'I Love Manik'---OS based on EPI-135---Part 3 on pg6 updated - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: Arshirox97

🤗 loved the updates!!!!!! Plz update fast!

Will sure update in the morning
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: shravz6

Super yar ...nice update...waiting to see how the story unfolds...

Thanks

thanq for liking it
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: PaNi-manan

awesome...waiting for next update

thanq will update tmrw itself
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
lovely update..
pls update the next part soon..:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
amazing written ...kash show bhe ase hote we get to the end soo fast ..but well written and loved it .. waiting for the next part 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ribelle_IshRa

Loved the second part too! Don't worry Yaar, ab jo show mein ho wohi likhna zaroori toh hai nahin...this is also very interesting.
Manik also a detective now 🤣

no actually i meant to say is...did I depress u ppl by not giving a date seq...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Humzy

awsm update

loved it
continue soon

Thanq...will update now
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Originally posted by: sana.1990

amazing written ...kash show bhe ase hote we get to the end soo fast ..but well written and loved it .. waiting for the next part 😊

Hope so
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29

Dint find good response to this OS...i think this u dint like guys

Part3

On the other side Navya n Nandini reaches Nandu's place

Navya:Nandini ab...bataogi kya hua hai...tumne Manik se jhooth kyu bola...

Nandini:Navya...Fab5 bohat badi problem me hai...Chudail psycho hai aur Manik se obsessed hai...aur uske dad use psychiatrist ke paas lejane ke bajaye mujhe blackmail kar rahe hai...ki main Manik se dur rahu

Navya:Ye tum kya kehrahi ho...

Nandini:Haa Navya...unki nazar hai mujpar...kal woh waha aaye the...mujhse kaha ki agar main Manik se pyar karti ho toh walk away...orelse Fab5 will not get this album

Navya:Lekin tumhe Manik ko batana chahiye tha

Nandini:Haa Navya...hospital me bhi koi mujhe follow kar raha tha...isliye mujhe Manik se jhooth bolna pada...Cabir ke upar attack bhi Mr.Khurana ne hi karwaya hai

Navya:Kya...par kyu

Nandini:Mujhe warn karne keliye ki who kuch bhi karsakte hai aur shayad isliye kyunki sirf Cabir Mere aur Manik bare jaanta hai aur ...shayad unko pata chalgaya ki Cabir ko iss album ki zyada zaroorat hai

On the other hand as soon as everyone leaves Cabir tries to Call Nandu...but she cuts the call

Nandini:Cabir ka call aaraha hai...

Navya:Abhi kya karenge...

Nandini:Main usse baat nahi karsakti...kyunki unhone sab par nazar rakhe hue hai...dont know how but ...someone is spying everyone

Navya:Usse Msg kardo...koi nahi samjhega

Nandini:Good Idea...Nandini starts typing msg to Cabir...

"Read this msg very calmly...dont react to it...n plz plz all of u I mean all five of u stay together...dont leave alone anyone...if u r at Farm house then plz take care n be cautious"

"Cabir we r completely trapped by Mr.Khurana...he was the one who attacked you n he blackmailed me to stay away from Manik or else he ll drop the Album"

"I was abt to tell to Manik but at the same time Mr.Khurana called n said that he is spying me n he knows my every move so I cudn't tell to Manik"

"Plz some how u ppl finish ur songs n move from there ASAP n plz behave normally as if u don't know anything"

Cabir understands the situation... ...n replies to Nandini

"Don't panic,I ll handle this"

He behaves normally ...he closes his eyes n slowly tries to look around his room ...then he finds Camera in the corner of the room

N starts thinking how to get out of this farm house...

Meanwhile Manik rushes into the room shouting...Cabir...Cabir...

Manik:Cabir...sach bata kya chal raha hai...woh Nan...Cabir interrupts before Manik takes Nandini's name...n starts shouting like he was in pain...

As soon as Manik bends down towards Cabir...

Cabir murmurs in his ears:Hume abhi ke abhi yaha se nikalna hoga sabko leke...this place is dangerous...

Manik looks at Cabir shockingly...

Cabir starts shouting again...everyone rushes in...along with Chudail...

Manik:Guys I think we have to take him to hospital...n takes everyone out of farm house...

Manik to Chudail:We ll b back...Chudail nods head in yes

They sit in car n drives off from there...

Cabir stops shouting...everyone gets shocked except Manik...

Cabir:Manik don't stop the car n don't even speed down...bcz we r been trapped...

Everyone get shocked again...

Cabir :Haa guys Farm house me charo taraf Cameras lage hai...aur mujhpe jo attack hua who bhi khurana ne karwaya...I don't think he ll give any album to us...His daughter is obsessed with Manik that's it

Manik in Shock :What...r u kidding me Cabir...

Cabir:No I m not...

On the other hand at Nandini's place...

Navya:Theeke hai fir hum chalte hai Nandini...tum apna khayal rakhna...

Nandini:k Navya...tum bhi...

As soon as Navya cums out of the house she mets with an minor accident...

Nandini gets a call again from Khurana...tumhe apni friend ko akela nahi jaane dena chahiye tha...Nandini gets a shock n runs behind Navya...

Navya was surrounded by many ppl...Nandini pushes everyone n helps Navya...

