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Posted: 10 years ago
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Mi...Unres jaldi! <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Cjitra! <3 Thanks! <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: BeyondWords


Aha? I will take away the dubbas then! :)
Be my guest!😳


You think I believed? :P I did! <3
I was like you better have! Imma a sentimental fool (like you😆)


Ahahaha! Now don't reveal the inner me in the forum! :P I have a rep to maintain! :P
On a serious note, we both were just meant to be! I am definitely meeting you soon, lemme become successful first and then we could hug each other (not virtually) We are just apt for each other...That's why I am your baba and you meri Amma! 🤗 Meri neighbor :P

A rep? What rep? You have a rep? SINCE WHEN😲🤪
Imma joking😆
We need to! I swear the day we are meeting is the day I am breaking your bones😆 (by hugging🤗)
We actually made for each other! Bhaad mein jaaye yeh zaleeim zamana! Salamaat rahe dostana humara🤪 (no copyright issues please😆)
If only you were my neighbour🥺


Absolutely :P
Mein toh fooli nah sawari😆
That's how they say it right?


And I love Amma!
And I love Baba (here goes the saga again)


I Know...We were meant to be! <3 :)
You and me are meant to be together <3 Forever <3
LOOL! I think we have established this by now😆 (esp after a certain *cough*)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: BeyondWords


Stalking offline cause I was pestering you? :o
Alright! :)
Aha? That's too sweet yaa! <3


Oh! Like that or what?!


Stalking offline because I went to have dinner and then I had to study, but clearly got SO much done🤪
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I know! I am just that amazing when it comes to knowing you! :P

P.S.-As if you aren't the patient of the same!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: gujjupari

I am not crying! There is just something in my eyes and I am desperately trying to get it out! You know I have been crying a lot for the past two days right? This is not settled 🤔

Smarty pants! <3 You know what? I love you MORE now! <3

Paas Aaiye Ke Hum Nahi Aayenge Nahi Aayenge Baar Baar

Baahe Gale Mein Daalke

Hum Roley Zaar Zaar


^^ This are my favourite lyrics of the entire song! I have a reason, but me not telling. (This is for making me cry🥺)

Are you crying after reading this or are you crying after getting the dedication? :o

I wanna know! :)

I love that bit the most too...don't copy me! :P

Anyways! There are two kinds of love that you have so poignantly portrayed in this OS. The undying and platonic love and the other being the love a parent holds for their offspring; endless and selfless.

I don't realize what I write till you review, honestly! <3


I can't imagine the emotional pain someone like "Manik" has to go through in such a situation. The feeling of being torn between his wife; his love and his daughter; the sole symbol of their love.

That was the sole purpose to pen this down. We all know how lonely Fab 5 members are and so they won't want their children to live in the same world like they did in their youth, without family.


Your love for realism is thorough in this OS Iptisha! I can't even! My words are failing to make any sense at the moment! I have always learned to expect the unexpected when it comes to the writer that is Iptisha! I had always associated the song with separation, but never to this extent! You never fail to amaze me😳

I actually don't keep saying about it anymore, maybe because I let things reflect! You calling me Iptisha sound so damn hilarious! :P

Really now? When did I become a writer? (I learnt saying that from you, so no need to cringe)

I am too extreme in emotions I guess! <3


The bit where both the characters are touching each other's faces, was so heartbreaking! I couldn't even see the screen properly! Aaah! Babaaa! Yeh tune kya kiya!

We can have these stories...Preet and this one, in Pyaar Tuney Kya Kiya and YHA kind of shoes...nowadays they are anyway letting the audience down! :P

Broke my tear ki tanki🤪... And Orchids (you remembered?)

I thought it was dry! :P

When did I ever forget? :O


I cried towards the end as well! When Khushi-Arnab went to the grave-ward! I don't think I can write more! At subtle attempt at humor with the "I am better"... Kill me now! Please!

I wanted to write Ammy-Basket, but I can't imagine KaSh like this yaa, so ArShi even if we both...*ahem*


I'd feel like a fool if I praised your writing skills, because lets face it, they are BeyondWords. But I am a fool, so I will say it anyways! You think there is not enough emotion in here? Any more and I will be the next Niagara falls! And your concepts and writing just keeps getting better with every shot baba!

Thappad khana hai? I am an amateur, and you have grown immensely with time...<3

I read Preet and now I won't hear a word from you about your skills...they are just Beyond words..get that clear! :P


This is for you:

This the best Return Gift Ever! <3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: gujjupari


Stalking offline because I went to have dinner and then I had to study, but clearly got SO much done🤪



Oh! You'll manage well! <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing os
Beautifully written
I can't stop my tears..

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