty yaha...

Manager:Bohat hungama karke gayi hai...toh main kaise du use naukri...

Manik gets angry n holds his collar:Abhi kaha hai woh...

Manager:Yaha par hi tha...bohat peeli usne...bar band honeka time hogaya tha toh humne use jaane ko kaha...aur ab woh kaha gaya mujhe nahi pata...

Manik leaves manager n heads out of the bar to search Cabir in anger...

As he cums out...another bar tender ums behind Manik...

Bar tender:Sir...sir...woh aapka dosth waha gali me...

Manik:Gali me kaha...

Bar Tender:Woh usne bohat peeli thi aur bahar nikalne ke baad kuch ladko se jhagda bhi kiya usne...

Manik:What ...abhi kaha hai woh...

Bar Tender:Saab...aaj subah bhi wahi pada tha who...nashe me...chaliye main dikhata hun

Manik:Haa chalo...

Manik n Bar Tender rushes to that lane...

Manik finds Cabir in very bad condition near a dust bin

Part 2--pg4-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/118997834

Part 3--Pg 6-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/119015191

wow...this so awesome Kritika...you are just the best...

krits uh knw i love uh ryt n ur predictions too... but i seriously dint like one thing n dat was my cabira lying near dustbin.. i really dont want to see it ever oka... i know dey gonna show him in his worse condition... but not dustbin mannn... 😭

Originally posted by: navi04vet

Kitty...update sooon

yup i ll try to do it today only

Originally posted by: MaanManiac

yayieee ... I was waiting for OS based yesterday's precap...

It's awesome...I wish Show mw bhi aisa ho...

Continue soon..

Thanq...hope so...but CV's will surprise us for sure

Originally posted by: manan_flab

krits uh knw i love uh ryt n ur predictions too... but i seriously dint like one thing n dat was my cabira lying near dustbin.. i really dont want to see it ever oka... i know dey gonna show him in his worse condition... but not dustbin mannn... 😭

Love u too Simmi🤗

kya kare yaar...thoda harsh toh dikhana padega na...n pata nahi CV's kya dikhayenge...ye dekhkar tune aisa bola toh shayad next part padke gali degi mujhe...waise kahani me twist hai wait n watch😉

This is really good !!

Waaoo kriti... it was amazing.. update soon

Originally posted by: sal_aphrodite

This is really good !!

But as per the spoiler i feel something really bad might happen to Cabir..pata nai Mujhe lag raha hai that he might get into prostitution .😭

Just an opinion ,no bashing please !

Cant say yaar cv's can show anything... not to worry... no one will bash...

i was toh thinking ki he myt b doing something like akshay n john did in Desi Boyz...