MaNan OS: Sun And The Moon

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ForeverForU

@ForeverForU

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

OMG..you wrote it so fabulously...I can really imagine it as a scene..Manik hogging Chachi k haath ke chhole and Nandu falling for him..the Sun and the Moon seem so apt for these two going by their characteristics😳

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shalbi

@shalbi

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

what a perfect definition of relation they share...

loved it..

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greeshma

@.ishqbulava.

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: zohasad2.0

thank u so much Greeshu (I hope I can call u that) means a lot to me <3

No you can't 😆

welcome deary and you have to write more otherwise 😈

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Jia Roh

@dewcute

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

This os was different... ❤️

This os was amazing...❤️

i loved the sun and moon concept...❤️

a standing ovation to your different way of story telling...❤️

It was an awesome work👏

waiting for your more works

jiya😛

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Zoha Sadaqat

@zohasad2.0

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: zaya-firdose
Omg
Superb
Awesome dude
Just fabulous

thanks dear😃

Originally posted by: Malika.Dua
What a beautiful written piece of writing 😃
totally loved it!
The words, feelings, emotions, everything is described beautifully
This is what you call short and sweet
keep writing 😳

lol..u write better than me...still thanks yaar😃

Originally posted by: Snigs.

This is really amazing OS. I loved how you showed the relation between Sun and Moon and also how you connected it with fire flies. Nandini's pov was penned down so beautifully and this OS is so relatable to the show too. Fabulous👏👏

thanku so much yaar😃

Originally posted by: gujjupari
The last few lines of this OS gave me the jitters! That was brilliant gurl! Hope to see you writing more on this show😳

thanks dear😃

Originally posted by: Desigirl_21
Amazing OS👏I just loved the whole sun and moon concept, Nandu the moon and Manik the sun makes so much sense😳I really loved the last line, it was beautiful

thanks 😃

Originally posted by: nicky13
Aww that's really very sweet ... Sun and moon ... Yes infact they r like sun and moon :)

thanks Nicky :)

Originally posted by: shalbi
what a perfect definition of relation they share...
loved it..

thanks😃

Originally posted by: ForeverForU
OMG..you wrote it so fabulously...I can really imagine it as a scene..Manik hogging Chachi k haath ke chhole and Nandu falling for him..the Sun and the Moon seem so apt for these two going by their characteristics😳

thanks dear...I so want Manik to eat Chachi's chole and have fun with Rishabh.😃

Originally posted by: pickachu
Loved the os!

thanku😃

Originally posted by: dewcute
This os was different... ❤️
This os was amazing...❤️

i loved the sun and moon concept...❤️

a standing ovation to your different way of story telling...❤️

It was an awesome work👏

waiting for your more works

jiya😛

Thanks jiya😃

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Bushra Iqbal

@Sanely_Insane

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

The connection between the Sun and the Moon was perfection. ⭐️

You wrote it so well, her thoughts, the realization she went through, and i can totally imagine Manik being a good obedient boy and eating the cholays. 😆

It was beautiful Zohaaa...🤗

Write more, more, more! :-)

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Zoha Sadaqat

@zohasad2.0

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Sanely_Insane
The connection between the Sun and the Moon was perfection. ⭐️
You wrote it so well, her thoughts, the realization she went through, and i can totally imagine Manik being a good obedient boy and eating the cholays. 😆
It was beautiful Zohaaa...🤗

Write more, more, more! :-)

awww...thanku so much😃

I myself also loved the bit of Manik eating cholas and having a nice time with her family...so immensely cute.😆😳

btw just random, what is ur name? I don't know much names out here so I tend to get confused.😆