'I Love Manik'---OS based on EPI-135---Part 3 on pg6 updated - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome... I hope you will show their date with detailed info... neways, Continue soon..
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Originally posted by: manan58

Arre Wah.. It's vry nice

Thanq😊
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Originally posted by: Akshi0019

Waaoo kriti... it was amazing.. update soon

Originally posted by: -Zoey-

Awesome... I hope you will show their date with detailed info... neways, Continue soon..


Thanq somuch
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow kritika nicely writtenšŸ‘...waiting 4 d next part...update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Guys did u liked or not...bcz of TB video r u disappointed with my OS that i dint show there Date part...bcz i dint see proper response

plz do like n comment

Part 2

Manik n Bar Tender rushes to that lane...

Manik finds Cabir in very bad condition near a dust bin...Cabir puked everywhere bcz he was badly drunk...n was still not in his senses...n was hurt a little bcz of fight...his clothes were toned and was lying on the floor

Manik gets shock seeing Cabir in that condition

Manik takes Cabir into the car with the help of Bar Tender n thank him for his help

Manik msgs Fab5 that he found Cabir...n don't panic but just cum to City hospital

Aliya ,Mukti receives msgs n gets worried...both rushes to hospital from their respective places

Dhruv was about to leave after talking to Nandini n Navya but he gets the msg too...n says hospital

Nandini n Navya gets shocked...Nandini...asks Dhruv:...Dhruv what happened kiska msg hai

Dhruv:Manik ka...he has taken Cabir to hospital

Nandini:What...

Dhruv :I have to rush to the hospital

Nandini:Wait we ll also cum

Navya:Haa chalo...

Dhruv :Fine...chalo

Manik admits Cabir in the hospital...n doctor examines him n informs Manik

Manik:Doctor...how is he now

Doctor:He is fine now...uska dressing kardiya hai aur usko injection toh dediya hai but alcohol effect utarne me waqt lagega...as he consumed it beyond limit...n as soon as he gets up u can take him home

Manik:Thanq Doctor

Everyone reaches there...Manik feels relieved when he Nandini also ...

Mukti:Manik...Cabir kaha hai...n how is he...

Manik:Don't worry he is fine...but behosh hai...

Dhruv:Kaha mila woh...at the Bar?

Manik:Nahi...

Aliya:Then...how did u find him

Manik:Dustbin ke paae...

Everyone says at a time:What...

Mukti :Manik ye tu kya bolraha hai...

Manik narrates them ...everything he saw n Cabir's condition n everything abt how his mother created scene at bar n he lost his job n all

Nandini gets a shock n starts thinking that now she cant tell anything to Cabir also...

Nurse cums out n tells:Unko hosh aagaya ...

Everyone rushes into the room...n looks at Cabir...

Cabir was in tears...which made everyone go mad at him more...

Manik:Cabir...how can u do this to us...do u have any idea what v all went through all this time

Mukti:Guys aaj confirm hogaya hai ki ye sach me pagal hogaya...

Aliya:Cabir...why did u do this...

Dhruv:Cabir v dint expect this from u...

Nandini finally interferes in between...:Cabir can u tell me what happened...

Navya:Nandini...ye kya puchrahi ho ...abhi Manik ne bataya na kya hua...

Nandini:Nahi Navya...i want to listen it from Cabir...

Manik gets angry:Nandini ...r u out of ur mind...

Cabir finally speaks out before Manik finishes:He tells everything like how he was insulted at the Bar because of his Mom n all...wahi sochte sochte mujhe pata hi nahi chala maine kitni peeli...

Nandini interrupts before he finishes:Bas itni si baat...just bcz u lost ur job n bcz of ur mothers harsh words u landed up urself in the hospital...she is ur mother Cabir...it ll take time for her to understand u n the whole situation ...but it doesn't mean that u ll give up...

U ppl announced that u ll soon cut an album with Q-label that too infront of ur mother n whole college...then what happened where is that confidence gone...just u lost one chance u have done this to urself...i thought u r cool n calm ...understands the situation n flows with it but no I was wrong...for the small thing u have reacted like this n dint even think that u hv target to achieve ...which was much more important than this job...ur album...in this condition how u ll complete that...

Manik gets angry:Nandini ...will u plz ...Mukti interrupts Manik...

Mukti:Nahi Manik...she is right...if v react to small things like this then how we ll handle big problems...

Dhruv:I second that...

Navya:Do din pehle tum Hume himmat derahe the na Cabir...toh aaj kya hua...tum apni himmat kho baithe...

Aliya:Guys plz...try to understand him also...

Mukti:Kya samjhe Aliya ...u think he did right...

