||Mulaqat|| One Shot - Page 2

Originally posted by: gujjupari

A BIG FAT RES

A/N: Okay I know this was just...! Anyway, I just liked one thing about this piece, which is that the hero is anonymous. For MaNan-ians, he is Manik and for the rest, he is Dhruv. That's the only thing I liked anyway!

Thanks for reading! :)

THis is cheating :p 😆

manik for mananian n Dhruv for Dhuvian 😲

be it whoevr this is blissful

should i mention it broke my heart

this is ur best i could say for a OS

& the best part ASR n Khushi 😆

Originally posted by: Sanely_Insane

Reserve.

Edit. You girls write so effin brilliantly! Pari and You I mean.

Yes Yes! I know you are talking about Pari! I got your address from Preet! :P
I am glad I got your PM, otherwise I would have missed out on this perfection.

You are TOO kind! 🤗
Angst angst everywhere, can I wish for anything more? :D

I am not reallly sure if I can write anything else! :P
My favorite, the song you used, Lag ja gale. AAAHHH! You synchronized the lyrics with their emotions, my god was that brilliant or what? :O

Mine too! I played it all the while I was writing! :D

Involuntarily, she moved further on to the left side as she indicated with her eyes for him to lie down next to her. He obliged, of course but not before taking out her iPod from his pocket. Placing one earphone in her ear and the other one in his, he played the music which she had been listening to since the past three weeks.

She looked up, as he hummed the tune while making her comfortable in his arms.

She held him tight, not wanting to leave, while he caressed her face, promising her to be happy and keep Khushi happy. They touched each other for the last time and hugged again.

^^This particular bit, moistened my eyes. You're not forgiven for making me cry. Nahi! 😳
Can I hug you? :o

I guess I can! :)

Its blissful yet heart wrenching. When you know the most important person in this world is going to leave you forever and you can't do anything to not let that happen. That feeling you experience, that helplessness, that frustration, it all came out so well. Brilliant Iptisha. Brilliant.

Your words mean a lot! I have been reading your reviews in certain someone's work (Oh Certain someone, stop reading others comments! :P)

I am not a good reader, not even a bit. So this is something I really apprciate in you! Also, I don't know I feel you write too! Share your work with the forum as well, please? :o

P.S. Were you an IPK fan?
P.P.S. Mujhe Di na bula...please. 😆

P.S.- Napz! I have been a constant reader there, once upon a time, but more into the blogs!

P.P.S.-Toh Kyaa Bulau? Naam Toh Bataya Nahi Aapne. By the way, how are you so sure that I am younger than you? :o

Originally posted by: BeyondWords

What Are you Doing Here? Did I send the PM to you as well? Shit! This was meant to be a surprise! :"(

Originally posted by: zaya-firdose

Omg

Just fabulous yaar

Great job dear

Superb

Totally different story

Really bang on os

Awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome Superb

Beautifully penned down

Thanks for pm

Keep writing more

I would love to read more

Originally posted by: Parud26

Ok. I literally have tears streaming down my face!!!

where, when, how on earth did you learn to write so beautifully?!?

Today I understood the meaning of, "Beauty lies in the eyes of the Beholder" It is you who are beautiful, especially at heart, to feel the pain too deep.

honestly, I have no words to describe this piece of writing. all I can say is that it hit me write in the feels 😭😭

All I can say is...you are too kind, indeed!

you showed us beautifully a mother's undying love for her child & nicely done with the whole Arnav and kushi concept 👏

I wanted to mention them as they are way TOO PhAmOuS here! :)

as much as I hate reading these type of stories (cos it makes me all depressed), I love reading them at the same time.

Well same is with me, as much as it breaks something in me when I write, I still enjoy those FEELS! <3

I just can't right now. even though manik is fictional character, I can't even imagine how he's feeling 😭

I just said, you are beautiful at heart to let it touch you!

thank you for writing/sharing this piece 😊 and do write more!
and thank you for the PM lovely! 😛

Oh no issues! I am glad you found this worth reading! :)

...gonna stop blabbering now and get some tissues 😭

Nah! You weren't blabbering even a bit! <3

Please tell me your name? :o

Originally posted by: TheShipWeirdo

Res!