16+ MaNan Drabble : Besties 24/01 *Part 12 - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Besties

"I have witnessed many girls and their behavior with Manik and his behavoiur with them. But none of them seemed to be real, who really cared for the Manik as a person. But you care for him. Not his looks, not his status, but the real Manik in person". Nandini's eyes started to flood once again hearing such a heart felt confession. Manik is such an *** she thought. Trying to eye wash his mother, who knows him in and out. "I have seen him looking at you every night when you retired to your room. I have seen that frustration in his eyes. And the longing I saw until you closed the door of the room. Not for once he took his eyes off you and yet he saved you from PDA".

His mother took the veggies from her hand and put it under running water while she continued to speak to Nandini. "I know how extrovert he is and I was surprised to see the respect in his eyes whenever he is close to you".

Nandini felt a little shy hearing his mother's words. She loved how Manik looked at her, all tender and mushy. Always took care of her. When she cried instead of wiping her tears, he wiped her running nose even with his bare hand then kissed her nose instead of her lips or cheeks. He held her hair while she puked inside the pot during her cycle and made sure to tuck her in the bed puffing up the pillows. And not only that he gets her hot water bag and place it under her hips. That's what best friends are meant for. To be with them all the time in every situation no matter how much you are in deep shit.


Edited by -Koeli_Appy- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
I really love this story, I wish your chapters were longuer though, it's too short :( I want to read more because it's really intresting !
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Posted: 10 years ago
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So so so beautiful story..:'( this update..hats off ...the last paragraph..hands down...this..i tell you..is definitely a master peice..chota packet and bada dhamaka..i have a thing for drabbles..and you made it reach to a higher level..
Ok enough of my blabberings..
Awesome update..
Keep writing..
Waiting for the next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
Adorable update...
Eagerly waiting for the next one 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35


Besties

"Damn it, why I am thinking about the person who doesn't care a shit about me. She is happily reading her book and snoozing all day along...hmph" Manik throw his sixth pillow again the door which dropped in the floor with a thud.

Taking a deep breath he looked at his phone that was in vibration mode. It was the 15th time his talk, fair, super sexy girl friend was calling him. He knew she wanted to come and meet him and maybe she had some other plans in her mind like the word that starts with S. He placed the phone on his chest and thought of something. Wont it set his best friend right if he calls his girl friend, well not really a girl friend Lizzi was nothing but a pastime and they both knew it. But well how about calling her in the house and shut the freaking door on that i-don't-care-about-you-anymore woman. And then maybe after half a hour he can ask lizzi to leave before kissing her thoroughly which might look like they have made out in the room and in the same bed which Nandini hs left it cold since his mother has arrived.

"eww no", the thought of sharing the same bed with someone was a bad prospect when the woman he only wanted at the moment was his we-are-stranger best buddy. He wanted to hold her in his arms badly and to get her only for few nano seconds he was ready to get up from the bed, open the damn door, ignoring her mother, going straight where she was, and then kissing the hell out her and demanding her warmth.

There goes the 7th pillow. Guess the poor door begging Manik to stop hitting the poor thing. The pillow fell on the floor with the sad crumble.


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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
Yay!! You updated and that too Manik's pov!
I'm hooked to this drabble...really adorable.. 👏 👏
Edited by punya25 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
its a different ine..
nd eager to read more continue soon..
plzzz😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
Aww so sweet manik is. poor pillows geeting punishment for no reason. update soon. Loving this series plz cont soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
U updated!!!!!! Was waiting! Nice update! Manik's mom accepts Nandini! Eager to read more!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
Omg, 2 updates! Love it.
Continue soon :)

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