Mukti to Cabir:Tu bata ...ek job hi toh gayi hai...puri duniya toh khatam nahi hui...

Cabir:I m sorry guys...I m really sorry...I wasn't thinking straight...

Manik:Shut up Cabir...par tujhe maara kisne...

Cabir:I don't know man...mujhe yaad nahi...par haa jaise hi bahar nikla some ppl suddenly started hitting me...

Manik:What...koi aise hi kyu marega

Mukti:Zaroor isne Nashe me kuch kiya hoga...use kuh yaad hi nahi toh...

Cabir :May be...

Navya :Nandini hume chalna chahiye

Nandini:Hmm...n tells everyone...K Cabir...now that u r fine we ll make a move ...but I m sorry If I sounded harsh or if u felt that I gave lecture n all...but I said what I felt...

Cabir:No...actually I m obsessed with hospital...

Everyone smiles ...

Mukti:Tu kabhi nahi sudrega...

Nandini n Navya smiles...n leaves saying Bye...

Manik cums running behind Nandini...

Manik:Nandini ...i m sorry that...

Nandini interrupts him: Manik actually I wanted to tell u something ...

Nandini gets interrupted by a call...name flashing Khurana...Nandini excuses herself from Navya n Manik ...n attend the call

Nandini:Hello...

Khurana:I have ur back...mere aadmi tumhare upar nazar rakhe hue hai ...so don't u dare to tell anything to Manik...I thought till now u must have understood what happened with Cabir...I can do anything to get Manik for my daughter so its upto u

Nandini:What...matlab

Khurana:Poor girl abtak samaj nahi aaya ki Cabir par attack kisne kiya

Nandini:Sir...plz Y don't u understand this is not correct...

Khurana:U r no one to tell me that...just do what I said ...ur one wrong step can do harm to anyone n uts the call

Nandini gets worried n doesn't understand what to say to Manik...she was in dilemma that how to inform him

Navya n Manik don't know what to talk...so Navya breaks the silence...

Navya:Toh tumhari pehli date kaisi thi...before Manik can answer Nandini interrupts...

Nandini:Chalo Navya chalte hai...

Manik:But Nandini...

Nandini:Sorry Manik that I cudn't cum last nyt...n leaves from there taking along with Navya

After coming out of Hospital...Navya stops Nandini...

Navya:Nandini tumne Manik se jhooth kyu bola...tum toh gayi thi na...

Nandini:Navya abhi main tumhe kuch nahi bata sakti chalo yaha se

Manik was shocked:Nandini ne mujhse jhooth kyu bola... she came last nyt n I was late

Cabir switches on his cell n sees somany missed calls from Nandini whih was last nyt...n a msg which says:"Need to talk to u ,its urgent"

Manik enter the room ...n Cabir hides his phone...which Manik notices...but tries to avoid as if he dint notice

Manik:Lets go guys...he got discharge...guys I ll drop u guys at farm house n have some work to finish

Manik reaches that place where he planned there date...

Manik asks that watchman again:Suno tumne kal kaha tha na ki yeh ladki aayi thi...

Watchman:Haa saab ...in madam ne mujhse address pucha tha isiliye hume pakka yaad hai

Manik:Kitne der tak thi yaha...

Watchman:Sir ,jaise maine kaha tha...ek 50saal ka aadmi aaya tha milne...suit pehne hua tha,aur chasma bhi lagaya...lambi gadi me...

Manik:Tumne suna usne kya kaha

Watchman:Suna toh nahi sir,par yaha se dekh raha tha kyunki madam akeli thi toh ...who madam se kuch bolraha tha...aur ek kagaz jaisa kuch tha usse madam ko dikhakar jala diya...hume samaj nahi aaya...par haa sir...jaise who chale gaye madam udas hogayi aur rorahi thi...fir kuch der baad madam bhi chali gayi...

Manik:Jalaya...kaha...

Watchman takes him to the place where Khurana burnt the pic...

Manik:Par ye toh pura jalgaya...n starts thinking who cud b this uncle...n what he said to Nandu...y she was crying...i have to talk to her,she is definitely hiding something bcz she lied that she had not cum here

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I ll update next part as soon as i complete it


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Posted: 10 years ago
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[>:D<] loved the updates!!!!!! Plz update fast!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Super yar ...nice update...waiting to see how the story unfolds...
Thanks
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Originally posted by: akiraroy

wow kritika nicely writtenšŸ‘...waiting 4 d next part...update soon...

Thanq...updated also have a look
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved the second part too! Don't worry Yaar, ab jo show mein ho wohi likhna zaroori toh hai nahin...this is also very interesting.
Manik also a detective now 🤣

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