16+ MaNan Drabble : Besties 24/01 *Part 12 - Page 8

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Update plz! Hav been waiting since long!
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Koeli,you count i am praying for you...😛
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Besties
Part Eight


Manik scrambled up from the bed keeping their photo safely under his pillow and stumbled toward the door. He filled his lungs inhaling the aroma of the stew. Little smile crept across his lip showing his sexy dimple. He peeped outside to see his baby girl fussing around the kitchen. He took that opportunity to ogle her in her tight baby blue shorts and white tank top, which did absolutely nothing to hide her beautiful baby smooth skin. Her hair was tied in a messy bun exposing her gorgeous long neck. He licked his lips and then smacked himself mentally to calm his growing desire towards his best friend. But when she looks this adorable it is not half to want her with every fiber of his body.

As if sensing his hot gaze Nandini froze in her place suddenly. She turned to check the door hundred percent sure that she felt him. But the door was shut. She frowned towards the door for few seconds then mentally slapped herself for day dreaming about him leaning on the door frame looking at her lovingly. "Khadoos" she muttered under her breath before tasting the stew. Her eyes lit up and she beamed looking at the stew feeling satisfied with the taste. She took few more spoonful of soup.

"oye moti mere liye kuch to chod", Manik stomped his foot on the ground muttering to himself. "don't you dare have another spoon or else I would get out of this room and snatch the bowl from your hand", he muttered further throwing angry as well as pleading looks towards Nandini's back. Luckly Nandini filled the bowl and placed it in the tray arranging the cutleries and napkins. Manik quickly closed the door and jumped in the bed covering himself with the quilt from top to bottom. He tried to catch his breath when he heard shuffling noise coming from the door.

"Mom please I don't want your khichidi", he knew it was nandini but he played innocent.

Nandini bit her lips and walked towards his bed. She cleared up the side table and placed the tray before touching the quilt to uncover him.

"Mom...", manik frowned immediately seeing Nandini hovering over him.

"What the hell are you doing here?" he showed his false anger.

He was really angry on her before. But once he saw her making his favourite stew all his anger evaporated. How can he still remain angry on his baby girl when she was taking care of him. She always took care of him when he was unwell. Probably she was respecting his decision not to come to him in front of his mother. He thought.

"Where is mom?" he asked.

"Umm, she went out for jogging".

"And what exactly are you doing in my room?"

"Cant you see? I got stew for you".

"Why? Where were you when I was bruning in fever for last couple of days?"

She didn't say anything, just looked down.

"I don't want your stew, get out of my room".

She still was looking down.

"you don't love me any more nandu. You don't even care what happens to me. I thought atleast you care".

"I care for you Mannu", she chocked and looked towards him.

When their eyes met, his heart skipped a beat. She was crying damn it.

"I care that's why I am here despite of your shitty behavior. I care that's why I got you your stew. I care that's why I tolerate that stupid s**tty blonde. I care that's why I don't punch you on your nose for sleeping with her. I care because you are the best thing I have and the best thing I could ever have Mr Manik Malhotra. But you are an ***. You don't want to have the stew then fine, call you miss big whatever and ask him to make you some food, which you can put down. Ask her to stay with you and have...and have..."

Manik caught her arms and pulled her to him. Unable to balance herself she fell directly on his chest. Getting the opportunity he caged her with his arms putting them around her waist.

Her eyes become wide realizing how close they are. Not that they haven't been that close, but something was different the way she fell and the way his hand was gazing her exposed skin between her tank top and shorts.

"And have what?" he asked looking at her directly in his eyes.

She tried to get up but Manik spun her around. She lay on her back and Manik was pressing himself on her top. "Manik..."

"And have what baby girl?"

She tried to wiggle and break free but he caught her hands and pinned them on the bed.

She could see him accumulating the saliva and was horrified thinking what was coming next. He was about to spit on her lips.

"Eww Manik no...please don't", she pleaded.

"You crossed your limit baby girl. You pissed me off".

"Eww manik I swear I will through up on your face if you do that horrible thing", she warned.

"We will see", with that he worked more in his mouth and then slowing close the gap between them.

"No Man..." she gasped unable to comprehend what just happened. Her eyes flew open and her breath caught.

"This is what", his breath kissed her lips before he touched her petals with his. Her eyes drifted close while her hand clutched his hair.

Edited by -Koeli_Appy- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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RES...
*unres*

sabse pehle tell me ki tumhare charan*feet* kaha hai* i wanna touch dem...

like seriously itna impatiently toh maine kabhi apne result ka wait ni kia jitna is update ke liye kia hai...

n i must sayyy dude i just loved it yaar...

ur concept is so damnn unique and perfect at d same time...👏

d moment she uncovered manik i was like... oh yeahh finally dey gonna "TALK"...

n wen nandu thought he is gonna spit in her mouth again i was like yaaiieekksss... * y dis writer loves dis thingy so much* it so damnnn ewww thingy...

but den wen dey kissed... i was dead...

i so love uh for dis yaar...🤗

now again... charan kaha hai btado cz i wanna plead ki pls pls pls... next update jaldi dena... 😭😭

Edited by manan_flab - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank u so so much...i love you...🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thnk god..finally.. It seemed like ages.. Thanks fr updating.. N ya this ws awesome!!! '
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Posted: 10 years ago
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At last god listen my pray...i am dead now...it was that awesome..i wanna kiss your hand...❤️
thank you so so much...
it was dead drop gorgeous ufff...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#78
finally u update
wonderful update
loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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atlast u updated...ws so missin updates...n omg its WORTH THE WAIT..!! SUPER LOVED it n the ending...gosh u ended on a high note..plz continue soon..!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Finally an update!! Thank you so much! I simply love this story but I'm commenting for the first time. :P Apologies.
Such a long update. You deserve a hug 🤗
Are you going to keep it this long from now on? I know these are drabbles but was just hoping. ;)

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