16+ MaNan Drabble : Besties 24/01 *Part 12

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Besties


Manik was really angry on his best friend. How could she not come to his room for consecutive four days? Point taken, that his mother was staying in their shared apartment and for past fifteen days he has behaved like a total jerk. First glorifying his latest girl friend by deliberately asking Nandini to mess around in front of his mother and then asking her to stay in the guest room instead of their room. Sharing the same room doesn't mean they had sex. No they haven't ever had sex. They were besties for god sake. Sometimes they did kiss on their lips to irritate each other but they never had sex. He wont deny the fact that the idea of making love to her was appealing and that sometimes in the middle of the night he had to get up and use the washroom to find his release and took cold shower to subsidize the heat he felt cuddling with her during their sleep. But at the end of the day she was the only one with whom his friendship has been consistent. And that was the reason he didn't want his mother to hate her thinking they were messing around with each other. She was too precious to lose. He could still remember the hurt in her eyes when he asked her to use the guest room. But that doesn't mean, she will stop coming to his room altogether and specially when he was ill. He needed her the most when he fell sick. He lived only on her homemade chicken stew. And from past freaking four days he was unable to eat any freaking thing that his mother cooked. Chicken stew deprivation brought another wave of anger and he cursed under his breath. "Fine" he thought. Let her be happy in that stupid guest room, she can stay there for rest of her life he won't care.


Lemme know if i should continue this... a very very short story <3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Eeeps, this is so cute! Is that even a question? Of course you should continue it! The plot sounds really interesting, and Manik is so adorable <3 I can't help but "aww" at this.
Hope you continue! This sounds fantastic, really.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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^ aww thanks a ton for the encouragement :p
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Continue plzzz... It's really nice :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow I love the concept ! Please continue :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Plz continue! Really wanna read further! Manan - Besties!
Manik is cute!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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How can you even ask if you should continue?OF COURSE you should!😃

I love this, the AU is really nice- i am really into the idea of them as friends first.😊

I cannot wait to see where you take this story- please continue soon and do PM me if possible when you do!😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awww...this is so cute..!
Do continue but not a very very short story...story would be OK. 😛 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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"we kiss to irritate each other".seriously manik
this guy seriously need to check his head.
Plz update soon, the concept is so unique. loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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great concept...please do continue...😊

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