'MaNan's Fear'--Part 32 on pg 111updtd on 26th feb - Page 14

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Posted: 10 years ago
MaNan's Fear----Part 5

Recap:

Manik asks Abhi to stay with Nandini n guard her.

Goons try to kidnap Nandini but Abhi saves...

Nandini gets a sprain in her leg but Manik is unaware of the incident

Next Morning

Manik gets up early n tries calling Nandini but her phone was going switched off...n last location was shown as at her home...

Cabir wakes up with a call...with Navya's name flashing

Cabir:Why Navya is calling me... [n gets worried]...hope Nandini is Fine

Navya:Hello...Cabir...hum Navya bolrahe hai

Cabir:Haa ...bolo Navya...mujhe kaise call

Navya:Woh hume...Manik ko call karne ki himmat nahi thi toh socha tumse keh de...

Cabir:Par hua kya

Navya:Nandini ne hume batane se mana kiya hai par humne socha tumhe batade...toh fir shayad shaanti se tum Manik ko samjha doge

Cabir:Navya tum mujhe dara rahi ho...pehle batao kya hua baki main sambhal lunga...

Navya:Woh...woh kal...Nandini ko kisine kidnap karne ki koshish ki...par par darne ki koi baat nahi...Abhi ne aake Nandini ko bachaliya...hum bhi uske saath hi the...isiliye woh log Nandini ko nahi leja paye...[Explains him in detail what happened at college]

Cabir:What the hell...Manik ka darr sahi tha

Navya:Humne pehle hi Nandini ke baare me Manik ko ek baar jhooth bolke galti ki...ab dobara nahi karsakte...Par ab woh theek hai...ghar par hai...bas pair me moch aayi hai

Cabir:Thank God...theek hai... main dekhta hun kya karna hai

Navya:Maine Nandini ka phone off kardiya tha ghabrahat me...kyunki woh sorahi thi aur agar Manik ka call aata toh hum kuch bol nahi paate darr ke mare...isiliye...

Cabir:Theeke...Main Manik ke paas jaata hun woh pareshaan hoga...agar uska call nahi laga toh

Navya:Theek hai...


Nandini's place...

Navya:Nandini hum college jaate hai...tum apna khayal rakhna...koi bhi problem ho hume call karna...

Nandini:K Navya...

Nandini switches on her phone n as soon as she switches on...she gets call from Manik

Nandini...talks happily so that Manik doesn't get any glimpse of what happened

Nandini:Hello...Manik good mrng...So early today

Manik:Why ur cell was Off...

Nandini:I think bcz of low battery...but is this the way to greet early mrng

Manik:Listen...I m not in a mood to joke around...I cudn't talk to u last nyt so I was worried that's it

Nandini:Why u ppl r so worried n worked up I don't understand...what happened will u tell me

Manik:Nothing ...it s just I m tired...

Nandini:No there is something wrong Manik...here Navya n Abhi r also tensed n r not leaving me alone even at home...what u said to Abhi yesterday...

Manik:Nandini ...u trust me na...then plz do what Abhi says...n don't step out plz...

Nandini:K...but promise me u ll tell me as u cum back

Manik:Yes I will...

Meanwhile Cabir rushes to Manik...but Manik stops him bcz he was on call n sighs him that its Nandini

Cabir feels relieved that he is talking to her but gets scared that...did she tell anything abt yesterday...I shud tell Manik or shall I wait for Nandini to tell...

Manik cuts the call n speaks to Cabir...

Manik:Tu itni jaldi

Cabir is in his thoughts n doest listen to Manik...

Manik:Cabir...r u thr...subah subah kaha khoya hai

Cabir comes to his senses:Haa ...kuch nahi ...How is Nandini...

Manik:Ya she is fine...uska phone off that toh I was worried...but she is fine

Cabir:Ya I know

Manik:I know ...i know what...

Cabir:Yahi ki uska phone off tha...woh Navya ka call aaya tha...ki uska phone off hai aur main tujhe inform kardu

Manik:K...chal...fresh up hoke lets practice...we have to wind up ASAP n go back

Manik leaves from there

Cabir:Haa k...but Cabir thinks that am I doing right thing by hiding n goes to get ready

Manik in front of mirror thinks:Why Navya called Cabir...that too just to say Nandini's cell is off

On the other side Cabir decides that he has to tell everything to Manik...he cant repeat the same mistake...n reaches Manik's room

Cabir:Manik...wanna tell u something

Manik:Bol Navya ne call kyu kiya

Cabir:Woh...kal Nandini ko kisine kidnap karne ki koshish ki...n narrated everything what Navya said...