Nandini again gets a call from Khurana...i hope tumne apni friend ko kuch nahi bataya...ye sirf ek trailor tha...ye haadsa bada bhi hosakta tha...n uts the call

Nandini takes auto n rushes to hospital...n msgs Cabir "Khurana ne Navya ko bhi maarne ki koshish ki we r heading to City hospital,it was a minor accident don't panic...but plz think abt something for Album"

Cabir receives msg...:"Shit ab toh hospital jaana hi padega"

Manik:Kya hua sach me dard horaha hai kya

Cabir :Navya is in hospital...she met with an accident

Everyone rushes to the hospital...as soon as everyone enters the room Cabir slowly hands over the cell to Manik n asks him to read Nandini's msgs

Manik reads all the msgs n understands that y she lied to him ...n gets furious abt Khurana.

Mukti:Navya tum theek ho...Nandini doctor ne kya kaha...baby theek toh hai na...

Nandini:haa mukti she is fine...but tumlog sab yaha...

Cabir interrupts:Haa woh nikalna pada waha se...

Nandini:But Album

Manik looks at her in anger...

Nandini gets shocked:Guys what happened any problem

Manik replies :No no problem

Manik plans to handle this in his way...creates a grp on whatsapp...adding Nandini n Cabir...

N msgs them...from now we ll play the game...we have to behave normally...n we ll follow what he wants...Nandini n Cabir agrees to him

Manik to everyone:Lets go guys we ll complete rest of the practice at college...

Manik:Nandini u take Navya home n stay together

Fab5 goes to College n NavNi goes to her place...

Manik msgs Chudail that they ll not b able to come back n will continue practicing at college n she can join us at college itself...

Everyone in college...along with Chudail...they complete the rest of the songs till evening

Manik starts behaving very nicely with Chudail so that she believes him n her father too ...

Next morning they records the song n hands over to Chudail n Mr.Khurana

As soon as Nandini passes from there...Manik gives a angry look to Nandini

Khurana notices that they r not even looking at each other...

Rest of the Fab5 leaves from there leaving Khurana,Chudail n Manik

As per Manik's plan...Khurana stopped Spying them...n was believing him

Manik asks permission to take Chudail out for a dinner date...

Mr.Khurana n Chudail both of them gets very happy...

N in happiness Khurana decides that he ll launch the album tmrw only...

Manik takes Chudail to dinner but winds up early...

Next Morning...Cabir,Nandini n Manik meet at college early...to discuss the rest of the plan which is to b executed in the evening after the launch...

Everything was prepared for the launch...Whole press was present there to cover the event...

Nyonika,Principle,Fab5...Navya,Nandini n some of the other students...

Finally Khurana launches the album n Fab5...but his plan was not ended there...He announces that Chudail n Manik r future couples n will definitely tie knot in future...

Everyone gets a shock...n Nyonika too...

Nandini gets a shock of her life...n her tears starts running down...Somehow She moves away from there n Navya follows her

Mukti,Aliya n Dhruv gets up from there in shock...

Nyonika tries to talk to Khurana but he asks Manik to say some words...

Manik takes the mic...n starts praising Khurana n his daughter ...

Manik:Mr:Khurana U have done a lot for us...I mean to me n my friends...n ur daughter too...like u r daughter was so obsessed with me that u gifted me this Album as a Charity or I shud say a payment to stay sticked to ur daughter...

Khurana n others also gets confused...

Othe other side Nandini Spots police walking into the audi along with a lady who was at farm house

N she follows behind them into the audi

Manik:Don't b confused Mr.Khurana...n guys...I m right Mr.Khurana's beloved daughter is a psychic patient who was obsessed with me n tried all possible ways to trap me...Mr.Khurana offered us album n his daughter Invited me n fab5 to her farm house,setup cameras,spiked my drink,attacked my friend...n what not...

Mr.Khurana gets up:R u mad...whats wrong with u...

Manik:Calm down Mr.Khurana...i have a gift for u...N calls out Inspector

Inspector cums on to stage along with Nupur aunty...

Flashback:

After planning everything...on the launch day ...Manik n Cabir goes to Nupur the so called maid cum nurse along with police n makes her arrest

Flashback finished

Manik:So Mr.Khurana...this is ur gift...Nupur Aunty urf maid urf Nurse what shud I call u...never mind...so wud u like to do the honor

Nupur aunty spits the truth infront of media n everyone...Police arrests Mr.Khurana n his Daughter along with Nupur Aunty...

So Fab5 were already famous because they were launched infront of media...Everyone leaves from there...happily

Manik msgs Nandini..."Need to meet u ,its urgent"...n sends the address...

Nandini rushes to that places n finds Manik with a surprise...

Nandini:For a while I thought I lost u Manik

Manik:I Cant afford to lose u again Nandini...

Nandini hugs him passionately...Manik holds her tight...

Nandini :I ll b with u...Hamesha...I cant stay away from u...n says in her heart ...I love u Manik...I love u...

Manik replies : Me too...

She cudnt say him those three words but he suddenly replies "Me too" which makes her happy bcz

Fireflies starts flying n glowing all over around them...looking at them Nandini feels more happy n thinks...He too Loves me...

Manik notices Nandu's smiling face n kisses her forehead...n both hug eachother

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This OS ends here...

Do reply plz...if u liked or not

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Posted: 10 years ago
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U read my mind...I have a same feeling that manik will play along with soha and trap her as soon as they are launched. ...
Super os appreciate ur work da...
Thanks a lot

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