Manik:R u mad Cabir...u r telling me now...

Cabir:She is fine...n Abhi was with her

Manik burst out of anger :Cabir...Abhi ko maine hi kal phone pe kaha tha ki uske saath rahe...do u have any brains...y dint u tell me...soch agar woh nahi rukta toh kya hota...

Cabir:Woh...woh...She got her leg sprained itseems

Manik:What...she again lied me...i m not gonna forgive her for this...

Cabir:Manik...chill...she really want us to complete this album may b that's y she dint tell...

Manik:Cabir...i know...she understands all of us more than us...but now I ll have to leave...

Cabir:K...u go ...but plz control ur anger...i ll handle everything here

Manik:Main gadi bhejta hun...tu inko lekar aaja...boldena Nyonika ne urgency me bulaya...n don't worry we ll cut this album at any cost...but we ll continue the practice in college

Cabir:Yes...for sure

Manik leaves from there...n Cabir goes to tell everyone that Manik has left n they ll have to rush to clg as he sends the car...but while passing through the rooms Cabir hears Chudail screaming at someone on the phone...

Chudail on call:Don't u understand...this was the golden opportunity...i don't know what u ll do...finish the work within this two days...or else main tumhe chodungi nahi

Cabir feels fishy...as he hears the whole convo hiding near the door

Chudail throws the phone on bed n leaves the room in anger

Cabir enters the room as soon as she leaves the room he tries to check the phone num dialed before the phone gets locked...

In hurry he opens the gallery n finds the pic of him of new year eve where he was checking MaNan's location on cell where he was suppose to drop the spare dress

Cabir gets shocked n suddenly cums into senses n checks the last dialed n incoming nums n leave the room...

Cabir then goes to others n to asks them to get ready bcz they had to leave

On other side...Manik reaches Nandini's home as fast as he can...excuses himself from Chachi n reaches Nandini's room where she was struggling with her leg n tries to get up from the bed...Manik runs n lifts her up in his arms...

Nandini gets shocked seeing Manik...bcz just few hrs back she talked to him n now he is here

Precap:

Manik informs Nandini that someone is trying to harm her.

Nandini asks Manik to stay away.

Manik gets angry and leaves the place

Cabir tells Manik who is behind the incidents

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Come up with suggestions
As Zoya suggested for precap...so thought to add recap aslo
so wud like to here if u want any changes...
guys sorry if i miss anyone sending PM's

Edited by kresham - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
oh finally cabir knows. Nw what they r going to do with soha. oh I m so excited. update soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
omggg juz read it...thnx for pm dear..i juz luved it..:-) d whole thing...sry i dnt come online though..lil buzy wid studies..but still cant miss out ur posts..missing u all ..mananflab aka simmi or vice versa..keep us alive by LU'S yr..sue...arathim..dushtu..n evryone..will reply on all posts once i come..:-) :-) :-) keep up d gud work kritika:-)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update but felt it was short or it was that gud that it felt gt over soon... Nyways continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: apardh_ba

oh finally cabir knows. Nw what they r going to do with soha. oh I m so excited. update soon.

They r too smart to handle her
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetniks

omggg juz read it...thnx for pm dear..i juz luved it..:-) d whole thing...sry i dnt come online though..lil buzy wid studies..but still cant miss out ur posts..missing u all ..mananflab aka simmi or vice versa..keep us alive by LU'S yr..sue...arathim..dushtu..n evryone..will reply on all posts once i come..:-) :-) :-) keep up d gud work kritika:-)

Thanq on behalf of everyone...that u like our posts
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: appy111

Lovely update but felt it was short or it was that gud that it felt gt over soon... Nyways continue soon

I manage the words Appy to b balanced in every part n sometimes keeping a twist in end makes things short or lengthy ...so hope u understand...but still i ll try to make it some what big
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Posted: 10 years ago
awsm update
loved it
precap sounds interesting
continue soon
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Awesome update... Can't wait for the next now
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Posted: 10 years ago
Woow very nice update
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